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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 3)

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
nice but Cry i don't understand. plzz write in Hindi or English. any way post next part Clap
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
thanx u
all u guys thank u very much 4 liking my story
main nay socha choti si stori hai
apnay finals say pehlay pehlay khatam kar doon gi
app main say kuch ko urdu samjh nahin aa rahi
iss liye main agay k saray parts hindi...or simple urdu main likhoon gi
i hope that will be ok
or aik or baat
abh say main har update k baray main apnay 1st part ki post main mention karoon gi k woh kiss page pay hai ta k app logon ko mushkil na hoo

thaks again
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:00am | IP Logged
KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN

INTRO:its a short story............its a story aout kashish and sujal.......but but but..........it starts after there marriage

they r now living happily.........sujal is a person very hard to know..........while kashish is a very kind-hearted.........sujal or kashish ko society ka sab say happy couple kaha jata tha...........dekhtay hain kyoun

sujal abhi office gaya howa hai or kashish apni easy chair par bethay us waqt ko yaad kar rahi hai k jab uski or sujal ki shadi howi thi........

ayee dekhtay hai k woh kia soch rahi hai
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mujhay kamray main bethay howay kafi deer ho gaye thi…..likin kissi nay bhi kamray main na jhanka……..poora ghar sunsan tha…………jaisay meray anay say pehlay hi sab ko kaha gaya ho…….khabardar bahu aa rahi hai…………kissi ki awaz na niklay
beth beth k meri kamar(back) main dard honay lagi thi……..main chahti thi k jaldi say yeh heavy suit main utar phenkoon……….likin yeh bhi dil kar raha tha k "who" aik dafa mujhay dekh lain…………
issi intezar main adhi raat guzar gaye…………..likin koi na aya………..main nay socha "who" na sahi ……kam say kam bachay hi dekh lain k unh ki naye mama kaisi dekhti hain………..akhir beauty parlour wali ho itnay paisay diye hain
abh baat yeh hai k shadi k saath hi bachay kahan say aye……………tau yeh "unh" ki doosri or meri pehli shadi thi…………..mujhay bataya gaya tha k do bachay hain…………..pehli patni bohut pyari thi…………….shayad love marriage thi……….mujh say shadi ko tayar na thay…………kyoun ki apni pehli patni say bohut pyar kartay thay…………….Romeo & Juliet ki jodi thi…………..likin kismat………….bhagwan k pyari ho gaye or apna ghar meray khawalay kar gain…………….udhaar hum panch behenon ki responsibility papa par thi………..or waisay hi hum middle class family say thay tau……………..phir meray liye "in" k ghar say rishta aya……………papa nay mujh say poochay bina hi shadi k liye haan kar di……………bad main pata laga k unh k do bachay bhi hain………………main nay papa ki marzi k agay sar jhuka diya………..shadi say pehlay hum nay aik dooray ko dekha bhi na tha……………..jaldi jaldi main shadi ho gaye k kahain "yeh" inkar na kar dain………….likin yahan tau mujhay lag raha tha k meray yahan anay k baad saray loog kahin or settle ho gaye hain………….koi nazar nahin aya or nahi kisi say baat howi
Choti si BARAT thi ……………….jo shadi k bad hi gayab ho gaye………..akhir main nay socha k apnay "unh" ko or doono bachoon ko main khud hi dhoond loon………..k kahain aisa na ho main yahan MALKA CALOPETRA kay pause mar kar bethi rahoon or who kahin mazay loot rahay hoon

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:20am | IP Logged
LOL LOL .....agaye likho na ana Clap Clap
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:30am | IP Logged
farah jii
itni phurtiyan
abhi likhti hoon
thori deer sabar karoo
phal meetha milay ga
waisay itni deer main app bhi apni cont kar doo na......plz.......plz
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:36am | IP Logged
LOL LOL ..lo..mein yahan parne ayi thi....chalo i'll try...
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:37am | IP Logged
samajh gayi Embarrassed Clap plz plz cont Big smile
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LOL kya samjhi ac??

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