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VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated (Page 27)

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
superb update... it was quite emotional.. everybody's feeling came out well... I really lliked jeevika staying there... loved it.. now waiting for next part when virat will come to know  about maanvi's condition.  Virat vanshika and maanvi scene... i want trio's scene...

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by uniquebluerose

Ok so you finished the flashback with the diagnosis her!!!!!

Actually i loved your description of Viren's feelings for Maanvi and how Jeevika felt when she came to know...

Still wonderful was your description of Virat train of thoughts and his realization that he is not angry with Maanvi but himself...and  i don't know if it was intentional but somewhere he thinks his bandariya!!!!
awww so cute of him of course he was falling for him can any one doubt that!!!!!

I loved your update do update more!!!!


Thanks for the wonderful comments. Aiks, I haven't finished my flashback yetEmbarrassed More of flashback to come, I hope I don't bore you with the flashback scene... Btw the his bandariya was intentional and you caught it well. She was always his Bandariya, just a matter of time...Big smile


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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Reallly reallly enjoyed that i cant believe virat yet doesnt kno abwt manvi pls show sme virmab scenes thank and do pm me wen u update

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
awww...loved it...plz  continue

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -RabiaKSGKaJen-

been readinng thiss FF on my iPhonee, anndd noww heree ii amm commentinngg <3 yaaarr, imm lovinngg this FF soo mucchh. ii lovee howw virat andd maanvi are mr.&mrs. vadheraa. ahaha thee part ii founndd funny whenn maanvit thought virat was talkinn notess on how to improvee his kissing skilss. LOL soo virmanisshh. arwwhh theeyy aree soo sweeet. understannd each othaa soo well. the tea incidennt, gladd thaahh she madee aa decent tea thiss time for her hubby ;)
flashback- ii lobbee maanvi soo mucchh, she wennt upto dadaji anndd stood up for virat. jusstt amazinng of her doinng thaah. buhh virat; yaaarr his GHUSSA. hee took everythingg wrong. youu portaryedd virat's thoughts soo well. OMG! shess inn hospital andd goh leukemiaa. wondaa howw virat's reactionn will be :S beautofully writeenn xx
updatee soope sooon. ii amm lovingg this FF soo mucchh <3


Thanks for your time to read and to comment Rabia, I also just started reading your OS earlier. I m really happy that you liked my FF so far. I know reading long post and commenting from IPhone can be a pain, thanks so much for taking the trouble. Means alot for me.

Will try to update the next part soon Big smile
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
that was beautiful dear.
and there is no room for improvement because it was just perfect!
loved it and reli can't wait till the next chapter :)
thanks for the pm
tc
xoxo
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
omg that was amazing!!! thank you for the pm :)
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethis

superb update... it was quite emotional.. everybody's feeling came out well... I really lliked jeevika staying there... loved it.. now waiting for next part when virat will come to know  about maanvi's condition.  Virat vanshika and maanvi scene... i want trio's scene...


Thanks for you lovely comments. Glad you liked it. Virat will know of Manvi's condition soon and will try to give a trio scene soonSmile

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