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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 29)

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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

ana ji just too good....i liked summit kumkum they are so sweet.. aur in charo ke beech ki dosti is also very cool....... Clap ab yeh kashish kyun cheeki woh bhi itni zor se kahiin usse labour pain tho nahi shuru ho gaye...... Tongue
mujhe har baar teri story padke mazaa aatha hain........ ab chalo jaldi se continue bhi kar do.. Big smile   


ya......................they r just like us na
in my view like u adi shruti di and meWink
maza lanay k liye hi tau likhti hoon
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Posted: 28 May 2006 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Hey anamo.....
           Yeh adil ki jo story the DIL KIA KERAY kon say page per hai or mein jub misscall kiya keron na tameez say online aa jaya keroo.Samajh aaye kay nahi ya jo bhe aaye woh opper say guzar gaye or perh rahi ho kay nahi....Reply me....OK
                                         take care
                                      bye
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Posted: 29 May 2006 at 12:14am | IP Logged
hey ana dear very nice part.. Clap & cute toooo.. Wink
now update soon... Smile   
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Posted: 29 May 2006 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KulBin

hey ana dear very nice part.. Clap & cute toooo.. Wink
now update soon... Smile   


thanx kulbin
cute tau hona hi tha kyoun k app jaisay cute loogon k liye hamaray hero heroines to bhi tau cute hona paray ga naBig smile
ya i m wrking on that to update soon

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Posted: 30 May 2006 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
wen aare u posting the next part
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Posted: 31 May 2006 at 1:54am | IP Logged
ya ana dear just like u , me , shrutu & adi.. Embarrassed ana ab please continue karo na main jaanna chahthi hoon kashish itni zhor se kyun cheeki........ Big smile
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Part-20

Sujal nay jaisay hi kashish ki awaz suni ……………………..who foran upper ki taraf dhoora…………….summit or kumkum bhi uss k peechay gaye
Upper ja k dekha k kashish bed pay letay howay roo rahi thi
"kashish…………….kia howa kashish"…………….sujal nay harbarahat main poocha
"lagta hai labour pain shuru ho gaye hain…………..summit tum jaldi say ja k gari nikalo……….sujal tum kashish ko lay k neechay aao…………..or main aunty ko bata deti hoon"………..kumkum nay sab ko unh k kaam bataye or sab fooran hi nikal gaye
"s…su……sujal…………..bo…bohut dard ho raha hai"………………kashish sujal ko apni taraf bulatay howay boli
"tumhain kuch nahin hoga……………….main hoon tumharay saath………..sabar karo"………….sujal nay kashish ko uthaya or neechay lay aya…………..kumkum bhi vena ko bata chuki thi…………or summit nay bhi gari start kat li thi
sujal nay kashish ko gari main bethaya or kumkum us k saath thi……………….summit or sujal agay thay or phir charon…hospital ki taraf chal diye
rastay main kumkum apni sari say kashish k mathay pay aaye pasinay ko saaf karti rahi
"himmat karoo……………..summit jaldi chalaoo"……………..kumkum nay pehlay kashish ko dekha or phir summit say kaha
15-20 min k drive k baad hospital a gaya
sujal jaldi say ja k strecher lay aaya…………………or kashish ko under lay jaya gaya
"doctor……….doctor…………..plz meri wife ko dekhain"…………..sujal nay rastay main ati howi aik lady doctor ko dekha
(THE ROLE OF DOCTOR ISS PLAYED BY GURDEEP AKA DOC. JUHI OF SANJIVANI)
"sister…………….jaldi say OT main inhain lay k jaoo"……………….doc nay sister ko kaha jo kashish ko OT main lay gaye
"koi fikar ki baat nahin……………..bus app ja k formalities poori kar lain"……………doc nay sujal ko kaha
sujal or summit ja k sari formalities poori kar aye or OT k bahir baith gaye
ander say musalsal kashish ki awazain aa rahin theen jo sujal k dil ko cheer kar ja rahi theen………likin sujal bay-bus tha
30 min baad doc bahir aayein…………………sujal doc ko dekh kay jaldi say unh k paas gaya
"doc…………meri wife"
"ghabranay ki koi baat nahin……………….app ki wife bilkul theek hain………….or app ko mubarik ho………….apki beti howi hai"………….doc k chehrray pay aik smile thi
"what…………meri beti"……………….sujal ki khushi saaf us ki ankhoon main jhalak rahi thi
"Congrats yaar……………"………….summit nay agay bhar k usay hug kia
"congradulations sujal…………….abh tumharay ghar bhi aik guriya aa gaye hai"……….kumkum nay bhi agay bhar k usay congras kia
"thank u…….."…………….sujal nay usay bhi aik friendly hug diya
"doc………..kia main kashish say mill sakta hoon"…………sujal nay poocha
"nahin………..abhi unh ko pehlay room main shift kar dain phir"………………doc nay explain kia
"thank u doc…………..aj app nay meri zindagi bacha li"………………..sujal nay hand shake kia
"array……….yeh sab tau us oper walay ki dain hai………….hum tau bus apna farz nibhatay hain……….CONGRATS…………….abh main chalti hoon……………apni wife ka or baby ka khayal rakhiye ga"……………..juhi nay kaha
"sure doc"………….sujal nay usay yaqeen dilaya……………..or juhi wahan say chali gaye
"yaar tu nay batay hi nahin humain k kashish preg hai………….yaar chacha bananay ki khushi tau mananay deta…………………..main bhi thoray geet gata"……………….summit nay muskuratay howay kaha or phir ganay laga
"meray ghar main ik naya mehman anay wala hai
bacha hai bhagwan tau bhagwan anay wala hai
jhoom k main abh gaown ga
abh chacha main ban jaon ga
abh chacha main ban jaoon ga"
all start laugh at this
"koi baat nahin………………….yeh gana nahin ga saka tau doosra ga lain"……………sujal nay smile kartay howay kaha(haye main mar jawan)
"kaun sa"……………..summit thora confused ho gaya
"array wohi"……………sujal usay yaad dila raha tha………….or phir usnay gana shuru kar diya
"diktana diktana diktana
dik diktana diktana diktana"
all start laughing at this
waqt hansi mazak main guzar raha tha………………….thori deer bad nurse aaye jiss nay bataya k kashish ko hosh aa chukka hai or sab us say mill saktay hain likin aik aik kar k
iss waqt main veena sunny, sameer or kinjal k saath hospital aa chuki thi
"ja sujal……………..tu ja"………………summit or veena nay sujal ko agay kia or who andar gaya
kashish bed pay ankhain band kar k leti thi…………….us k chehray pay ik ajeeb si khushi sujal ko nazar aaye
"hi…wife……..my life…………….kaisii ho"……………….sujal nay jhuk k usay forehead pay kiss kia
kashish nay ahista ahista apni ankahin khoolain
"acchi hoon"…………..kashish nay ahista say awaz dii
"thank u………………thank u soo much………………..aj tum nay mujhay aik haseen tuhfa dia hai………..betoon ka baap tau main tha hi………….likin beti ki khushi mujhay tum say milli…………..thanx a lot"……………sujal nay us ka haaath apnay haath main liya or usay kiss kia
kashish just give a weak smile
thori hi deer main summit and co enter howi…………………or summit k haath main choti si baby thi……..( I m a duffer yaar…………………babay choti hi hogi na)
summit starts singing
"diktana diktana diktana
dik diktana diktaan diktana
aj paray ga sab ko gana
diktana diktana diktana
dik diktana diktana diktana"
& then summit hand over the babay to sujal jo usay aram say haath main lay k uskay forehead pay kiss karta hai…………………..or phir kashish k pass usay lita deta hai or kashish bhi uskay chehray pay haath pherti hai
"kashish she is just like u………………..likin na……………iss ki ankhain sujal pay gain hain"………..kumkum nay baby ko dekh k kaha
"humain bhi baby dekhni hai"……………sunny jo peechay khara tha…………..jaldi bola
then sujal nay sunny ko apni godh main bethaya or sammer or kinjal us k pass kharay ho gaye
then sameer kissed baby on her cheek…………..and sunny kissed her on other cheek
"abh main kahan karoon"…………….kinjal boli……….."inh donon nay cheek pay tau kiss kar di hai………..meray liye jagha bhi nahin chori"………………all laugh at this………………but she kissed her on her nose and all laugh again
after some chit chat all were ready to leave………….
"main idher hi rahoon ga"……………..sameer nay baby ko godh main uthaya howa tha or zid kar raha tha
"nahin……………app ko jana hoga"……………..sujal nay pyaar say samjhaya
"tau kia baby bhi hamaray saath chalay gii"…………sameer bola
"nahin…………….usko yahin rehna hoga"……………kumkum boli
"tau phir main bhi yahin rahoon ga"……………sameer nay zid ki
"nahin……………….bachoon ko yahan rehna allowed nahin hai"………………..iss bar summit nay samjhaya
"tau baba bhi tau yahain rahay gi na…………………app doctor ko keh do…………….main yahain rahoon ga baby k pass"…………………..sameer apni baat say na hila
"sameer………….baroon ki baat suntay hain……………..app abhi dadi maa k saath ghar jaoo……..or subah subah phir aa jana"………………sujal nay usay aram say samjhaya
"likin app dadi ko bool do……………mujhay subah subah hi lay aayen haan"………all laugh at this
"mama…………….app kal subah hi issay lay aaye ga"………………sujal nay veena ki taraf ishara kia
"accha baba theek hai……………….abh chalain"………….veena nay kaha tau sameer nay aik last kiss baby ko di or sab bye bool k chalay gaye
jaisay hi sab gaye tau sirf sujal us k pass reh gaya
"accha……………mujhay abh neend aa rahi hai………………tum baby ka khayal rakhna"………..kashish yeh kehtay howay moun ghuma k soo gai
"kia yaar……………..main yahan ruka k tum say baatain kar sakoon or tum ho k"………..sujal make a angry face
"accha……………baba sorry"………………kashish turn her face and hold her ears
sujal got fida on her innocence
"accha choro……………tumhain kia batain karni theen"……………….kashish nay uska haath pakar k usay apnay pass betha lia
"main soch raha tha……………k baby ka naam kia rakhain"………….sujal nay poocha
"jo bhi rakahin gay……………..who S say shuru hoga"…………..kashish nay kaha
"nahain……………K say"
"nahin………main keh diya na S say"………………..kashish boli
"nahin…………….k say"
"S"
"K"
"S"
"K"
or unh ki pyar bhari lariye youn hi chaliti rahi

abhi itna hii
hay now with this post i am a goldie...........hurray
comments plz haan

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