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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 3)

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
thanx u
all u guys thank u very much 4 liking my story
main nay socha choti si stori hai
apnay finals say pehlay pehlay khatam kar doon gi
app main say kuch ko urdu samjh nahin aa rahi
iss liye main agay k saray parts hindi...or simple urdu main likhoon gi
i hope that will be ok
or aik or baat
abh say main har update k baray main apnay 1st part ki post main mention karoon gi k woh kiss page pay hai ta k app logon ko mushkil na hoo

thaks again
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:00am | IP Logged
KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN

INTRO:its a short story............its a story aout kashish and sujal.......but but but..........it starts after there marriage

they r now living happily.........sujal is a person very hard to know..........while kashish is a very kind-hearted.........sujal or kashish ko society ka sab say happy couple kaha jata tha...........dekhtay hain kyoun

sujal abhi office gaya howa hai or kashish apni easy chair par bethay us waqt ko yaad kar rahi hai k jab uski or sujal ki shadi howi thi........

ayee dekhtay hai k woh kia soch rahi hai
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mujhay kamray main bethay howay kafi deer ho gaye thi…..likin kissi nay bhi kamray main na jhanka……..poora ghar sunsan tha…………jaisay meray anay say pehlay hi sab ko kaha gaya ho…….khabardar bahu aa rahi hai…………kissi ki awaz na niklay
beth beth k meri kamar(back) main dard honay lagi thi……..main chahti thi k jaldi say yeh heavy suit main utar phenkoon……….likin yeh bhi dil kar raha tha k "who" aik dafa mujhay dekh lain…………
issi intezar main adhi raat guzar gaye…………..likin koi na aya………..main nay socha "who" na sahi ……kam say kam bachay hi dekh lain k unh ki naye mama kaisi dekhti hain………..akhir beauty parlour wali ho itnay paisay diye hain
abh baat yeh hai k shadi k saath hi bachay kahan say aye……………tau yeh "unh" ki doosri or meri pehli shadi thi…………..mujhay bataya gaya tha k do bachay hain…………..pehli patni bohut pyari thi…………….shayad love marriage thi……….mujh say shadi ko tayar na thay…………kyoun ki apni pehli patni say bohut pyar kartay thay…………….Romeo & Juliet ki jodi thi…………..likin kismat………….bhagwan k pyari ho gaye or apna ghar meray khawalay kar gain…………….udhaar hum panch behenon ki responsibility papa par thi………..or waisay hi hum middle class family say thay tau……………..phir meray liye "in" k ghar say rishta aya……………papa nay mujh say poochay bina hi shadi k liye haan kar di……………bad main pata laga k unh k do bachay bhi hain………………main nay papa ki marzi k agay sar jhuka diya………..shadi say pehlay hum nay aik dooray ko dekha bhi na tha……………..jaldi jaldi main shadi ho gaye k kahain "yeh" inkar na kar dain………….likin yahan tau mujhay lag raha tha k meray yahan anay k baad saray loog kahin or settle ho gaye hain………….koi nazar nahin aya or nahi kisi say baat howi
Choti si BARAT thi ……………….jo shadi k bad hi gayab ho gaye………..akhir main nay socha k apnay "unh" ko or doono bachoon ko main khud hi dhoond loon………..k kahain aisa na ho main yahan MALKA CALOPETRA kay pause mar kar bethi rahoon or who kahin mazay loot rahay hoon

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:20am | IP Logged
LOL LOL .....agaye likho na ana Clap Clap
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:30am | IP Logged
farah jii
itni phurtiyan
abhi likhti hoon
thori deer sabar karoo
phal meetha milay ga
waisay itni deer main app bhi apni cont kar doo na......plz.......plz
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:36am | IP Logged
LOL LOL ..lo..mein yahan parne ayi thi....chalo i'll try...
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:37am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 8:42am | IP Logged
:::Waisay yeh sahi hai kay banda hindi mein hee likh day kyuon kay humari urdu thori si mushkil hai.Anum jaldi likh...Not to good bas sahi hai Tongue



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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Part 2

Main nay phir sharam ko mari goli……………aur ahista say kamray say bahir ayee…………..uff! kitna khoobsurat ghar tha……………main iss ghar ki fan ho gaye thi………..itnay rooms thay k mujhay laga k kahain main gum na jaoon………itna bhari joda tha…………..mujhay bohut gusa aa raha tha………..

Main naysocha k main kapray change kar leti hoon…….kyoun k mujhay patah laga tha k iss ghar main mujhay sirf mami jii……oops………..sujal ki mama……..veena mama hi pasand karti hain……or main unhi ki wajha say yahan hoon………….yeh shadi unhi ki ZID ki liye howi thi….warna sujal kahan tayar thay……..phir mujhay yeh itna heavy suit shagun k toor par bheja gaya………..jiss ko pehen k chalna muskil tha………….but I had to find them first……………iss liye har kamray k sath kan laga kar awazain sunanin ki koshish ki…………….likin koi awaz na aye……………jaisay jaisay main agay bhari main nay kuch awazin sunain……………then I move forward

I enter in a room and find an aged women sleeping on the bed…………………
I say" accha tau yei hain sujal ki mama………….jin ki wajha say main yahan hoon"
I thought and then I leave the room……………..so she can't disturb…………….then I hear more voices and went in the search of them

Jiss tarhan main chal rahi thi mujhay lag raha tha k main kissi dance competition main ja rahi hoon………………..at last……….main room tak poohnchi jahan mujhay patah tha k sujal or dono bachay hoon gain……

Main nay door khola tau unlock tha……….main knock kiye bina hi ander chali gaye……..kyoun k h sakta tha kay agar main knock karti tau mujhay ander anay hi nahin diya jata…………..room main mujhay dekh kar saray dar gaye……………doono bachoon nay dar kar sujal ko pakar liya………….main kaisay bataoon kitnay sundar bachay thay…………….baraf ki tarhan safeed…………..cotton ki tarhan naram…………..mera dil kiya k inhin apni godh main utha kar pyar karoon……………likin sujal or bachoon ki shakal aisi bani howi thi k unhoon nay koi bala yaan churail dekhi hooo

Mujahy patah chal gaya k shayad beauty parlour wali nay make-up accha nahin kia………….aur mujhay aisa bana diya hai k jo dekhay darr jaye…………….iss wajha say tau dono bachay daray howay thay………..aur unh ki papa ……………mujhay aisay dekh rahay thay kay shayad KHUDA say pooch rahay hoon k kia yeh ajooba meri kismat main likha tha…………….mujahy aisa laga ka agar amin abhi kuch na boli tau who kahin………….bhoot………bhoot……..chilana shuru na kar dain……………..iss liye main nay jaldi say HI ! HELLO! ki ………..

Waisay bhi mom nay kafi advises di theen………..k pati ko apnay vash main rakhna………..likin who mujhay kissi bhi tarhan say vash main abay walay nahin lag rahay thay…………or agar main galti say bhi aisi koshish karti tau mujhay 2-3 thapar(slaps) par gaye hotay…………..aur doosri baat jo mom nay kahi thi k bachoon ko kareeb bhi na anay dena…………likin mujhay lag raha tha k main nahin balkay bachay mujhay apnay kareeb nahin anay dain gain

Aur jo bhi baatain mom nay mujhay bidaai k waqt kahain theen k koi property apnay naam karwa lena………..or sujal ko bachoon say door or apnay kareeb kar lena……tau iss tarahan ki sari baatain main bachoon ko dekhtay hi bhool gaye thi………….

Sujal say ziada mujhay unh k bachay acchay lag rahay thay…………..akhir unhi ki tau parchiee thay…………main bachoon ko bohut pyar say dekh rahi thi…………aur bachoon k papa mujhay aisay dekh rahay thay k abhi kha jayein gain…………..mujhay lag raha tha k shatad sujal nay bachoon ko doosri shadi k baray main nahin bataya tha………………iss liye meray iss tarhan ander anay pay naraz tha………………….k bachoon say mujhay kaisay introduce karwaye

Main nay socha k apna introduction main khud hi day deti hoon ta k bachay bhi mujhay jaan lain or unh k papa bhi

Iss liye main nay apna lehnga uthaya or bachoon k pass hi bed par beth gaye……..jiss k baad yeh howa k bachoon k papa bed say uth gaye………….doono betay thay………….andaaza laga kar main yeh keh sakti thi k bara beta jo 8 saal k tha aisa pooch raha ho k app kaun hain or aisay kapray pehn kar hamaray ghar main kia kar rahi hain……………

"main app ki mama hoon". Main nay muskuratay howay kaha

"ooohh"………dono bachoon ko current laga or who mujh say door ho kar beth gaye…………mujhay unh ki ankhoon main KHAUFF dikhiyee diya

next:bachoon ka kia reaction hota hai

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