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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 24)

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ana dear kahan kho gayi ho tum????? Confused Cry
plz come back soon... n post the nextpart of ur story..
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ana dear where are you ???? Cry me missing ur story very very very badly......... Cry
please continue soon......... Smile Big smile
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ana dear where are you ???? Cry me missing ur story very very very badly......... Cry
please continue soon......... Smile Big smile
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Posted: 19 May 2006 at 11:28am | IP Logged
sorry guys
late ho gaye na
so sorry 4 that
but aj kal time hi nahin mill raha..........papers aa rahay hain so thora busy hoon

Part 17

Agli subah bohut hi suhani or haseen thi…………….suraj apnay arooj pay tha………..or khirki say jhank raha tha…………sujal or kashish ko suraj ki roshni nay good morning kaha
Who donon uthay o tayar ho gaye kyoun k aj sham main party thi or unhain bohut kaam karna tha……………unhoon nay jaldi say decorators or cutlari ko phone kiya or sab ko sahi say sab kuch samjha diya
Dopahar main sujal or kashish veena or bachoon ko receive karnay station gaye…………..kashish aj bohut khuh thi kyoun k aj aik tau us ki shadi ko aik saal howa………….balkay aj who apnay bachoon say bhi milnay wali thi jiss ko us nay do haftoon say nahin dekha tha……….bachay jaisay hi train say utray who seedha kashish ki gaoh main chalay gaye…………..veena bhi sujal k galay nilli
"ahan…………abh tau bhai mama hi acchi hain………..papa ki tau koi value hi nahin na………….papa k pass kaun aaye ga"……….sujal nay moun banatay howay kaha
us ka khayal tha k bachay us k pass aa jain gain
bachoon nay us ki taraf dekha phir aik doosray ki taraf or nah main sar hilatay howay phir kashish k galay lag gaye
veena or kashish nay hansna shuru kar diya
"accha…………..tum loogon ko tau main ghar ja k dekhta hoon"……..sujal nay unh ko dhamkanay k andaaz main kaha
dono hansna shuru ho gaye
phir khair say sab ghar gaye or sujal nay darwaza khola………………veena kashish k saath ghar dekhnay chali gaye or bachay or sujal pechay reh gaye.
"tau…..papa k pass nahin ana na"…….sujal unh ki taraf bhar raha tha or who peechay ho rahay thay………. "abh kahan jaoo gaye bach k"…………..sujal unh ko pakarnay k liye bhaga or bachay bhi idher udher bhagna shuru ho gaye…..
chilanay k awaz sun k veena or kashish room say bahir niklay tau dekha k bachay agay agay cheekhtay howay bhag rahay hain or sujal unh k peechay ………..kashish or veena yeh deh k hansnay lagay……………akhir kar sujal nay unh ko pakar liye or teenon hanstay howay sofa pay gir gaye…………..teenon kilkila k hansay
"mama app thak gaye ho gay……………..app aram kar lo…………main decorators ko dekhti hoon"………..kashish nay veena ko janay k liye kaha tau veena nay nah kar di
"aram ki tau tujhay zaroorat hai ………………tau chal…………sujal baqi sab dekh lay ga"………………veena nay usay kaha…………..kashish nay kafi nah nah ki likin veena nay aik na mani……………..akhir sujal bhi wahan aa gaya or us nay bhi veena ki haan main haan milaye
kashish ko majboran jana hi para…………….bachay bhi us k saath chalay gaye
in the evening
sham main kashish 5 bajay k kareeb uthi tau bachay abhi usi k pass so rahay thay……….us nay donon ko aik kiss di or uth gaye…………us nay socha k fresh ho k zara neechay ka kaam dekh aaye
nechay gaye tau dekha k sab arrangments ho chukay hain………..phoolon ki bhi sajawat ho chuki thi or hall aik dam superb lag raha tha…………itnay main peechay say aa k kisii nay us k bahoon main haath dala
"bohut accha hai ……….sujal"………….kashish nay bina peechay dekhay kaha
"tumhain kaisay path k main hoon"………….sujal aik jhat say sawal kiya…. "tum kabhi kushi kabhi gham ki jiya bachan kyoun ban rahi hoo……….main itnay aram say atta hoon k tum dar jaoo gi likin………….sara suspense khatam kar deeti hoo"………..sujal ki naak kuch zyada hi upar charh gaye
"who iss liye meray bhoondo hubby ji……………app k aleawa kaun hai iss ghar main jo aisa karay ga"………………kashish nay peechay mur k us k sar pay halka say haath mara
"now………that's my logical wife haan…………….or waisay bhi koi or aisa kar k tau dekhay"………………..sujal nay ……us ki hadiyan na toor doon….look main kaha
"accha………..abh yeh batao……………k guests ko invite kar liya na…"…….kashish nay usay yaad dilatay howay kaha
"haan haan………….sab kaam mukammal hain………..guests ko bhi invite kar liya hai………khana bhi order hai……………cutlari walay bhi time pay aa jain gay……….arrangements who kar gay hain……….or decoration bhi ho gaye hai"………..sujal nay usay sab kamom ki detail di ta k who or sawal na poochay
"kia yaar………………main nay sab kuch kar liya…………ta k tumharay saath function say peehlay kuch waqt guzaroon or tum ho k"……………sujal nay doosri taraf mounh kartay howay kaha
"hmmm……………….tau meray hubby ko gussa bhi ata hai………..mujh pay bhi" kashish nay bhi naraazgi ka izhaar kartay howay doosri taraf rukh pheera kyoun k usay patah tha k jab bhi kabhi aisa hota hai tau sujal hi usay manata hai kyoun k who us say baat kiye baghair nahin reh sakta or yuehi cheez kashish ko sab say zyada acchi lagti thi…………us k maafi manganay ka tareeqa
akir min bad jab sujal nay dekha k kashish bat nahin kar rahi tau who kashish k samnay aaya or apnay kan pakray likin kashish nay apni hansi chupanay k liye or gussay ka izhaar kartay howay doosri taraf rukh pheera…………….sujal zameen par betha or kaan pakaray…………….iss bar kashish ko us pay pyar a gaya or usay haathon sa pakar kar khara kiya or nah main sar hilaya
sujal nay kashish k forehead pay aik kiss kiya……………..kashish abhi us k cheek pay kiss karnay hi wali thi k sunny ki awaz aaye…...
"mama……….kahan ho ap"…………..kashish us kay room say nikalnay say pehlay peechay howi or sunny k pass janay lagi thi k sujal nay us ka haath pakar liya
"sujal mujhay janay do na"……………….kashish nay altaja kartay howay kaha
"nope………….tum nay kiss lay li………….meri kahan hai"………..sujal nay akartay howay kaha
"sujal………..sunny bahir aa jaye ga"…………kashish usay alert kar rahi thi
"tau aa janay do……………….usay bhi tau patah chalay k us ki mama us k papa say kitna pyar karti hain"…………sujal nay bhi khoob jawab diya
kashish ko laga k koi raasta nahin hai who jaldi say sujal k pass aye or uskay cheek pay kiss kiya………..or janay lagi k sujal nay abhi bhi uska haath nahin choora tha
"abh kia"………………kashish nay phir poocha
"mama kahan ho……….."sunny ki phir awaz aaye
"yahan bhi"………….sujal nay doosray cheek ki taraf ishara kiya
kashish nay wahan bhi kiss kiya or bhi bonus main forehead pay bhi kiss kar diya………..sujal shocked tha iss liye jhat say haath chor diya
"yeh kiss liye"……………sujal nay jati howi kashish say poocha
"woh is liye k tum mujhay phir say rook k yahan bhi kiss karny ko kehtay"……….kashish nay peechay mur k hanstay howay kaha
"very smart………….i m imressed…………….tum mujhay kaffi jaan chuki hoo"
kashish nay peechay mur k dekha k achanak

suspense hai
wait karoo

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ana
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Mindblowing part!! tOo good!! Cant wait for the next one!! Smile
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thanx shivani and jyothi
love u both Embarrassed
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Gr8888 Story Ana ....Just tooo gud Clap
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