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Part 2

Main nay phir sharam ko mari goli……………aur ahista say kamray say bahir ayee…………..uff! kitna khoobsurat ghar tha……………main iss ghar ki fan ho gaye thi………..itnay rooms thay k mujhay laga k kahain main gum na jaoon………itna bhari joda tha…………..mujhay bohut gusa aa raha tha………..

Main naysocha k main kapray change kar leti hoon…….kyoun k mujhay patah laga tha k iss ghar main mujhay sirf mami jii……oops………..sujal ki mama……..veena mama hi pasand karti hain……or main unhi ki wajha say yahan hoon………….yeh shadi unhi ki ZID ki liye howi thi….warna sujal kahan tayar thay……..phir mujhay yeh itna heavy suit shagun k toor par bheja gaya………..jiss ko pehen k chalna muskil tha………….but I had to find them first……………iss liye har kamray k sath kan laga kar awazain sunanin ki koshish ki…………….likin koi awaz na aye……………jaisay jaisay main agay bhari main nay kuch awazin sunain……………then I move forward

I enter in a room and find an aged women sleeping on the bed…………………
I say" accha tau yei hain sujal ki mama………….jin ki wajha say main yahan hoon"
I thought and then I leave the room……………..so she can't disturb…………….then I hear more voices and went in the search of them

Jiss tarhan main chal rahi thi mujhay lag raha tha k main kissi dance competition main ja rahi hoon………………..at last……….main room tak poohnchi jahan mujhay patah tha k sujal or dono bachay hoon gain……

Main nay door khola tau unlock tha……….main knock kiye bina hi ander chali gaye……..kyoun k h sakta tha kay agar main knock karti tau mujhay ander anay hi nahin diya jata…………..room main mujhay dekh kar saray dar gaye……………doono bachoon nay dar kar sujal ko pakar liya………….main kaisay bataoon kitnay sundar bachay thay…………….baraf ki tarhan safeed…………..cotton ki tarhan naram…………..mera dil kiya k inhin apni godh main utha kar pyar karoon……………likin sujal or bachoon ki shakal aisi bani howi thi k unhoon nay koi bala yaan churail dekhi hooo

Mujahy patah chal gaya k shayad beauty parlour wali nay make-up accha nahin kia………….aur mujhay aisa bana diya hai k jo dekhay darr jaye…………….iss wajha say tau dono bachay daray howay thay………..aur unh ki papa ……………mujhay aisay dekh rahay thay kay shayad KHUDA say pooch rahay hoon k kia yeh ajooba meri kismat main likha tha…………….mujahy aisa laga ka agar amin abhi kuch na boli tau who kahin………….bhoot………bhoot……..chilana shuru na kar dain……………..iss liye main nay jaldi say HI ! HELLO! ki ………..

Waisay bhi mom nay kafi advises di theen………..k pati ko apnay vash main rakhna………..likin who mujhay kissi bhi tarhan say vash main abay walay nahin lag rahay thay…………or agar main galti say bhi aisi koshish karti tau mujhay 2-3 thapar(slaps) par gaye hotay…………..aur doosri baat jo mom nay kahi thi k bachoon ko kareeb bhi na anay dena…………likin mujhay lag raha tha k main nahin balkay bachay mujhay apnay kareeb nahin anay dain gain

Aur jo bhi baatain mom nay mujhay bidaai k waqt kahain theen k koi property apnay naam karwa lena………..or sujal ko bachoon say door or apnay kareeb kar lena……tau iss tarahan ki sari baatain main bachoon ko dekhtay hi bhool gaye thi………….

Sujal say ziada mujhay unh k bachay acchay lag rahay thay…………..akhir unhi ki tau parchiee thay…………main bachoon ko bohut pyar say dekh rahi thi…………aur bachoon k papa mujhay aisay dekh rahay thay k abhi kha jayein gain…………..mujhay lag raha tha k shatad sujal nay bachoon ko doosri shadi k baray main nahin bataya tha………………iss liye meray iss tarhan ander anay pay naraz tha………………….k bachoon say mujhay kaisay introduce karwaye

Main nay socha k apna introduction main khud hi day deti hoon ta k bachay bhi mujhay jaan lain or unh k papa bhi

Iss liye main nay apna lehnga uthaya or bachoon k pass hi bed par beth gaye……..jiss k baad yeh howa k bachoon k papa bed say uth gaye………….doono betay thay………….andaaza laga kar main yeh keh sakti thi k bara beta jo 8 saal k tha aisa pooch raha ho k app kaun hain or aisay kapray pehn kar hamaray ghar main kia kar rahi hain……………

"main app ki mama hoon". Main nay muskuratay howay kaha

"ooohh"………dono bachoon ko current laga or who mujh say door ho kar beth gaye…………mujhay unh ki ankhoon main KHAUFF dikhiyee diya

next:bachoon ka kia reaction hota hai

lol
ana

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 11:58am | IP Logged
maha ki bachi......tujhay tau main abhi poochti hoon.......
sorry guys..........
maha meri galti say choti behen hai
abh iss main mera koi kasur nahin

farah jii.......thank u 4 such a fabolous commnts
and all other thank u

lol
ana

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
ana very nice
jadi cont karo

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
yaar mujhay bachoon k naam samjh main nahin aa rahay
kia koi meri help karay ga
koi pyaray pyaray say naam bataoo...........
jo sujal or sameera say miltay jultay hoon

sameera:sujal ki pehli patni...........woh or sujal college main saath padhtay thay aur wahin say unh ki pyar ki shuruwat howi..........likin do saal pehlay hi us ki maut aik accident ain ho gaye

vasu:kashish ki mama.........jo usay pyar tau karti thin......likin thori lalchi bhi theen

lalit:kashish k papa..........jo k apni betiyon say pyar kartay thay or jantay thay k unh k liye kia sahi hai

veena:sujal ki mama...........unhoon nay hi sameera ki maut k baad sujal or bachoon ko sambhala likin woh yeh baat janti theen k sujal ko aik hum-safar or bachoon ko aik maa ki zaroorat hai

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ana

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
thanx nikhat
i will surely cont tomorrow
bus bachoon k koi acchay say naam bata doo

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ana

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
waha ANA bahut aacha part tha Clap

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
hmm 1 beta ka naam sameer
dusrey lardka hai ya ladki to naam batao

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