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***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 (Page 11)

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Part 7

Raat ko iss sofa per letay main yeh soch rahi thi k agar sujal ko sameera say itni hi muhabbat hai….yaan "thi"………..waisay "thi" tau main apnay dil rakhnay k liye keh rahi thi………tau us ki koi picture main nay ghar main kyoun na dekhi…………yahan tak k bedroom main bhi nahin…………..muhabbat ki yeh ada meri samjh main na ayee…………..or meri bechaini waisii hi thi………….who sameera say chahay kitni hi muhabbat kyoun na karain……………abh mujh say bhi tau unh ka koi nata tha…………………..main tau saaf chandini main naha k unh k pass aye thi…………..or main nay bohut ziada bhi na maanga tha………………sirf kuch lafzoon or aik nazar hi tau chahti thi………….likin unh ki nazrain tau kissi taraf uthna hi bhool gain theen
Raat ko main nay sujal ko kamray say bahir jata dekha…………tau main bhi khud ba khud unh k peechay chal parii
Sujal upper aik bedroom main chalay gaye or main bahir khari dekhti rahi………………..jab kaffideer tak who bahir na ayee………tau main nay door kay hole main say dekha or anjanay main unh ki muhabbat ki raaz dar ban gaye……………….kamray main har taraf aik bohut khoobsurat arki ki tasveer lagi thi…………jiss k neechay deep paray thay jinhain aik aik kar k sujal jala rahay thay………….kamray say rose ki petals ki smell aa rahi thi………saray deep jalanay k baad sujal aik tarf barabar dekh rahay thay…………..unh ki ankhoon main ansoo dekh kar mera dil tarpd gaya…………mujhay yuun laga k jaisay who sameera say shikayat kar rahay hoon k mujhay akela kyoun choor diya………..mujhay akela chor kar tum kaun si rah pay chal pari k main chahtay howay bhi tumhara saath nahin day sakta…………main dharaktay dil k saath neechay aa gayee………………..who aurat tau ja chuki thi likin sujal ka dil abh bhi uski muhabbat say bhara tha……………..muhabbat ka sara samandar tau uskay kabzay main tha……….mujhay tau aik boond(katra) bhi na milla……….papa……….app nay mujhay kiss mushkil main daal diya…….main itni himmat wali kahan k samandar rakhtay howay bhi katra katra wasool karoon………….or phir na janay yeh katray bhi meray naseeb main thay yaan nahin.
Khud ba khud meri ankhoon say ansoo beh rahay thay…………..janay kiss waqt sujal aa kar sye…….or suraj ki pehli kiran nikaltay hi mujhay bhi neend aa gaye
Kal ki tarhan aj bhi mujhay kissi nay na uthaya……………..likin Sunday honay ki wajha say saray ghar main thay…………….mujhay iss baat ka patah bahir say anay walay shor say ho raha tha…………….dinning table pay aik anjaan haseen aurat bachoon ko or unh k papa ko bari muhabbat say breakfast serve kar rahi thi………………….shayad mama apnay kamray main theen

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wah cool part Clap
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Clap Clap ..wah wah...zabardast......bechara sujal to bolta hi nahi hahha Wink keep it up
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Great Part
I am waiting for the part when Sujal starts to love Kashish. I hope that that part comes soon.
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