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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 23)

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Posted: 20 May 2006 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
ana dear ur just tooooo good.....u write so damn well..... Clap   tumne itne time ke baad continue kiya lekin no problem tumhare story ka yeh part padke tho mazaa aa gaya it was zabardast ur story was worth the wait....... Big smile               
ab ana agli part jaldi likh do kyunki mujhe jaanna hain ki jab   kashish murr ke dekhthi hain tho achanak kya ho tha hain ??? yeh kya suspense hain ?? Confused      
please continue soon...... Embarrassed     

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 5:35am | IP Logged
hey ana dear very nice part.... Smile
par ab yeh suspense kya hai...
dnt tell me miscarage... Confused
nywys cont soon... Tongue
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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 11:04am | IP Logged
LOL LOL ok ana....then no farah ji plz..hhehe....mein bala ji sa feel karti hon...lolz....meri telefilm hai farah telefilms LOL LOL Tongue
continue soone plzzz Big smile
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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Part 18
Kashish nay peechay mur k dekha k achanak us ki nazar sunny pay pari jo door main khara hans raha tha…………kashish was totally red like tomato
"yeh kia ho raha hai bhaiya yeh kia ho raha hai"………………sunny nay kuch din pehlay hi yeh film dekhi thi or abhi usay yehi gana yaad aa raha th
"kuch nahin kuch nahin pyar ho raha hai………."………………sameer jo k ander abhi utha hi tha sunny ko sun k who bhi uth k bahir aa gaya
"yeh kia keh rahay ho……………chalo hatoo…………….mujhay tum logon k dress select karna hai"…………..kashish apni hansi ko chupanay k liye wahan say janay lagi………..thora agay poohnchi hi thi k peechay say awaz aaye
"hai na bolo bolo
hai na bolo bolo
papa ko mummy say
mummy ko papa say
pyar hai
pyara hai"…………………….sunny or sameer mill k yeh gana ga rahay thay…………tau phir sujal kyoun peechay rehta
"gori ka sajan……………..sajan ki gori
lo ji shuru ho gaye love story
who ja rahi hai………………meri heroine
hero ka dil kar k chori"……………………sujal nay bhi gana shuru kar diya
kashish abh or na reh saki or seedha washroom main chali gaye or ja k phir khoob hansi
bahir sujal bachoon ko high five kar raha tha
issi hansi masti main party ka time ho gaya…………………..sujal or bachay tayar ho chukay thay………………or kashish thi k abhi tak tayar ho k nahin nikli thi………..us nay sujal k tayar honay k baad bahir nikaltay hi door ko lock kar diya…………sujal kab say bahir us ka wait kar raha tha …………..
"kashish…………..yaar kitna time lo gi………………….guests anay hi walain hain……….plz jaldi karoo"………….sujal bahir kharay kharay thak gaya tha
"sujal bus aik min…………….."kashish ki awaz aaye"
thori deer baad door khula or kashish nay bahir jhanaka……….
"sujal………..sujal"…………………who ahista say sujal ko awaz day rahi thi jo k neechay bachoon ko dekh raha tha
"sujal"……………..kashish thora sa oncha boli tau sujal ko awaz aaye
"haan……………kia hai……….tum aisay kyoun khari ho"……….sujal nay us say sawal kiya
"ander aao……."…………….kashish nay usay kaha
"kia"………….sujal ko samjh nahin aaye
"main nay akah ander aao"………………..sujal jo abhi bhi confused tha khara tha k kashish nay aik daam usay ander kheench liya
"kia hai………….bolo"…………..sujal bola
"main kaisi lag rahi hoon"…………………kashish nay us say poocha sujal jo kaffi deer say us kay chehray ko dekh raha tha abh us ki taraf aaya…………………kashish nay aik black sari pehni thi jiss pay pink , blue or yellow colour ki embridory howi howi thi or saath main silver colour k spots bhi thay
"bohut acchi"………….."likin…………kuch kami hai".
"kia"……………..kashish nay jhat say poocha
"aik min"……………..sujal aik confuse kashish ko peechay chor k dressing table ki taraf bhara or phir wapis aaya
sujal us k kareeb aya or apna haath khola……………………us main aik sindor ki dabi thi
"tum aj sindoor lagana bhool gai"…………..sujal nay kashish ki taraf dibiya ki
"bhooli nahin………..jaan bojh k nahin lagaya………….kyoun k main chahti thi k aj k din tum mujhay yeh sindoor lagaoo"…………………kashish nay aik halki si smile k saath kaha k sujal k face pay bhi aik smile aa gaye
sujal nay sindor liya or kashish ki mang bhari jab k kashish nay apni ankhain band kar lain
"abh batao…………..main kaisa lag raha hoon"……………sujal nay poocha
kashish nay usay oper say neechay tak dekha…………3 piece black suit with as usual black shoes and rolex watch
"u r looking sweet…………..no swwet but more than that………………….likin tum main bhi kuch kami hai"………..kashish nay kaha
"janta hoon..."………………..us nay apnay mathay ko kashish ki mang main bharay sindoor say lagaya (tilak ki kammi thi)or poocha
"abh theek hai"………."perfect"kashish nay jawab diya
"may we leave now"
"ya sure"…………………kashish or sujal aik doosray k haaton main haath dalay neechay aaye

next: party time

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

ana dear ur just tooooo good.....u write so damn well..... Clap   tumne itne time ke baad continue kiya lekin no problem tumhare story ka yeh part padke tho mazaa aa gaya it was zabardast ur story was worth the wait....... Big smile               
ab ana agli part jaldi likh do kyunki mujhe jaanna hain ki jab   kashish murr ke dekhthi hain tho achanak kya ho tha hain ??? yeh kya suspense hain ?? Confused      
please continue soon...... Embarrassed     


abh dekh loo sur......................suspense accha hi tha..............
no thanx 4 ur comment
app ki nawazish k app ko intezar tha........................waisay waisa hi haal mera bhi hota hai app ki story ka wait kartay kartay

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KulBin

hey ana dear very nice part.... Smile
par ab yeh suspense kya hai...
dnt tell me miscarage... Confused
nywys cont soon... Tongue


no no kulbin
miscarage ekta ka kaam hai hamara nahinLOL
thanx 4 ur comments
keep reading like this

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajeev1

LOL LOL ok ana....then no farah ji plz..hhehe....mein bala ji sa feel karti hon...lolz....meri telefilm hai farah telefilms LOL LOL Tongue
continue soone plzzz Big smile


app usay farah jii telefilms kar loo...............kyoun k mujhay accha nahin lagta k main app ko jii na kahoon

so......................its my biggest problem
u have to tackle with it
lol
ana
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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
ana dear very good story.. yeh sunny aur sameer bilkul sujal par gaye hain.. itne shararthi but stilll sooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee soooooooo sweettttttttttttttt......... Big smile aur sujal ke baare mein tho   batane ki zaroorat hi nahii he is always cute & sweet.. Embarrassed in this part i especially loved the bachche singing hain na bolo bolo & the sindoor & thikka scene.. Wink                     
please jaldi se continue karna.... Tongue    Big smile aur haan dear agli part zara badi likhna yeh part zara si choti ho gayi... Smile

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