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Posted: 17 years ago
hey kyon na hum ek change laayen ke like ashi-uv not the parents they cn be like two romeo-juliets onje lovy dovey ones and other modern ones and we can make it hiolarious wat say

now my part
they quickly separate and to their good luck by the time jumbo had come they were not too close they were just sitting and havin a good chat
ranveer quickly gets up
ranveer- sir aap yaahaan kya kar rahe hain
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey krits i agree wid u totally
so guys i actually donno wat to wrirte but still if its bad plzzzzz mera part delete kar dena alrite????

so here it is:
ranveer-sir aap yahhan?
jumbo-yes main yahaan is dhed ko demolish karvane aaya hoon
tia- but sir aap students se unka opinion toh le lo
jumbo-i m the head of this school n i dont need ne permission or watever........

tia-but sir agar mr.YASHWANT DEV ko yahhan par koi important kaam hua toh????
(she is just trying to stop him by saying all this rubbish)
jumbo-yes i also think the same
      thanx miss ahuja
n he goes away
.................

now guys plzzzzzzzzzz write wid ashi-yuvi part

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Posted: 17 years ago
ok here is my part and sonam ur part was gr8 fantastic

ok coming back to ashi-uv

the rehearsels were over and everyboy had gone ashi waz also packing her stuff when uv came and pulled her through her waist
ashi- uv jaanu chodo i hv to go
uv- ashiiiiiiiii plzz
ashi- ok but only for half an hour thik hai
uv- ok he just started cuddling her neck and fondled it
ashi waz terribly shivvering and blushing equally uv slowly came upto her forehead and kissed it as he did so ashi hugged him tightly it was a sudden response
uv- ashi kya hua darling
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Posted: 17 years ago
thora hint to do mom kya likkhun
ek kaam karo tumhi agla part post kardo na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
nahiiiiiiiii beta itni jaldi haar nahi mante tum aisa karo next day ki rehearsel ke baare main likh do 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
chalo ek part main post kar deti hoo u cont

ashi- kuch nahi v main soch rahi thi ki itna pyaar to mujhse mumma bhi nahi karti hogi jitnaa tum karte ho
just then sonia comes

sonia- mumum yahaan kya chal raha hai
they both get shocked nad quickly sepoarate
ashi- mumma aap yaahaan kya kar rahi hin
sonia- kuch nahi vo actually main tumhaari rehearsel dekhne aayi thi par yahaan to kuch aur hi dekhne ko mil raha hai
uv- woh actually aunty aapko to sab pata hi hai
sonia- haan haan mujhe sab pata hai par yeh ek public place hai and these things are not ment to do anywhere u feel like neways uv tum jao aur sabko bulakr lao mujhe ek aur rehearsel dekhni hai with remix music 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
kriti im ritingggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

yuvi goes to call all of them and all of them come to the shed
tia ranny: soniya app yahan
soniya: main tumlogo ko reharsal dekhne ayi hoon chalo abhi mere samne performe karo
they all played their songs
soniya: 👏 it was amazing mujhe pata hain ke tum log har time ke taraha is time bhi rock karoge all the best
all: thank u soniya aunty (mamma) 😆
soniya leves and as then she leaves yuvi gets ekdam excited soo does ranveer and both says that un logo ka pyaar ahura rehe gaya tha
soo both of them hugged their respective partners 😳

as then moti roli comes in and sees all this things

cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
PRI SEES ALL THIS AND FEELS BAD SHE DECIDE NOT TO DISTUB THEM AND GOES BACK
ALL THE FOUR COMES BACK TO THEIR SENSES AFTER SOME TIME AND DECIDE TO LEARN THEIR DIALOGUES
THEY ALL GO TO DIFFERENT PLACES AND STRT LEARNING THEM TIA GOES TO THE CASIO AND TRIES TO MAKE NEW DHUN FOR THE PLAY 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
as she was making the new dhn ranveer comes from the back and catches her
ranveer: oh my juliet will you marry this romeo of yours????????
tia: why not my romeo par phle juliet ko toh choro warna apna play ekdam haat se hi jaye ga
ashi yuvi : areey yaar kabhi toh tum log serious hua karo har time romance
ranveer: romanve ke ilava lafe main aur hain bhi kya????
yuvi: getting very romantic said han ranveer hey tumne bilkul thick kahan hain and was moving in front of ashi and as then ranveer said
ranveer: un donno ko apne dreams main rehne do aur hum apne dreams main rehete hain ok??????
as then that crasppy shy enters and sees all that

guys guess here reavtion and ppost the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
SHY ENTERS
SHY- HEY GUYS TUM LOG KA REHEARSEL HO GAYA
TIA IN WHISPER- HO HI JAATA GAR TUM JAISI B****H NA AATI
TIA- HI SHY TUM YAAHAAN