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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 16)

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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Part 11

bachoon k gussa honay k baad bhi main unh k kamray main chali gayee..............zabardasti unh k bag sahi kiyee...........unh k kapray press kiyee...................meray room main enter hotay hi woh exit ho gaye.................or jab main bahir nikli tau woh jhat say ander aa gayee...............teenoo baap betay aik jaisay thay............main thak k terrace main ja kar beth gaye...
meray ander say mujhay awaz aa rahi thi k main iss ghar main zayada na reh paoon gii................koi mujhay yahan rehnay na day ga.................yeh bachay mujh say cheen liye jain gain...........or sujal tau pehlay hi meray na thay................main yeh soch k kamray main enter howi k sujal nay mujhay dekhtay hi side change kar lii
"suniye............kia meri inh sau dosti ho gai thi k aisay narazgii dekha rahay hain"
"kashish"..........room ki khamoshi main unh ki awaz mujh tak aayee............aik tau yeh same meri dadi k jaisay boltay thay..................main nay inh ki awaz ko ignore kar diya............or sofa ki taraf bharnay lagi
magar sujal nay gussay main mujhay pakar k apni taraf ghumaya......................."yeh kia bad-tameezi hai".......main nay apnay app ko chuwaya
"app ko shayad kha gaya ho ga k jatay hi apnay husband ko kaboo main kar lena...............likin main app ko bata doon..........meray dil main app k liye koi jagha nahin hai..............yahan pay app ko sirf unh bachoon k liyee laya gaya hai...............rakhnay k tau main unh k liye 10 governases rakh loon..likin mama ki zid k agay majboor tha...............magar meray kareeb app ki importance inh bachoon ki governes say bhar kar nahin hai............main app ko agay inh bachoon ko neglect kartay howay na dekhoon........warna main kia karoon ga yeh main bhi nahin janta"...................woh meri insult kiye ja rahay thay
"Mr.Sujal...............aik baat app bhi jaan lain mujhau app ko kaboo main karnay main koi intrest nahin............or na hi mujhay app ki koi fikar hai..............or main unh bachoon ki governes nahin balkay unh ki maa hoon..............or meri importance ko koi bhi challenge nahin kar sakta"............gussay k saath mujhay roona bhi aa raha tha
patah nahin sab yeh kyoun samjhtay hain k doosri maa, maa nahin hoti.....woh bachoon say muhabbat nahin kar sakti...........jab k yeh pyar tau aik larki k janam letay saath hi uss main janam leta hai................iss liye tau woh dolls ka game khelti hain..........unh ki shadiyan rachati hain....................bachoon ki tarhan unh ka khayal rakhti hain................phir akhir maamta pay step honay ki stamp kyoun laga di jati hai
"agay say mujhay unh ki school say chuti karnay ki complain na aaye"...........unhoon nay mujhay finger say point kartay howay kaha
"app ki complain ki kiss ko fikar hai"...............mera chehra bhi gussay say laal hogaya
unhoon nay mujhay jhatkay say apnay kareeb kar liya..................."tau tumhain meri koi fikar nahin".............unh ki grip strong hoti gayee....................itnay kareeb honay say meray andar aik laher dhoor gayee...............unh k perfume ki khushboo........meray ander uter rahi thi
main aik dam say peechay hati....................or apni sansoon pay kaboo paya......................uff meray kitnay kareeb thay..................sharam say meray gaal laal ho gaye................or phir suddenly
"yeh app kia kar rahay hain"...................main darr gaye......."app mujhay haath nahin laa saktay...........main shoor macha doon gi"
woh surprise reh gaye.........."tum meri wife ho pagal larki................or main jo chahoon tumharay saath kar sakta hoon"............woh ajeeb dhang say meri taraf bharay
"app aisay kaam aunty k saath kiya karain".............main peechay hotay howay boli.............aik daam say door khola or main bahir aa gaye
thandi hawa jab meray laal chehray pay para tau mujhay thand ka ehsaas howa..........................unh kay kareeb honay ko main abhi bhi mehsoos kar rahi thi................main nay apnay chehray pay haath rakha................dil ki dharkan zara si kareebi pay bekaboo ho gaye thi....................abh main unh k samnay nahin ja sakti thi............likin abh main kahan jati
"step-mother app yahan kyoun khari hain"..............sunny itni sardi main sweater k bina hi khara tha.............main nay usay apni shawal main chupa liya
"app itni sardi main bahir kyoun aa gaye".........main nay usay cheek pay aik kiss ki
"step-mother"..........woh chilaya..............tau main mukara gayee
"beta woh actually app k papa nay mujhay room say nikal diya..........tau abh main soch rahi hoon k kahan jaoon"
"app ko"...................woh surprise tha.................."papa nay aunty ko tau kabhi nahin nikala"
"kia"..............meray dimaag ghoom gaya
"kia aunty app k papa k room main jati hain"
"daily..........jak tak aap nahin aayein theen..............actually aunty or papa ki bari dosti hai"
"accha"...............abh mujhay bhi kissi ki koi fikar na thi
"chalo beta...........main aj app k pass soo jaoon gi"
"nahin..........nahin"........woh chilaya............likin main nay koi parwa na ki.............or zabardasti us k saath soo gaye
subah mujhay apnay room main dekh kay sameer bohut gussa howa...........or jab sunny nay usay bataya kay step-mother zabardsati unh k saath sooi theen tau uss ka gussa asman ko chunay laga............jiss k izhaar k liye woh abhi tak wash room main thanday pani say naha rahay thay....................sunny ko tau main nay tayar kar diya.........likin sameer abhi tak bahir na aya tha..........mujhay bohut gussa charha k uss ki wajha say late ho rahay thay..........aunty or sujal mujhay dantay ja rahay thay
"sameer..................agar tum aik min main bahir na aaye tau main tumhain issi tarhan school bhej doon gi".........main nay sakhat gussay say kaha.................tau woh bahir nikal aaye.............main nay jaldi say unhain tayar kiya............or woh khamoshi say robot ki tarhan tayar ho gaye.............main be-ikhtiyar muskura di..........akhir apnay papa ki carbon copy tha...............face kay angle kaisay theek hotay.................main nay usay forehead pay kiss kiya or usay school bheja............uss nay bura sa moun banaya..............likin iss ki inhin batoon pay mujhay pyara aata
subah subah inh donon nay mujhay thaka diya tha................abh mujh main romeo or juliet ka drama dekhnay ki himmat na thi............or na hi dinning table tak janay ki iss liye room main aa kay soo gayee

hope k yeh part lamba hai

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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
awesome part ana too good.
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
your fan-fic is too good
LOVE IT
CONTINUE SOON Tongue
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Clap Clap ...mind blowing part!....haha...bechari kashish cinderella ban gayi Tongue
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 1:23am | IP Logged
well ana dear part lamba tha par itna nahi
or part achha nahi tha, bahot bahot achha tha Clap
very nice ... Clapplz cont soon.... Smile

Edited by KulBin - 11 April 2006 at 1:26am
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 1:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by KulBin

well ana dear part lamba tha par itna nahi
or part achha nahi tha, bahot bahot achha tha Clap
very nice ... Clapplz cont soon.... Smile

well kulbin jii

app tau dara kar rakh detay hain

waisay thanx 4 ur comments

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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 1:37am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kamna

awesome part ana too good.

thanx kamna jii

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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 1:40am | IP Logged

Originally posted by purishivani

your fan-fic is too good
LOVE IT
CONTINUE SOON Tongue

thanx puri

u r such a sweet reader

 

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