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VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated (Page 23)

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaimah

loved it!
please pm me !

Thanks yaar, will PM you when I updateSmile

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelicgirl

ClapClapOMG this is such a lovely story..hope they replace u as a writer when they get married :P lol if u tuk Dr. Shashank of DMG he is Inder in EHMMBH now.. lol.. love the story and d way u present it..btw pls PM me wen u do d next.. and im new here.. lookin frward fr mre... Star


Thanks angelicgirl for the wonderful compliment and welcome to the forum. Really glad that you liked it. Will definitely PM you when I update. Btw there are many other talented writers here in this forum, you should read all of them.

Do check out this link where you can find other wonderful creations.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2457501
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shehroon_riaz

OMG, first of all; thank you for sending me a PM :)
Otherwise; I would have failed to read again such wonderful writing by you. Loved every single word of this to the core. It was so nicely presented. Even though, it was short; its the quality that matters. This gave such an important part of the story. The flashback was just awesome. That was literally the the main bit of this. Without it, this was incomplete. 
Loved Maanvi's confrontation the most and then the end... please continue. I'm really desperate to find out what happened next as Viraat had left the house in anger...

Please keep writing and PM me again when you update :)


Thanks dear... I m so happy that you liked it & reading your comments means alot to me.  Will try to update the next part soon.Smile
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by uniquebluerose

Hey that was very emotion packed episode and i loved every bit of it!!!!

It was wonderful update and loved the way Maanvi spoke to dadaji and curious to know if there was any effect of all this on dadaji !!!!

And Manvi what happened to that sweety pie!! is this the first time they found out about the disease!!!

eager and well once again will like to add loved your update regarding the feeling or opinion of Virat on Maanvi and the confidence Maanvi shows on Virat on giving him another chance!!! 


Thanks dear, glad you liked it. somehow I felt that I didn't express Manvi's confrontation with Dadaji as much as I wanted. Will try to update the next part soon.Smile
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rizvigal

wow this is wonderful!!! pm me when u continue 

Thanks yaar, will PM you when I updateSmile
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meriyaar

Loved it as usual!
the flashback was sooo interesting i just loved the confrontation between maanvi and dadaji!
and then there little dispute in the hospital with the doctor LOL
it was a very good chapter, really enjoyed it!
you're wonderful writer, can't wait for the next part :)
thanks for the pm
tc
xoxo


Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment, glad that you liked it...Smile

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desi_angel90

Jeezzz I was sitting on the edge of my chair after reading the part where Virat left... This is tooo much.. I wanna know what happened next hahaha.. Thank you for the lovely update and please don't make me wait too long :) 


Sorry for keeping you on the edge but will try to update the next part soonSmile

Thanks for your lovely comment yaar.
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivu124

please pm me wen u write again 
add me to ur buddy list



Thanks yaar, will add you soonSmile

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