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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 17)

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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 1:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

Clap Clap ...mind blowing part!....haha...bechari kashish cinderella ban gayi Tongue

farah jii........thanx 4 ur comments

or agay agay dekhnay main usay kia kia banati hoonLOLWink

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LOL LOL ....lol ana....sujal ko bhi kuch na kuch zaroor bana Tongue
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ana dear aap apni kahani mei twist laake hume darati hai
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toh humne socha complements mei bhi thoda twist daal dete hai maza aayega... LOL
wat say... Wink
u r welcome... Smile
cont soon... Smile
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kya likhte ho dii tusssi hum apke fan fic ke deewane ho gaye hain ab jald se intezaar khatam karo aur cont karo Embarrassed
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Part 12

sham main jab sujal naina k saath kahain janay k liye ready ho rahay thay.................tau mera dil ko kuch honay laga..........jab k main nay apnay app ko bohut samjhaya.............k jab inh ko meri koi fikar nahin tau main kyoun karoon............likin phir bhi mri nazrain bar bar unh hi ki taraf ith jatain..................jo mujh say bekhabar ready ho rahay thay
"app ko koi kaam nahin hai"...........sujal nay aik dam mujh say poocha.................tau main aik dam shock reh gai or unh ko youn dekhnay par sharminda ho gai..............sujal nay bhi mujhay aisay dekh liya
patah nahin woh kab room say bahir niklay..........mujhay nay patah chala.............main tau apnay app say sawal kar rahi thi k main aisay kyoun kar rahi thi................unh ka dil tau pathar hai..................likin main kyoun unhain bar bar dekhti hoon............bhagwan mujh pay rehem karay......................
sham main mama nay meri sis k saath dhamaka kia.................tau mera dimaag ghoom gaya.....................mama ghar ki aik aik cheez ko note kar rahin theen k jaisay koi detective hoon.......................phir mujh say kehnay lagin
"ayee kashish".............apnay specticals ko thora uper karti howi bolain................."kuch apnay mind ko use kia yaan nahin.."
"bilkul kia hai mama"...........main nay simplicity k saray records break kar diyee
"apnay husband ko qaboo main kia"..........mama nay aisay kaha k mujhay laga k aj yeh mujhay pitwa k hi choorain gain..
......................main nay koi jawab nahin diya
"kashish..........sunti ho yaan nahin".................jawab na denay pay mama nay dussay say kaha
"haan mama.........kar liya qaboo"............mama ki baatoon say bachnay k liye main nay keh diya
"or haan...........bachoon say door rehna................kuch property bhi apnay naam karwa lena..................tum yeh samjh jaoo k agar bachay us k pass rahay tau woh teray qaboo main nahin anay wala.............woh aik admi hai...............sara din office main rehta hai..............peechay say bachoon ko apnay under raha kar.................inh say kuch kaam bhi karwa karoo................tang karain tau aisii maar lagana k yaad rakhain...................or inh pay nazar rakhna ta k apnay swet papa say koi complain na karain"
"bhagwan bachay mujhay"...................mama k planning sun k tau mera dil kanp gaya
woh tau meray dil k tukray(pieces) thay......................main unh ko kabhi thandi hawa na lagnay doon...............or mama keh rahain hain mara karoon...............kaisi impossible batain kar rahain hain..........or jiss ko woh koboo karnay ko keh rahain hain............unh ko tau main unh k bachoon k liye bardhasht kar rahi hoon................warna unh ki harkatain.............aisi k 6 bar divorce denay ko dil karta tha mera
"mama..........mama"........sunny nay jo mujhay pukara tau mujhay yakeen na aya k us nay mujhay mama kaha hai
"mama"....................woh dobara bola tau main mama ki sari instructions ko side pay rakh k sunny ki taraf bhagi.
"jab dekha tau woh ander pani say bheega howa kanap raha tha...................or sameer jag pakra khara howa tha..................main nay jaldi say sunny ko towel main chupaya.
"yeh kia ho raha tha"........main nay zara hard voice main kaha
"kuch nahin................sunny k clothes school main ganday ho gaye thay..........bus main tau unhain wash kar raha tha".......sameer nay ignorant ban k kaha
meri hansi nikal gaye........"wash karnay ka yeh procedure bilkul new hai.................likin washing k lye yeh zaroori hai k clothes k ander koi na ho".................main nay advise di
"or yeh jug tum mujhay do....................bhai chta hai....................usay thand lag jaye gi"........main nay aram say jag lena chaha likin sameer nay jug ko zor say wall pay day mara.................or bahir chala gaya
"hay bhagwan.................main iss ko kaisay manaoon"...................main nay tang aa k saar pakar liya
"mama mujhay sardi lag rahi hai".............sunny ki awaz pay main hosh main aye
"meri jaan.........tumhain kia patah k tumhari zuban pay mama shabd kitna accha lagta hai".........main nay us k kapray change kartay howay kaha
"mama app mujhay bohut acchi lagti hain.........likin aunty mana karti hain k app say baat na karain"............sunny nay ruk ruk k kaha
"uff..........aunty ko mujh say kia dusmani hai...............beta main app ki mama hoon........or app sirf meray betay hoo..............aunty app ki kuch nahin lagtin"..................likin sunny ko abhi bhi kuch samjh main na aya
"accha yeh bataoo k app k dost kiss ki baat mantay hain.................aunty ki yaan apni mama ki"................main nay aik sawal poocha
"mama ki"................sahi jawab aya
"tau beta main app ki mama hoon"
main nay usay godh main uthaya...............or bahir aa gaye...................likin wahan tau or hi kuch ho raha tha.................mama ki or sameer ki aisi lariye howi k jaisay do sautanain apas main lar rahi hoon...................iss lariye say daar kar main or sunny aram say aik sofa par beth gaye
atlast mama the champion bhi sameer k agay na reh sakain or chalnay k liye tayar ho gain............or sameer k saath mujh bhi sunti howay gain
jiss ki summary yeh thi k woh time door nahin k jab yeh bachay ander mazay uraiyn gain or main bahir pari hoon gi
main tau sameer k attitude pay khairan thi.................sunny nay jo mujhay aisay dekha tau bola
"mama.........app abhi say ghabra gain................bhai k agay koi nahin rukta"
"sameer idher aoo meray pass............apnay say baroon k saath aisa kartay hain kia"........main nay usay samjhanay ki koshish ki...............woh tau sujal or mama ghar main na thay.............warna meri tau shamat(waatt) aa jati
"haan ta k app sab baray hamaray papa pay kabza kar lain or humain iss ghar say nikal dain..........hamari tau mama bhi nahin hain...........hum kahan jain gain
...........sameer ro raha tha
"sameer tum aisa kyoun sochtay hoo....................."janay yeh bachoon k mind kahan tak chalay jatay hain
"aunty nay mujhay bataya tha....................k app sab yeh chahtay hain k humaray papa pay kabza kar lain or humain nikal dain"
sameer ki ankhain laal ho gain
"sameer..............meri jaan....................main aisa bilkul nahin chahti.....................main app ko iss ghar say nahin nikal sakti..........main tau app say pyar karti hoon...............main tau sirf app k liye yahan aye hoon................aunty jhoot kehti hain"
main nay usay apnay galay say laga liya......."kuch bhi ho yaad rakhna k tumhari mama tum say bohut pyar karti hain"
sameer roye ja raha tha........."likin mama aunty tau kehti hain".....sameer ruka
iss say mama sunannay say mujh pay nasha tari hoo gaya..............yeh waqi meray jism ka aik part ban gaye thay...............abh woh meray thay sirf meray
"mama main nay app ki mama say bad-tameezi ki.....................app khafa tau nahin hain na"
"nahin bilkul nahin................hum unhain mana lain gain...............app sab bhool jaoo..............aj hum mazay karain gain" main nay sameer ko surprise hotay dekha
sunny meray saath kitchen main aa gaya................likin sameer kuch sharminda tha.............main nay ruk kar us ka haath pakra or usay kitchen main lay aye..................main nahin chahati thi k woh abh mujh say door jaye
"aj sameer ki fav dish banay gi"...........main nay kaha
""likin main kuch nahin khaoon ga".....................sameer nay ahista say kaha
main nay jaldi say aik advertisement suna di.................."khaoo gay nahin tau baray kaisay hogay"...............sunny or sameer hans paray
"mama main zyada zyada khaoon ga...................phir main jaldi jaldi bara ho jaoon ga".......sunny nay khushi khushi kaha
"phir tum kia karoo gay"............main nay sandwich banatay howay kaha
"phir main school nahin jaoon ga..............abhi main chota hoon iss liye sab mujhay school zabardasti bhejtay hain"
sunny nay bura saa face banaya tau main hans pari..........."school tau tumhain jana paray ga.....chaloo choro.......chaloo tum dono meray saath meray ghar chaloo:...........main nay offer ki
"app k ghar"........dono jahan thay wahain ruk gaye
"haan meray ghar".................main iss situation par hans pari
"par mama..................app ki mama tau hum say pyar nahin kartain"..................sameer nay sandwich plate main rakh diya
"phir main unhain mama k ghar lay k gaye.............unhain sab say milwaya..................or unh ka saar darr khatam ho gaya

next:bachoon k kareeb anay say kia sujal kashish k kareeb aaye ga

this part is 4 all of u............main kissi ka naam nahin bhoolna chahti.........

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ana
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sorry woh main nay apni sis k login say galti say post kar di
but likhi main nay hi hai

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first class part ana aik dummm gr8!!!!

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