FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful dear!!

"Happy, without you!!!"" It has more effect when it came from Arnav!!

I'm totally flattered with this!! Emotional and lovely!!

Kushi is such an idiot more that he thought! Yes, correct!!!!
Thanks for the PM!

You should not have given that teaser, you knowπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hv no words to express how happy m feeling rite now...
still in d wonderland of their meet..hehe...
its really really awesome how u described their feeling...
about d next, wat can i say.. Bring it on...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
So intense! Loved it! Hope Khushi finally sees sense...update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous part loved it pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update
written beautifully
do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Nmyra
 
Thanks for this wonderful update. Loved it! Sorry i didnt comment on the previous chapter but I struggle to get access to typing some times.
 
Anyways, as said wonderful update. Loved ASRs reaction to Khushi and the way you described he's emotions as well.
 
Are you seriously thinking of ending this FF??? 😭😭😭😭😭 
 
Anyways, hope to see the next chapter up soon. xx 
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Posted: 12 years ago
"a man with two broken ribs and a lot of alcohol in his system to accompany his bruised heart."   

i thought that was good but then

"
Do I look like a man who's had his heart torn out?"


now THAT is BRILLIANT!!! πŸ‘ soo beautifully written!!!


and the way he showed it to her!! soo sweet!! loved every bit of it!! 
     


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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so beautiful that I was speechless !!!!!!
Loved the way you wrote and described Arnav and Khushi's feelings !!!!!!
Have no words for it !!!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh,,, WOW... again...

i'm a little dazed!!! you're giving me hope for the real show here!! oh good Lord!!!!!! :)

i can't wait for the next part!!! a love so deep... khushiii... arnav is hurtinggg :( they both are :(

lovely writing... beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is sooo amazing!!! her love for him is maybe more twisted and wonderful than his love for her... but they work!!! thanks for the PM