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once again gr8 part Clap

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Part 4

Abhi main bhagwan say shikayat kar hi rahi thi k sujal ki mama kamray main ayein………….unhain dekhtay hi mujhay kaffi embracement howi k who meray baray main kia soch rahi hoon gi k aik din main hi kitni zuban chalati hai
"I m sorry mama…………….main kissi ko hurt nahin karna chahti thi……..main tau bas bachoon ki misunderstanding door karna chahti thi…………..inh ko aisii bataoon say door rakhna chahti thi…..sauteli maa(step mother) hi sahi ………..likin MAA tau hoon na"
"kashish"……mama nay meray chehray ko uthaya…………."tumhain sabar or himmat say kaam lena hoga……………bachay or sujal abhi sameera ko bhula nahin payee…………tumhain sabar say bachoon or sujal k dil ko jeetna hoga………….yeh ghar bikhar(toot) chukka hai………….main chahti tau apni class k kissi family say bahu laa sakti thi likin who iss bikhray(tootay) howay ghar ko or bikhair(toor) deti……main nay tumhain iss hi liye pasand kiya k tum main who sari qualities hain jo iss ghar k loogon k liye zaroori hain……………or mujhay yakeen hai k tum iss imtehan ko poora karoo gi"
unhoon nay itnay pyar say kaha k main bhi muskura dii………
"mama ………..mujhay apnay sabar or himmat k koi idea nahin……..likin mujhay bachay bilkul apnay say lagay………or sujal………….unh k liye main kuch nahin keh sakti"
meri inh batoon pay mama bhi muskura diin
"iss baray main main yeh keh sakti hoon………..k jaisay who dekhta hai who waisay nahin hai…….who bohut accha insaan hai…………likin who apnay app tak rehna pasand karta hai…………iss ko hasil karna mushkil hai………likin impossible nahin"
door pay kissi nay knock kia tau mama khari hoo gain…….or hamaray "WOH" ander dakhil howay…………..or apnay kamray main mujhay dekh kar high temper ho gaye……….mera dil doob gay………….mama nay muskura kar mera haath pakar kar dabaya…………jaisay mujhay encourage kar rahi hoon…………..likin……….abh mujhay encouragement kahan say milti……….unhain dekh kar tau meri heart beat teez hoo rahi thi
"SUJAL……………..main aik bohut hi pyari si larki tumharay khawalay kar rahi hoon……….iss ka khayal rakhna"………………mama nay unh k kanday pay haath rakhtay howay kaha
"hmmmmm"……………koi answer na diya gaya
mama k janay k baad unhoon nay door close kar diya……………unh ki nazrain mujh hi par theen…………..dil nay soocha k kash main iss waqt duniya ki most beautiful larki hoti…………..so k who meray siwa kissi ko na dekh sakain……………….likin dimaag nay iss khush fehmi say rook liya………kyoun k main most beautiful tau choro………beautiful bhi na thi………….aik mamooli si face ki aam si larki…………….likin meray pass aik muhabbat bhara dil hai…………….dil nay cheekh kar kaha likin iss dil ki kaun sunta ahi
main iss baat ka wait karti rahi k who meray pass ayein……..mera ghoonghat uthain……mujh say baatain karain……….likin unhoon nay itna purana newspaper uthaya or aik taraf sofa per beth gaye
"KASHISH…………..app sonay k liye ko doosri jagha dekhain……..main akelay sota hoon……….app issi baat par khush hoyee k main app ko iss kamray amin bardhast kar raha hoon"
unhoon nay yeh sab cold tone main kaha……………meri ankhoon main ansoo aa gaye kyoun k meray khawab toot gaye thay…….jo k har larki shadi say pehlay shadi k baad k dekhti hai
"MR.SUJAL GAREWAL………………surely app apni pehli patni say bohut pyar kartay thay………app apnay saray jazbay wahan luta chukay hoon…….likin meray saray jazboon k kia…………….main tau pehli baar phoolon pay safar kartay yahan tak aye hoon"
unhain dekhtay howay main yeh sab soch rahi thi
"KASHISH…………app shayad ooncha sunti hain………..yaan app nay suna nahin…………..main apni baat repeat nahin karta"
kashish wahan say khari howi jahan usay galti say bethay gaya tha………….
Sujal nay newspaper side pay rakha or jotay doosray konay main phenkay……or night suit lay kar wash room main guss gaye…………or main nay apni mehndi lagay hathoon say sari cheezain sameti………janay kaisay
Sujal jab change kar k aye tau main unhain dekhti rahi………….who itnay handsome, dashing, good-looking thay…………….likin mujhay ignore kartay rahay………………..mujhay dekhay bina hi unhoon nay light off ki or night bulb on kar k soo gaye…………thori hi deer main who gehri neend soo gaye………….who soo rahay thay……..or chain say thay or main jaag rahi thi or bechain thi……………..abh samjh aya k baray loog theek hi kehtay thay………..jissay piya chahay wohi suhagan……………….ansoo beh rahay thay……………mujhay yaqeen tha kay meri koi ahh unh tak poohnch jaye gii…………likin unhoon nay kuch nahin kaha
Agar kissi k liye app ko tayar kiya jaye………………….intezar main palkain bechain jain…………….haathoon main mehndi lagayee jaye…………….or koi aye….or unh sab cheezon ko ignore kar k guzar jaye tau kaisay lagay ga………………..yeh koi nahin janta or na hi kissi ko bataya ja sakta hai…..
Jab ansoo khatam ho gaye tau main apni jagha say uthi…………or jo suit haath laga pehen kar aa gaye
Bed say cushion or blanket pakra or sofa par aa gaye………………..pehli bar sofa par so rahi thi tau neend bhi mushkiloon say aye

next:abh kaun sa imtehan hai kashish ka?

lol
ana


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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 10:16am | IP Logged
thanx parvati
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
ana nice part Clap and pls dont call di call me shruti

purishivani

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
That was an awsomee part!!
Please continue soon
I cant wait!! Tongue

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Gr88888 Part Ana Clap
continue soon..!!

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Clap ...wah wah ana.....becheri kashish....hehhe.....pehloi bar kisi story mein usse sofe peh para hahahahaha!....great keep it up Wink

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
hey ana lovely parts.... Clap Clap
gr8 gng... eagerly waiting for the next part. Wink
plz cont soon.... Smile

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