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dia5 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Umm...can u PLEASE update me on wat's going on rite now Confused ???I'm TOO lazy to luk into ALL these pages LOL Wink ...

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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 2:31am | IP Logged
ok here's da summary of wat has happened untill now


1stly it was ashi-yuvi patch up coz of a 3rd person raj
then tias probs wid her mom who came back suddenly n wid ranveer who says that he's patching up wid shy just 2 tease tia b'coz of wich tia decides to go to london.........but then ranveer solves it all

then ashi-yuvi scenes n they go to sonia's farmarea........

now at least read da last page to go into da story ,LAZY GAL Wink
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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 2:59am | IP Logged

 

ashi- hi shy ( in an irritated and angry tone)
shy- wo-oh ashi tum itni angry kyon ho
ashi- nahi main bilkul naaraz nahi hoon( pretending to be sweet)

ashi-main toh bas tumhe ek tight slap dena chahti hoon n ek hard punch direct on ur cruela kinds face Ouch !!!!!!!!!!
shyla-ye tum kya keh rahi ho? i mean kya mujhse koi mistake ho gayi hai jo tum itni hyper ho rahi ho?
(pretending to be innocent)..........

ashi- main aur hyper hey bhaggu galti karke innocent banna toh koi shyla devi se sikhe(everybody gathers around uv comes forward to solve the matter)
uv- ashi calm down tumhe plan yaad hai na

ashi-uv do hell wid t6he plan main is wo-oh ko chodoongi nahi(ashi pulls shylas hair)
just thn tia comes there and asks uv wats the matter uv tells her vevreythin an she feels a bit embarrased ki ashi uske liye itna kuch kar rahi hai
tia - stop it ashi bas karo humaara standard itna gira hua nahi hai ki hume is wo-oh ke muh lagna pade tum chalo yahaan se
ashi-but tia tum is shy fry ko spare kaise kar sakti ho? Angry
tia-puhleeezzzzzz ashi tum tia ki baat suno n just leave her coz she doesnt need any attention from us !!!!! Angry Angry Angry
shy- just acting innocent so that atleast yuvi gets sympathetic towards her Angry
shy-plzzzzzzz yuvi ab tum toh yeh nahi kahoge na that i m the culprit plzzzzzzz .
ashi-listen u cruela, u wamp , u .......u......
watever bas tum yuvi se close hone ka try bhi mat karna okayyyyyyyyyyy??????????????? Angry
shy- but main toh sirf..........................ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm..........
ashi-kehne ke liye agar words nahi hai toh dont speak Angry
yuvi.......................
uv- shy stop tht bas karo its enough
tia- uv tum kyon is vamp ke muh lag rahe ho both of u chalo yahaan se
and they leave they enter the shed
tia- o tias god itna humgama actuallly ho kyon raha tha i mean woh fry itna kyon bol rahi thi
ashi- woh actually tia kal raat ke incident ke baare main jab v ne mujhe bataaya so i couldt stop myself
tia- ashi tum bahaut sweet ho tumne tia ke liye itna sab kuch kiya tia tumhaara yeh ehsaan kabhie nahi bhulagi
ashi- hey tia stop tht hum chahein kitna bhi ladein but hum hai to frnds hi and agar ek frnd doosre frnd ke liye kuch bhi kare use ehsaan nahi kaha jaata hope tumme itne brains to hain
tia - ashi...

uv-anyways i think ab hame chalna chaiye warna bohut badi musibat khadi ho jayegi

tia- uv tum aur ashi idhar ruk sakte ho tia sab handle kar legi tum dono ka abhi patch up hua and u need to spend time together and neways u souldnt tell abhi tini jaldi apne patch up ke baare main kisi ko
accha tia chalti hai n sh goes uv and ashi r alone
ashi- yeh timbo ko kya ho gaya hai woh thodi mattured behave kar rahi hai LOL

uv-maybe woh ranveer ko lekar parishan he.
ashi- patanahi i dont think so timbo aur itni acchi tarah se behave kare koi aur bahaut serious baat hai accha
suddenly ashi realises sometin
ashi- hey bhaggu main to bhu hi gayi
uv- kya hua ashi tum kya bhul gayi
ashi- main kal raat se apna phone switch on karna hi bhul gayi tia ne kaha tha ki mumma ko kuch zaroori baat karni hai tumhaare baare main
uv - shocked mere baare main
ashi- haan pata nahi main abhi mumma ko call karti hoon
and she calls her mother
sonia - hello sonia rey here
ashi- haan mumma woh timbo keh rahi thi ki aapko mujhse kuch baat karni thi
sonia- mumum tumne apna phone kyon switch off kiya neways baat yeh hai ki Confused
sonia-mumum baat yeh hai ki mujhe yuvi aur tumhare baare mein sab pata hai!!!!!!!!!!!!

ashi is very shocked to hear this Shocked
ashi-mumma! listen ...........
main aur yuvi ..........uuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh...........
hum to bus.....................

sonia-mumum dont try to defend yuvi n urself .
Angry
mujhe pata hai ki aaj .................tum dono..........shyla se fight kar rahe the ...................... haina?????????
ashi- accha woh woh mumma aap is main mat interfere karo
accha mumma aapko pata hai ke tia ke saath kya hua hai i mean vo itna odd kyon behave kar rahi....

sonia- hesitatingly kuxch nahi ashi main tumhe baad main phone karti hoon
ashi- nahi mumma aap mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho batao wats the matteer
sonia- vo ashi tia ki mom zinda hai tia ko tara ka phone aaya tha tabso vo bahaut depressed hai
ashi- kya............omg
and she keeps the phone shocked
uv- kya hua ashi
ashi- uv mujhe abhi tia se milna hai
yuvi- ashi plz batao toh sahi ki tumhe hua kya hai?????? Confused
ashi-yuvi tia is in big depression coz(she tells everything to yuvi)
now yuvi is also shoked
UV- POOR TIA USKI LIFE MAIN PEHLE KAM PROBLEMS THI KI AB YEH OMG AB HUMHI KUCH KARNA PADEGA Cry
ASHI- HAAN UV AAJ MUJHE APNI LIFE MAIN PEHLI BAAR TIA KE LIYE RONA A RAHA HAI Cry

AND ASHI GOES TO MEET TIA SHE IS SITTING ON THE BENCH OUTSID MAURYA
ASHI- HI TIA Tongue
TIA- SHE QUICKLY WIPES HER EARS BUT ASHI HAS ALREADY SEEN THEM Cry AND SAYS HI ASHI TUM YAHAAN TUMHE TO UV KE SAATH HONA CHAHIYE THA Tongue

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ashi-ya but i think u need me more than him coz mumma ne mujhe sab bata diya Cry
tia-watttttttttttt????????????(tia is shoked to hear this)
ashi-yes tia n i think iske liye tumhe apne dad se baat karni chahiye

TIA- ARE U MAD ASHI TUM PAAGAL HO GAYI HO KYA TIA PAPPA KO YE KAISE BATA SAKTI HAI UNKI TO LIFE HI SOIL HO JAYEGI ASHI TIA KO BILKUL SAMAJH NAHI A RAHA KI WOH KYA KARE AND TEAR FELL DOWN FROM HER EYE Cry
TIA- ASHI TUM TIA KO CHILL HONE KE LIYE KEH RAHI HO AUR YAHAAN TIA APNI LIFE MAIN KITNI STRANGE PROBLEMS KO FACE KAR RAHI HAI EK TO RANVEER BHI US SHY KO BELIEVE KARTA HAI TIA KO NAHIN AND YAHAAN PAR MOM OH TIAS GOD
ashi:hey bhaggu..... no wonder tumhara naam timbo hai..
life mein har problem ko face karna sikho.. dont act a mouse

tia- accha ashi tum bahaut brave banti ho na to tum is situation ko kaise handle karti and woh bhi tab jab 18 years baad tumhe pata chale ki tumhaari mom zinda hai aur vo bhi vo mom jinhe tumhe apni life main kabhie nahi dekha she said sobbibg

ashi- even she was shocked she could understand her pain her tragedy her problems first time in her life she realised tias pain her sorrows her grief she said ib an emotional tone as a sister tia.............
tia- thik hai tumhe lagta hai ki isse faida hoga accha i mean and tabhie her mibile rings
tia- hello.... tia ahuja here
sm- hi princess
tia- papppa................
ashi- uncle
tia- haan papa bolo
sm- tia i want to meet u
tia- nahi papa, tia ko bahut kam hai-tia is very busy.
sm- kya kaha tumne tia- mujhe kuch sunayi nahin de raha. main wahan aa raha hoon.(he is driving)
tia- papa no aap mat aaiye, tia ne kaha na tia's very busy. papa papa suniye.
sm- he cuts d phone as he can't hear anything- he's on his way to Maurya
tia- ashi ab kya hoga mom bhi yahaan a rahi hain aur pappa bhi
ashi- oh god tia kuch to karna padega but tum apni mom ko pehchanogi kaise LOL

tia-ashi first time in life tia thinks that u are right.tia apni mom ko pechanegi kaise?
ashi-DUH!UH ye bhi tum mujhse hi puch rahi ho.

tia- ashi ab tia kya karegi tia is really very confused tum tia ki help karo na

ashi- uh timbo tumhaare paas apni mom ki koi photo hai
tia- nahi ashi pappa ne kabhie tia ko mum ki photo dikhaai hai ya nahi anjd one more thing ashi ho sakta hai ki woh lady jhoot bol rahi ho i mean maybe she is trying to fool us to charge a gr8 amount of money tumhe kya lagta hai LOL


ashi-i cant say anything.main mother india hun kya.
tia-kya pata ho bhi sakti ha.no one knows.
ashi-timboooooooooooooooo.



then tia recieves a call on her cell
tia- hello tia ahuja here
tara ahuja- hello beta mom here
tia- mom aap
ashi- shocked whatttt...........
tara ahuja- beta i want to meet you and plz tum ye baat apne dad ko mat batan a main tumhaare college a rahi hoon
tia- nahin nahin aap tia se kahiin aur milo
tara- thik hai cafe mochino 7 baje
tia - thik hai tia a jayegi
and she keeps the phone
ashi- kya hua timbo
tia- woh tia se milna chahti hain
tia- plz ashi tum tia ke saath chalogoi tia wahaan akele nahin jaana chahti
ashi- timbo main i mean ye to tumhaari aur tumhaari mom ki pri meet hai na
tia- nahi agar tumne kabhie tia ko apni frnd samjha hai to tum aaogi
ashi- phir to main nahi aaongi kyonki maine to tumhe kabhie apni rnd nahi samjha
tia-whattt
ashi- just kiddin timbo main tumhaare saath zaroo chaloongi
then tia recieves a call on her cell
tia- hello tia ahuja here
tara ahuja- hello beta mom here
tia- mom aap
ashi- shocked whatttt...........
tara ahuja- beta i want to meet you and plz tum ye baat apne dad ko mat batan a main tumhaare college a rahi hoon
tia- nahin nahin aap tia se kahiin aur milo
tara- thik hai cafe mochino 7 baje
tia - thik hai tia a jayegi
and she keeps the phone
ashi- kya hua timbo
tia- woh tia se milna chahti hain
tia- plz ashi tum tia ke saath chalogoi tia wahaan akele nahin jaana chahti
ashi- timbo main i mean ye to tumhaari aur tumhaari mom ki pri meet hai na
tia- nahi agar tumne kabhie tia ko apni frnd samjha hai to tum aaogi
ashi- phir to main nahi aaongi kyonki maine to tumhe kabhie apni rnd nahi samjha
tia-whattt
ashi- just kiddin timbo main tumhaare saath zaroo chaloongi



just then there is a knock on the door-
sumeet ahuja comes in
sm- hi girls, tum dono ek saath, kya chal raha hai
ashi- uncle kuch nahi nothin at all everything is cool
sm- itna explain karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai its fine. tia mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai- bahar aaogi plz.
tia- papa aapko jo bhi kehne hai yahan kahiye
sm- kuch private tha tia
ashi- cool, main bahar jati hoon
tia- nahin papa apko jo bhi kehna hai ashi ke samne kahiye ashi tia ki frnd hai aur tia apne frnds se kuch bhi hide nahi karti hai
sumeet- tia ye tum keh rahi ho hey bhaggu i cant believe
ashi- uncle....
sumeet- ok sorry
sumeet- baat ye hai ki ranveer ne resign kar diya hai
ashin tia-shiocked whattttt
thn tia sees her watch it is 7
tia- ashi 7 baj gaye
ashi- haan haaan chalte hain bye uncle
tia- bye pappa
sumeet - tum dono kahaan a
ashi-timbo plzzzzzzzzz agar uncle tumse privately kuchh baat karna chahte hain toh its cool wid me.
tia-ohhhhhhh !!!!!!!! Angry
ashi why dont u understand ???????



now suddenly there's a knock on the door n yuvi cums there
yuvi-hey ashi wassup? Tongue
ashi-yuvi wat happend? it seems like u wanna tak about sumthing very important!!!!!! Confused
yuvi-yah! can u plzzzzzzz cum wid me??
ashi luks at tia but tia is not willing to send her but sumhow she allows her Confused
ashi-so tia i ll see u later then
byeeeeee!!!! Big smile
tia- ashi plz ruk jao ( she says in her mind )
ashi and uv reach the shed and
ashi- uv jaldi bolo tumhe kya bolna hai
uv- ashi hv patience pehle kuch baatein karte hain and he comes close to ashi
just thn
ashi- uv stop mujhe jaana hai poor timbo bechaari sab kuch kaise handle karegi
uv- matlab wats d prob
asgi- tells her d whole story
uv-omg i never thought ke tia uitni badi prob akeli handel karlegi neways tumhe chalna chahiye she needs u more main apni bat phir kabhie batadoonga
ashi- thanx uv she kises uv on his cheek and goes
abhi tak tia has reached d gate of maurya
ashi shouts frm behind
ashi- timboooooooooooooooo......
tia - assssshi tuuuuuuuuuuuuuum aaaaaa jjaaaaaaaaooooo

tia- yahaan par toh koi bhi nahin hai ashi
just thn tia ka phone ring
tia- mumma hongi
she picks up d phone
tia- hello...
ranveer- hello tia hum ranveer
tia- shocked ranveeer tum

ranveer - haan tia hume aapse kuch baat karni hai
tia- ranveer tia abhi ek bahaut imp jagah hai tumse aake baat karegi
ranveer- thik hai to aap apna imp kaam kijiye aur hum aona karte hain humse baat karne ki koshish mat kijiyega
snd he cut d phone
tia- ranveer suno to,,........
ashi - kya hua timbo
tia- vo ashi
just thn a beautiful lady wearing formal clothes as iof she was a gr8 business lady came upto thm and
tara ahuja- hey tum tia ahuja ho ha
tia - haan aap
tara- main tara ahuja tumhaari mom
Confused 
tia looked at her in shock.
tu...tum ho....
tara:ha beta.mein.tumhari mom.tears filling her eyes.
tumhe maine bahut miss kiya hai beta.tumhe dekhne ke liye meri aakhe taras gayi thi.
she goes foward to hug her but tia backs off.
tia:ohhhh!!!!!toh tum ho tia ki maa. bahut jaldi yaad aa gayi tia ki.kya hua???tumhare boyfriend ne chod diya?
ab kyun ayi ho yaha???(tia was fuming with anger.she had spent her entire life thinking of her mom as an idol and now seeing her somehow,she felt,that tara was .......artificial)

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tara- she shouted on tia tia.........
tia- stop shoutting tia ko tumse koi bat nahi karni tia bas tumhe ye kehne aayi thi ki tum tia or uske dad ki life se door chali jaao sayin this she left wid ahi
tyhey reached outside the cafe ashi asked tia
ashi- tia tmne apni mom se itni rudely kyon baat ki
tia- ashi phir batao tia us us lady se kaise baat kare omg tia ki lifev main sab kitna twisty turney ho raha hai tia ne decide kar liya hai ki voh
ashi - tumne kya decide kiya hai timbo
tia- main yahaan se ja rahi hoon main us ja rahi hoon
ashi-whatt....
tia- ashi tia ke brains ko kuch nahi hua hai tia tang aa chuki hai wahaan woh ranveer shy aur yahaan par mom oh tia god tia mar jayegi
ashi- tia tum aise nahi ja sakti hum sab ko chodkar and especially REMIX ko
tia- REMIX ( the words just struck in her hurt but she couldnt show her grief she moved on ) remix ko koi aur replacement mil jayegi shyla hain na shyla would be perfect ranveer ko bhi woh bahaut pasand hai na
ashi- shut up tumbo remix tia ke begar kaise chalega
tia- woh tum socho she calls her dad up

sm- hello sumeet ahuja here..........
tia- pappa tia ko london jaana hai hamesha ke liye
sm- whatt tia tum paagal ho gayi ho kya, london all of a sudden
tia- pappa plz tia aapko woh sab baadme batayegi aap arrangements karo
sm- thik hai princess but ek baar phir soch lo
tia- pappa tia ne sochliya hai aap tickeyts book kijiye
and she disconnects the phone
ashi- tia ......

ashi: tia ek bar phir soch lo.. tia you are leaving maurya.. you are leaving me, yuvi, your angels, and ranveer.. agar tum chali jaogi to remix break up ho jayega and most importantly.. shyla ko ranveer ke saath flirt karne ka aur ek chance mil jaayega.
tia: kya!! ashi you're right..
ashi: of course du-uh
tia: agar tia chali gayi to woh creep ranveer ke saath full time rahegi.. tia yeh nahi dekh sakti..
ashi: to tum mumbai mein hi settled ho?
tia: haan ashi. and all thanks to you..
(they hug)
then they break apart
tia- but ashio tia ne yahaan rehne ke liye haan to kar di hai but tia yahaan kaise reh sakti hai matlab ki tia yahaan itni problems ke beech kaise survive karegi
and tabhi her mobile phone rings
sanveer- hello tia hum ranveer bol rahe hain
tia- ranveer tum
ranveer- tia humne ye bataane ke liye phone kiya tha ki hum shy ko date kar rahe hain and aapse break up kar rah haion
tia- but ranveer tum aisa
but he disconnects d phone
tia- ashi tia ja rahi hai tia yahaan nahi rewh sakti tia us jkayegi yahaa par kisi ko tia ki neeed nahi hai
and she runs away leaving a confused ashi behind LOL
Ashi : Hey Bhagu! iske brains wapas kar do ! Wink LOL
       Tia, Wait TIA...
Tia : Oh Tia's God... Ab Tia kya karegi... shayad aaj Tia ka in 18 years mein SABSE BAD DAY HAI.. Pehle woh lady jo apne aap ko Tia ki Mom kehti hai.. aur phir woh Ranveer ko woh Tacky Shy ko date karna aur ab yeh!... aur Tia ka dress bhi Bad ho gaya (starts crying .. when she feels sum1's had on her shoulder...........)

tia feels the hand on her shoulder and suddenly the voice says:
aap chinta mat kijiye tia.. hum aaj ka din aap ke 18 yrs ka sabse accha din bana denge


Tia turns around n c's Ranveer standing...
Tia: Ranveer, tum yahan?(hoping tht Ranveer is not actually dating ms.fish fry i mean Shy) LOL
Ranveer: Haan .... Ashi ne hume call kiya tha...
kyunki aap ke bina humari zindagi imagine bhi nahi kar sakte..
shyla achci to hai..
Tia: Ranveer stop it
Tia : Shyla achchi hai to uske paas kyun nahi jaate Ranveer? Tia ke paas kyun aaye ho?
She stops as soon as Ranveer's lips touches hers Embarrassed
tia : ranv..
r: nahi tia.. duniya ki koi ladki aap ki tarah khubsurat nahi ho sakti

aur na hi itni achi.
i love you tia aur shy toh bas ,aise hi,apko jelous karane ke liye thi.
woh bahut irritating hai tia.hamesha humare piche piche hi ghumthi rehti hai apni woh ow accent leke.
hum toh chup chup ke ke aaye hai yaha.unke saath rehne se pehle toh hum. Dead ....hum sanganer chalejange

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ashi was going alone from the park of maurya where usually no1 cums n she is rite now alone there

ashi-hey bhaggu!!!! Angry Angry Angry
        kya is tia naam ki timbo-timblet ke brains kyun nahin dete??? Angry


just then sum1 pulls her n pushes her to the side by tree

its none other than ............................................................ .................
        YUVI
uv- hey sweety tum itni lost kyon lag rahi ho
ashi- hey mai sweety nahi hoon
auv- thik hai ashi bolo y r u lookin so dull i mean anvesha banerjee rey or itni dull hey bhaggu LOL
ashi hits him
ashi- yuvi.........
yuvi- accha bolo ashi wats the matter darlin
ashi-
ashi: kuch nahi timbo ka US drama dekhke mujhe bhi actress banne ka man kar raha hai
mamma ki tarah

yuvi: drama? tia? tia to everyday drama karti hai
ashi: thats true
       but today was melodrama
yuvi-melodrama????????????wat melodrama Confused
ashi tells everything to him
yuvi-oh god!!!!!!!!!!tia aise kaise kar sakti hai?
i mean woh remix ko aise chhod kar nahin ja sakti Cry
aur ranveer??????????he has lost his brains.how can he do such a thing to tia .i ll definitely talk to him afterwardsAngry
ashi-afterwards?????????wat do u mean afterwards??????
yuvi-b'coz right now i wanna spend sum time wid u .we hav been too busy solving tia's probs that we didn't get time 4 each other............
ashi-yes u r right.... Embarrassed

ashi- ok to chalo lets go somewhere
just thn ashis mobile rings
ashi- hello anvesha banerjee rey here
tia- hello ashi
ashi - tia tum tia main tumhe keh rahi hoon ek baar phir soch lo
tia- hey hey ashi cool dowm ek prob solve ho gayi isiliye tia nahi jayegi
ashi- hey bhaggu thts an awesom news accha batao kaunsi news
tia- and she tells everythin to ashi
ashi- thanx bhaggu mujhe pata tha ki ranveer ke brains itne dirty nahi hain bas thode se clean hone ki zaroorat thi hey tia i am very happy ke tum ne ana decision change kar liye thanx
tia- ashi thanx to tia ko tumse kehna chahiye tumne tia ke liye bahaut kuch kiya hai tum tia ki true frnd ho
ashi- its ok tia hum chahe jitna bhi lad jhafgad le hum hai to frnds hi na right
tia- apsouletely rite ab tia phone rakhti hai tia aur ranveer date par ja rahe hain
ashi- ooooooooooh
tia- ok ok ab tum bhi uv ke saath time spend karo nahi to use bahaut bura lagega
ashi- haan haan woh cyco idhar hi hai
tia- ha ha ha ha ab to bechaare uv ko cyco bulaana chod do neways bye
ashi- bye aur zyaada tension mat lena its not good for skin ok
tia- ashi..... accha bye and she cuts the phone
uv- to kya baat hui tia se
ashi-hey i told u na that ranveer is not that bad Wink
(she knew that she has never said so..........) LOL
yuvi-hey hold on tumne yeh kab kaha?????????? Confused
ashi-i know i have never said it but now atleast i m saying sooooooooooooo Embarrassed
yuvi-by da way ranveer ne kya kaha jo tum uski itni praise kar rahi ho?
ashi-well, ranveer ne tia ke saath patch-up kar liya hai.
yuvi - really????????? its gr8

ashi-ya!!!!!!!!! ek woh hai jisne  tia se door reh kar bhi uski problem ko identify kar liya aur ek tum ho  jo apni girlfrnd ke itne paas hoke bhi  uski feelings ko identify nahin kar pa rahe ho...................CryCryCry
yuvi-wat do u mean??????????????

ashi-cum on yuvi!!!!!!!!!! abhi toh  tum  keh rahe the ki tumhe mere saath  kuchh  time spend karna hai....................some special moments{she said moving closer to him}

yuvi......................

yuvi- oh sorry darlin to hum kahaan the
he said movin close to ashi
ashi- hey hey uv hold sab dekh rahe hain
uv- to dekhne do main kisi aur ko nahi apni jaan ko hi pyaar kar raha hoon Embarrassed
ashi- stop uv hum kahiin aur chalte hain jahaan hum akele ho Embarrassed
yuvi-i cant believe that anvesha banerjee ray wants to hide LOL
ashi-yuvi wat do u mean?? Angry . listen i don want ppl to c us like this coz its kinda embarassing u c(makes a i dont like kinda face)

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uv- oh ya embarracing accha accha itna sulk mat karo chalo hum kahiin aur chalte hain Embarrassed
ashi- hey thanx jaaan and she kisses yuvi on his cheek in front of everyone Embarrassed
uv- ok to kahaan jayen Confused
ashi- ek jagah hai
uv- to bolo na Confused
ashi- mumma ka farmarea Smile
uv- farm area ? Confused
ashi- haan farm area woh maurya se i ghante ka rasta hai Confused
uv- ooooooooh to chalo hum wahiin chalte hain Embarrassed
yuvi was driving his car n ashi was sitting next 2 him
ashi-yuvi i m very excited.......it wud be such a fun...............only me n u Embarrassed ......no 1 else......wow........ Smile
yuvi-i m excited too... Wink
finally they reached da farmarea.it was a beautiful place.........amidst green gardens..........hundreds of colourful flowers...........facing da huge sea.........it was like heaven.............
yuvi-wowwwwwwww ashi..........its very beautiful............
ashi-u really think so???????
yuvi-ya ...........but obviously not beautiful       like u Embarrassed
ashi-thanx yuvi{she said blushing}now tell me wat to do????????????
yuvi-wat else.......... u know wat 4 we hav cum here{he said naughtily moving closer to ashi}
ashi.............

phewwwwwwwwwwwww jnow u cont main to thak gayiLOL




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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 8:50am | IP Logged
who told u 2 write soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much in detail
by da way u did a gr8888888888888888888 job n i guess tumhari saari mehnat toh is me hi chali gayi LOL
really yaar i m not kidding at allllllllll
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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 10:36am | IP Logged
haan yaar u r correct woh actually it was just too much woh actually mujhe brief main likhna nahi pasand to i thought ke y not rite a longer summaruy so tht eveybody jisko samajh na aaya ho pad sake newaysherez the next part


ashi- she said movin back uv pehle saari jagah dekh lete hain thn we will see
uv- what do u mean we will see
ashi- accha accha abhi chlo tumhe kisi se milvana hai
uv - kisse
ashi- chalo to
uv- ok jaisa tum kaho
they go and reach a beautiful stable there was in the middle there was a cowboyish lookin boy named daksh who was feedin the horses
ashio- chalo uv
daksh- hi ashi whos this long-haired guy
uv- in an angry tone hey you
ashi- gigling LOL daksh he is uv my frnd and uv he is daksh my best frnd
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 12:08am | IP Logged
daksh-hi yuvi!!!!!!!!!1nice 2 meet u
uv-hi daksh!!!!!!!me too.
but ashi u never told me bout daksh who's ur best frnd.................. Ouch
ashi-woh..........yuvi...........bas aise hi..............{she didn't know wat to say}
yuvi-its fine sweetheart.......dont get upset
daksh-sweetheart{he was confused}............wat do u mean????ashi, is there sumthing that u r hiding from me????????????? Angry
ashi-ya daksh........woh actually..........yuvi n me r dating
daksh-hey y didn't u tell me earlier.i m very happy Smile
ashi-really!!!!!!!!!!i mean u r not angry?
daksh-y wud i b angry?????in fact i liked ur boyfrnd ........i think he is right 4 u.......
yuvi was feeling a bit out of place standing b/w these 2 frnds................


now sum1 else plzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 3:55am | IP Logged
yuvi- ashi tum dono baat karo main main chalta hoon
ashi: kyuun theiro hum ek saath chalenge
yuvi: nahin tym apne BESTFRIEND see baat karo main ja raha hoon kuch kaam hain see u later

ashi could not understand what was going on but daksh had. he understood that yuvi did not like daksh and didnort wnat ashi too talk to him
daksh: ashi mujhe lagta hain ke yuvi doenot like me
ashi: nahin daksh yuvi ko koi objection nahin hain hamri dosti see
daksh: see ashi humme pata hain ke humare beech dosti ke sivaye aur kuch nahin hain kehin yuvi is a bit possesive abt you that is he doesnot want you to mix along wid me
ashi: i diont think soo( acting very cool) agar aisei baat hain bhi toh main yuvi se baat karungi aur saab fix kar dungi ok daksh
daksh: hope saab sulaj jaye Wink

then ashi leaves to talk to yuvi in his room

now continue



he kriti see i have at last filled the necxt part Wink
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 5:21am | IP Logged
she reached maurya she went to the shed she knew uv will be there she smiled nwent to him
she sat very close to him and started fidgeting wid his curls
ashi- main tumse bahaut naraaz hoon tum aise hi chale aaye main tumhe woh jagah dikhane nahi lekar gayi thi i wanted to spend some time wid you but tumne sab kuch spoil ka diya not fair
uv- in a very very angry tone accha to u think i was wrong but tum kya sahi thi tum tum us daksh se baatein karne lag gayi as if i donot exixt wacko
ashi- hey uv tum daksh ke baare main kuch mat kaho he is my best frnd
uv- oh ya jaise main to koi fool hoon na tum mujhe double date kar rahi ho maijn jaanta hoon tum tum us daksh jaise r*ko date kar rahi ho
ashi- stop it uv tum uske baare main aisa nahi bol sakte u hv no rite to say so woh bechaara use ........and she stopped
uv- haan bolo na kya hai us us wacked out creature ko
ashi- shut up uv for god sake chup ho jao tum jaante bhi ho uske baae main use use aids hai she shouted and went away crying Cry

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