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FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE (Page 83)

smile1412 Goldie

Joined: 13 October 2005
Posts: 2206

Posted: 02 March 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Hi nmyra,

I have been a silent reader all these years and generally don't read ffs. ... But the story of ipkknd and the lead pair of Barun and sanaya have made me feel like a teenager once again I guess with their brilliant acting EmbarrassedLOL

I stumbled upon ur ff and read the complete story at one go!!!!

Your story moved me to tears! And I simply HAD to reply to this to compliment you for writing such an amazing story... Very  very well done indeed... Absolutely brilliant !!! You are a very creative writer. Congrats.

Is there any way I can follow your stories? Do let me know when you write more!


Edited by smile1412 - 02 March 2012 at 2:26am

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--Nargis-- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 17 July 2008
Posts: 13994

Posted: 07 March 2012 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Aww...Nymra...what a perfectly beautiful story.  I have been meaning to read it for some time now...and I am glad i read it one go!!  Loved it.   You are a splendid writer...and the songs you selected are highlight and enhance the words that weave the tale in your mind!!   I have to tell you, you made me CRY, LAUGH, and YELL, through out the story...not in that order...per say...but I thoroughly enjoyed it!! Thanks for a beautiful read!!


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schatten Senior Member

Joined: 07 November 2011
Posts: 402

Posted: 14 March 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
shes his number 1. beautifully rittn
gr8 ff

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nimra21 Senior Member

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 626

Posted: 16 April 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Okay. So I just read this FF in one go. I am supposed to be studying for a physics exam but that can be dealt with later. This is much more important. Haha! Simply amazing! I am completely floored. You are an absolutely amazing writer. Probably one of the best here. Everything was perfect. The music. The emotions. The language. The visual imagery. Loved it! And epilogue was so funny. Great writing.

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SweetSophie Senior Member

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 206

Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Nimmi...that has got to be the best ending ever. Aryan imitating his father and Arnav's payback for interrupting some much needed quality time (the man's still making up for those 6 months and more). Akaash...oh my god he speaks!!!! He understands the kid (with a mother like mamiji how could you not?) and the awkwardness of seeing your parents make out session. I think your decision not to give them a "miracle baby" was a really good choice. To me Aryan as he grows up will understand his adopted parents more than their own kid would, he's seen the crazyness, probably the pain as well. He's also the perfect combo of Arnav and Khushi at their best. Keep writing. 

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rkapoor1382 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 January 2012
Posts: 11949

Posted: 11 May 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Just read all the chapts n wow.
Glad I gt hold of this.

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essess Senior Member

Joined: 23 April 2012
Posts: 234

Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Damn IT! You made me cry when khushi was finaaly found in shimla. The words you use hit me sooo much!
AND then you made my day by getting htem to adopt such a wonderful kid who is soo like them both !


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pink.lotus Goldie

Joined: 04 March 2012
Posts: 2362

Posted: 12 May 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asumi

"She had never, ever given up on him. And he would be damned if he gave up on her"

that was soo awesome!!! how do you write soo well??? describe it the feelings with such perfect words!!! too good ya!!

before i forget- the song you chose- "what hurts the most" one of my fav songs. Rascal flatts's Why!, My Wish!, and this one- i just lOVE them. . . and i wouldn've found a more better story to relate with this song!!! Smile

brilliant baap- your way of writing!!

true words

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