Originally posted by: preethis
Wow its very nice!!!!!!!!!!! very nice update loved it... waiting for next part...
Thanks yaar, Glad you liked it😊
Originally posted by: preethis
Wow its very nice!!!!!!!!!!! very nice update loved it... waiting for next part...
Originally posted by: Khushi15
MIND-BLOWING...!!!
Love it...!!!!
Plz continue asap and PM me...
Thanks for this PM...
Originally posted by: missingremix
Loved it completely...i liked how u build a beautiful bond between vanshika and manvi..i love their scenes on screen n so want 2 develop such a bond on d show as well..manvi confronting dadaji on virat's behalf was awesome n virat's anger of my!!
Please do continue soon as u left this on a cliffhanger...thanx for d pm..continue soon plzzz n pm me ven u do!!Happy New Year!!
Originally posted by: ashred12
yayyy...finally fb...thanx a lot..loved every bit...waiting for more... :)
Originally posted by: angelicgirl
👏👏OMG this is such a lovely story..hope they replace u as a writer when they get married :P lol if u tuk Dr. Shashank of DMG he is Inder in EHMMBH now.. lol.. love the story and d way u present it..btw pls PM me wen u do d next.. and im new here.. lookin frward fr mre... ⭐️
Originally posted by: shehroon_riaz
OMG, first of all; thank you for sending me a PM :)
Otherwise; I would have failed to read again such wonderful writing by you. Loved every single word of this to the core. It was so nicely presented. Even though, it was short; its the quality that matters. This gave such an important part of the story. The flashback was just awesome. That was literally the the main bit of this. Without it, this was incomplete.
Loved Maanvi's confrontation the most and then the end... please continue. I'm really desperate to find out what happened next as Viraat had left the house in anger...
Please keep writing and PM me again when you update :)
Originally posted by: uniquebluerose
Hey that was very emotion packed episode and i loved every bit of it!!!!
It was wonderful update and loved the way Maanvi spoke to dadaji and curious to know if there was any effect of all this on dadaji !!!!And Manvi what happened to that sweety pie!! is this the first time they found out about the disease!!!eager and well once again will like to add loved your update regarding the feeling or opinion of Virat on Maanvi and the confidence Maanvi shows on Virat on giving him another chance!!!
Originally posted by: rizvigal
wow this is wonderful!!! pm me when u continue
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