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FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE (Page 81)

ashna27 Senior Member
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
perfect ending to a perfect story...of an imperfect life...

Oh hey...when are we doing the joint fiction thing? (this is divvy btw)- i was lookign forward to that idea of yours!

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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
LOVED THE ENDING! you are an amazing writer...do do do write more!Smile

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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Heheheh...another ASR!!!!perfect way to end the story...thank u sooo much for spending so much of ur time to rite for us...u r an amazing writer...i hope i havmany more of ur fictions in future for me to comment on!!!
felly_a Senior Member
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged

Some people called it causing trouble.

Aryan Singh Raizada called it leaving his mark.

And leave his mark he did.

He was after all a Raizada.

He couldn't really help it.

Just look at his parents.


I can't tell you how much a adore this cutie-pie mini-raizada!!! He is damn cute! I love how his personality is not just like his dads aka ASR but he has a perfect personality...a little from Khushi and a little from Arnav = Perfect personality!Embarrassed Both Mr. and Mrs. Raizada is happy with their son, Aryan! A perfectly happy family! 

You ended this beautiful story with a perfect ending!Clap I don't have enough words to express my feelings about your story..but i would like to say i really really really love your writing!! You truly have magic in the way of touching peoples heart through your writing!!

This beautiful story has ended but it will always be remembered and loved! I can tell that much!Embarrassed 

I'm really glad to be a part of this beautiful journey! Do pm me whenever you decide to write another beautiful story! Thanks for the pm! And take careSmile




Edited by felly_a - 22 February 2012 at 6:40am

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Jalebibaby Senior Member
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Awsme awsme writing nd a wonderful end.

Aryan fulfil al his parents wish as thr own son.
Lovd aryan a looot. Damn cute.
Arhi r stil njoying thr life with thr precious gift aryan.

Love to c akash as a chachu. Soo cute.

Awsme ending nd waiting 4 ur awsme writing more.

Thank you 4 pm.

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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
ha!! wow!! omg !! LOL

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Posted: 23 February 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
congrats...beautiful end to a beautiful story...

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Posted: 23 February 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
"im the kiddnaped reader so im gonna bake in the glory of being famous"

this was an incredible ending PI cud have got...
im totally in love for the cause of it ...its so true...Arnav n Khushi r two very strong ppl...Khushi has survived the unbouncy nature of God's will...sacrificing her love for Arnav's happiness.

it takes more than a will to do that...it takes an overzealous strength to be strong enough to overcome such fate...
n of course a heart that beats for him...

Arnav who lived through this coz he knew if she HAS given her's to him then he too has to revive HIS...his constant search prove that being selfish for love n happiness but of some else is worth fighting for...even if its the same person.
they nevr bow down coz their fortress is one cor of a love fixation job...
Aryan is a miracle baby...he's that hope which has now personified...
the bond of Arnav n Khushi stronger enough to melt n mould him in theirs...
Aryan is Arnav for me too...he's a curious case...passionate in takin life to wat it offered...n authority too...i never walked in my mum n dad's room without a knoch maybe since i was 2!!!!

Aryan is man buba!!!!..
suffering bond them n love holds them togetther...

Im so sad that PI has come to an end but all goood things do..to let better come in...
But PI is a special child N i hope it thus remains for you n for me as it will always be...this tym nothing was perfect yet imperfection has n will always be overpowering so no worries..Wink


*so i did it...i hope i get paid well...n next tym i want better cushions if im being kidnapped n held captive*

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