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FANFIC: "Jeevansaathi" (Page 5)

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wow....man it was just too good....i loved it....u got sum gr8 writing skillz....Clap Clap  Clap
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Setting: St.John's Library

     The librarian looks up from her Time Magazine as laughter is heard from the left side of the library. She looks over but cannot make out the guilty party. She stands up and walks around her desk and starts following the loud laughter. She stops right in front of a boy whose face is contorted into a comical expression and directly across from him, a girl who is laughing uncontrollably and as a result is clutching her stomach.

Librarian: Kripa?!

Kripa looks towards the voice and suddenly stops laughing.

Kripa:Ms. Smith, I uh...actually...

Angad's comical expression is replaced with one of guilt.

Librarian: Kripa, why are you making so much noise? This is a library, if you have forgotten!

Kripa: Actually, ma'am I didnt mean to...I uh...

Angad: Actually, its not Kripa's fault at all Ms. Smith, I was annoying her actually. She told me to stop it, but I couldnt resist and my jokes got to her. Please ma'am, it isnt Kripa's fault.

Kripa looks at Angad, with a shocked, yet grateful expression.

Librarian: That is not an excuse Mister...

Angad: Angad Khanna

Libarian: ...Khanna! But Kripa, since it is your first warning, I will not punish you two. But do mind it that I never have to speak to both of you again about making too much noise in the library again!

Angad and Kripa: of course, Ms.Smith.

The elderly librarian hesitates but soon turns on her heels and heads for her desk again.

Angad: sorry Kripa, I got you into trouble.

Kripa: Angad, please! We were both equally guilty of being too loud in the library, but you took the whole blame on yourself, I have no words to thank you with Angad.

Angad sheepishly says: kam se kam, itna tho karsakta hoon. After all, youre notes are so good that Im sure I will ace that Professor Ganguli's class. Can you imagine her face when she sees that I am doing well, despite my contrary implications? Voh din tho bohot acha rahega!

Angad grins

Kripa: Meri dua hai ke tum chemistry aur tumhare sab clases ko pass karo, with flying colors! You are a good person Angad, and good things happen to good people. Thank you for taking the blame on yourself Angad even though...

Angad interrupts her: mujhe emberass math karo Kripa! If you can lend me your notes on the first day of classes, I can do this for you at the very least. Vaise bhi, Ganguli's ki chehre par jho shocked expression hoga na, voh sirf tumhare notes hi laenge. Changa kagi?

Kripa laughs and says: bilkul!

Angad grins from ear to ear and Kripa smiles warmly, her eyes twinkling.

Beep. The next class has started.

Angad and Kripa look up at the intercome, get up and both say at the same time: I need to go class now.

They both look at each other and laugh.

Angad: Bye Kripa, Ill see you tomorrow!

Kripa: Bye Angad



Edited by bollywoodfan - 27 March 2006 at 7:26pm
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Setting: The Sharma's Kitchen

     A small framed girl of 14 years of age hunches over a bowl of shelled shrimp in the kitchen sink. Her long black hair comes onto her face as she efficiently and quickly strips each individual shrimp of its shell. She hears the main door open and close and turns towards the sound. Like her older sister, Divya has green eyes but they are not as intense as Kripa's are. Instead, they are much lighter and had their own mysterious gleam to them.

Divya: Didi?

Kripa: Hey Divya, what are you doing jaan?

Divya smiles and holds up some shrimps.

Kripa laughs.

Kripa: Let me help Divya

Divya: Thanks didi.

Kripa folds up her kameez sleeves and joins Divya in stripping shrimps.

Kripa: so how was first day of high school?

Divya: Can't say Didi. Classes look good, but I dont know anyone yet.

Divya looks down.

Kripa: are, koi baath nahin jaan! Im sure as time goes on, you'll make many friends! Youre just so sweet like that!

Kripa reaches over and kisses Divya on the forehead.

Divya: really Didi?

Kripa: really jaan.

Divya's eyes gleam harder as she looks at her older sister with the respect and awe of a fan to a celebrity.

Divya: Didi, did you think of something for Pop's birthday party?

Kripa stops what she is doing. Suddenly she rememberes having put away the blank paper on which she was supposed to have made a guest list on for the party. Angad had come and between his jokes and imitations of various professors and her anectodes, she didnt even once think of the party planning. Two hours has slipped by just like that in Angad's words...

Divya: Didi? Didi?

Kripa: Hmm? Oh! Divya, actually, I didnt get a chance to, but you dont worry, I'll take care of everything. Ok?

Divya: ok Didi

Kripa: Divya, let me finish this, why dont you go start your homework.

Divya: Are you sure didi, theres so many shrimps left to be unshelled.

Kripa: You dont worry jaan, go do your homework, varna bohot late ho jayega.

Dyvia: youre the best Didi!!!

She washes her hands and hugs Kripa from the side.

Kripa: We are the best jaan.

Kripa leans over and plants a kiss on Divya's head.

With that, Divya leaves to go to her room and start her homework, leaving Kripa to do the rest of the shrimps for dinner and wondering how the two hours had passed so quickly and unknowingly in Angad's company.

To be continued...

Edited by bollywoodfan - 27 March 2006 at 7:42pm
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by taniya_22

wow....man it was just too good....i loved it....u got sum gr8 writing skillz....Clap Clap  Clap
plz cont. soon...me waitin impatiently....Big smile


aww! thank you so much yaar!  Your wonderful words truly mean a lot to me! Big smileHug

Enjoy! Big smile
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Originally posted by unum ali

continue soon its great


thank you so much ji! Big smileHug

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