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Ashi- yuvi marriage & d accident!!(FIC)

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 3:00am | IP Logged
THIS IS MY FIRST FIC PLZ POST UR COMMENTS.

SCENE:-
Ashi is in a room getting ready because it is a big day. ASHI & YUVI ARE GETTING MARRIED. She is just getting her makeup done when yuvi calls....

Yuvi: hey sweets, are u ready?? i can't wait to see u.

Ashi: just 20 mins more dear. waise bhi shaadi ka time to ek ghante baad hai.

Yuvi: i know but i wish i could hurry it up

Ashi: hold on sabr ka phal meetha hota hai (cuts  the call)

Finally the moment arrives. Ashi comes down looking STUNNING. her bridal suit is coated with gold and she looks like a doll. she comes and eveyone stares at her in awe and all the men have their mouths dropped open.

Tia comes down with Ashi (tia was the one who designed Ashi's dress)Wink Ranveer is not looking at Ashi much but looking at the cute girl dressed in pink he loves so much but as fate wud have it he couldn't tell her, neither could she.

Tia looks at Ranveer and starts blushing and turns pink like strawberry marmalade.

The wedding takes place and there is happiness all around.
Yuvi and Ashi drive off in their car leaving Sonia, Tia and Ranveer sobbing.

Everyone consoles Sonia and the guests start leaving. Ranveer goes to the parking lot and sees that tia has aldready( her car is not in the parking lot)

With a heavy heart he drives off. Suddenly he stops. Reverses and sees  Tia's car  and then sees Tia helplessly looking at the car's engine. He walks up to her and says......

Ranveer: kya hum madad karein tia??

Tia( relieved): thank god tum aa gaye tia bahut scared ho gayi thi. kya tum tia ko lift de sakte ho??

Ranveer: kyun nahi

They drive of but on a 4 way they bang into a truck and there car rolls over a couple of times and comes to a stop.

People collect around while the truck driver escapes. Mr. Yashwant Dev comes to the scene and......


Edited by Ash_remix - 23 March 2006 at 3:01am

ME-MYSELF Senior Member
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Yeah, it is nice Clap Smile . Keep it up.
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 3:22am | IP Logged
your fic is interesting Clap Clap Clap
as we say ke first impression is the last impression Wink and ur fics first part is mind blassting

cant wait for the next part ranveer and tia ko kya hua
and that yashwant devil Dead kya karega yaar plz jaldi post karo
intezaar nahi kiya ja raha Big smile
funky n crazy IF-Rockerz
funky n crazy
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 4:32am | IP Logged
very nice!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 5:00am | IP Logged
its nice.... continue soon~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 6:22am | IP Logged
hmmmmmm sumthing quite intresting go on Wink
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 7:16am | IP Logged
cool continue it soon ashita
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 7:22am | IP Logged
cool......
fanfics create a hell lot of curiosity!
its a good idea! Embarrassed
if its yr first fic its good!
Keep it up! Clap

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