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KulBin

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Posted: 10 June 2006 at 1:19am | IP Logged
hey ana dear superb ending.... Clap
cute part n sweet name.... Tongue
in all very nice story.... Clap
keep writing.... Wink
all the best 4 papers..... Smile

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Posted: 10 June 2006 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

ana dear u just ROCK.... Clap sujal is chooooooo damn sweetttttttttttt he is a sweet heart... Embarrassed kanchi kitna pyaara naam hain bilkul tumhari tarah... Big smile lekin me very very sad that your story has ended.... Cry par no problem ur story was just        &nb sp;&n bsp;     tooooooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddd...
in short i can say that your story started BEAUTIFULLY & has ended ELEGENTLY.............. Thumbs Up
Thumbs Up plz start a new fan fic soon do ur exams well.. ALL THE BEST.........Thumbs Up
love u.. Hug


no thanx suri dii
u r totally mind-blowing di.......loved ur comments
luv ya too

lol
ana

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Posted: 10 June 2006 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by group_1223

Originally posted by cool_SK

Originally posted by group_1223

1st best of luk wid ur examz...i m sure u r gonna do gr8....
      u ended ths story...awwwn.....i m soo gonna miss it.....it waz a luvly part.....jus amazingly cute......i wonder how do u cum wid wid such creative n kewl ideaz.....after ur examz...plz rite anoder story....n ya da name was very sweet--kanchi--- Clap   Clap u r an an awsum writer..never ever stop writtin.....i don't think iever told u b4...but da title of ur story is really gud....i really like da way how it has pure urdu wordz(hope i aint wrong)....n jus da name speaks volumes 4 itself--will miss u 4 da nxt 15 dayz....best of luk wid ur examz again... Thumbs Up


thanx alot jyothi
loved ur comments yaar
i m  too gonna miss u for next 15 days................
i too like the title...............and now.........on ur saying................i m not gone'a stop writting
loved u too

lol
ana

ana....mi name z aisha...not jyotiEmbarrassed....i m glad u r gonna b continuin writin....n thx 4 likin da comments



sorry aisha dear
yaar papers nay dimaag hila dala hai
so sorry again
Pinch

lol
ana

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Posted: 10 June 2006 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KulBin

hey ana dear superb ending.... Clap
cute part n sweet name.... Tongue
in all very nice story.... Clap
keep writing.... Wink
all the best 4 papers..... Smile


thanx kulbin
love u sweety
thanx alot

lol
ana

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Posted: 10 June 2006 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Hey GREAT STORY!!!! Man this is the first one that is soo short and thats a good thing!! I really loved it!!
Best of luck for ur papers!!!!! Tongue

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Posted: 10 June 2006 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
c'mon ana...u don't ve 2 say sorry...itz ok....i guess since v r frndz now....u better follow 2 special rulez..no sorry nor thx... Tongue ...k....tc...

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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by purishivani

Hey GREAT STORY!!!! Man this is the first one that is soo short and thats a good thing!! I really loved it!!
Best of luck for ur papers!!!!! Tongue


thanx shivani
ya................i like short stories as k long stories main patah hi nahin chalta k main baat kia thi...................so its better to writeshort stories with diff ideas..............rite na
u liked it and love ur's

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ana

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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
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wowwwwww yaaarrrrrrr
the part is absolutelyyyy marvelous gr8888 job yaar
i love the part where sujal take kashish in arm with her baby girl kanchi and kashish was feelling embarrass and sujal was feeling proud at their love
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz send the next part as soon as possible
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