Tumhari Disha


Tumhari Disha
Tumhari Disha

poetry for the Ds - link added for music

dkaddict Senior Member

Joined: 21 January 2005
Posts: 610

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 4:07am | IP Logged


part 1, the seduction

softly, swiftly, you come to me

a sweet whispering breeze

playing with the tendrils of my hair

which I have loosened just for you


I hear a beckoning call

deep within my soul

as your presence glides across my flesh

curling into my being


I savor every moment

cherish every breath

lingering in the night air

in the intoxication that is you


come to me, come to me!

that I might live in the light of your eyes

that I might die in the warmth of your arms

knowing, at last, that I was not alone!


part 2, the rude awakening

but all too quickly, you have gone

a fleeting shadow in the night

so I must tidy myself up

for the demands of the world


again you have wandered away from me

leaving your voice to echo inside

a sorrowful chill creeps in

to all the places you used to be


life drags on

as I try to dull my senses

and hurry through my days

in the aching pain of your absense


a thought, an idea, a yearning dream

the wind has carried aloft my heart

and left me standing alone

in the cold, relentless march of time


-DKaddict, who's really annoyed at not being able to find the right color to fit the mood!!! Angry

Edited by dkaddict - 04 April 2005 at 8:02pm

samy74 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 4:30am | IP Logged


Cool Djaddict your posts are always cool and really funny they alwasy put a smile on my face


samyBig smile

AALIYAH786 Goldie

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Posts: 2188

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 4:46am | IP Logged

Sweet melody, imaginations running wild ......................

Edited by AALIYAH786 - 05 April 2005 at 1:31am
nikkitherealist Goldie

Joined: 21 February 2005
Posts: 1015

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Hey, that's excellent.

'as I try to dull my senses' - are you trying to get him to hit the bottle again!!
Asian Princess Goldie
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Posts: 1732

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:16am | IP Logged

LOL that really cool dk addict !!!! Big smile Cool poems really go with the story of td

Love Asian Princess/ Dk ki Dewanni Big smileWink

.....Lata..... IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4149

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:45am | IP Logged

Big smile. Becky don't worry your name is already registered in the person's mind once, after the tete-a -teta you had on that day. Wink and you bet since someone's visiting the forums this will not be missed out that's for sure.

But anyways greaaaat job. Clap

LOL Lata

queen-bee Goldie

Joined: 07 March 2005
Posts: 2442

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:49am | IP Logged

Now from a humorous and witty writer comes a most amazing poetry,

wow, excellent work,wonderful array of thoughts.You have penned your thoughts very beautifully.

Now some ideas for the makers of TD--They should put a scene in TD where dk should be seen with a paper and pen and actually penning a few lines and humming it. OR DK standing in front of mirror and DK to DK

come to me, come to me!

that I might live in the light of your eyes

that I might die in the warmth of your arms

knowing, at last, that I was not alone!

come to me, come to me!

((((OH! love just come back to me!)))))





dkcrazy Groupbie

Joined: 04 March 2005
Posts: 106

Posted: 30 March 2005 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Your poetry is really good.You are so talented.... I wish i could write something like that for my DK. Big smile

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