Tumhari Disha

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Posted: 19 years ago

 

hey DKAddict..ur good at making poetry yaar...please give us some more poems...

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Posted: 19 years ago

dk addict it is really goodπŸ‘

ashish has to read itπŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
simply awsome...but teh best part

"come to me..come to me"πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago

Here's one I always liked... sorry, don't know the author...

How then can I tell you of my love?

Strong as an eagle, soft as a dove

Patient as the pine tree who stands in the sun

And whispers to the wind, "You are the one!"

DK oughta try his hand at writting love letters to Disha- might help...

-DKaddict

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Posted: 19 years ago

Here's another one from me- *AHEM*- for the show! πŸ˜‰ No funny ideas, please, people!

LOVE, UNTOUCHED

love, my sweet love

the kind of innocent youth

warm as the embrace of the sun

on a perfect spring day

 

love, my beautiful love

trusting and sure of itself

as a young child with its mother

as a youth journeying out into the world

 

love, my wild love

dancing in swirls of ecstasy

running through green hills in May

staring at timeless stars in rapture

 

love, my bold love

hearts beating wildly

a promise held

a future wide open

 

love, my true love

the world at our feet

all my dreams are within reach

for everything is there in your eyes

This was inspired by one of my fav pieces of music, Canon in D Major, composed by Johann Pachelbel. You can find samples on the web to listen to, if you like. The version I have is a simply heavenly symphonic one. This composition has much depth and meaning, and it will vary as you listen more and more.

Then read the poem, and close your eyes as you listen and imagine DK and Disha (or whom ever you prefer πŸ˜‰) dancing, etc. to the music....

-DKaddict, who's really disappointed with the color selection available here...

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Posted: 19 years ago

Very Good!!!πŸ‘

Keep  writing these wonderful pieces! Just love it.

I'm sure if DK gets to read any of these then you'll be flooded with what u know! If u want I can send a few to cheer u up!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Mink who is  enjoying reading your poems.πŸ˜ƒ

 

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Posted: 19 years ago
dkaddict ashish wil surely blush by reading ur poems😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

DK does have a laptop... do you think he's found our site?? πŸ˜‰ Ashish, on the other hand- who knows what he reads when he pops by for a visit. Dears, please do not get the wrong idea here!! I am not writing for anyone specific!! Though if someone specific appreciates my humble poetic offerings, well, then, hey! Bonus!! πŸ˜ƒ

-DKaddict, who's feeling a bit 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
 OUR FORUM HAS BECOME A CENTER FOR BUDDING CREATIVE WRITERS AND POETSπŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago

πŸ₯± 

Now I lay me down to sleep

My fuzzy brain- it just won't keep!

If I dream of DK before I wake

Another poem for you all I'll make!

Hehehehe..... my eyeballs are starting to do funny things- time to hit the hay! Its nearly 4:30 am here-

-DKaddict, signing off...