Joined: 12 January 2005
Happy Belated 16th Birthday
Hope you had a great party, you story was absolutely marvelous, can't wait for more, can't believe that a sixteen year old wrote this article, what an imagination!
Joined: 28 March 2005
Joined: 12 January 2005
Where are you? You were supposed to post the scene this morning, i guess you must be busy, but please do post it when you find the time,
MAKE IT A PRIORITY, WE WAITING IMPATIENTLY
Joined: 31 March 2005
Joined: 05 March 2005
finally everything is over
it was a great party and it got over at 11.30 at night
i m sorry to keep u all waiting
finally i finished this part
hope you all enjoy
Disha looks into DK's eyes passionately as if looking to find some answers in there.
DK looks at Disha, he knew that Disha loves him but it was confirmed today that she does love him but she is not sure of it in her mind although in her heart.
Disha and DK in soft low voices …………….
Disha- bolo naa Dushyant, mujhe aisa kyon lagaa………………
DK- Disha , yeh tumhe mujhe nahi lekin apne dil se pooch naa chaahiya.
Disha- kya matlab
DK- matlab yeh ki jo tum apne rishto ke bare me soch rahi ho uske bare me tum pakki nahi ho. Tumhare man me kuch shak hai ki jo tum soch rahi ho, kahi usi ko tum apnalogi to shayad tumhe dhoka na mile.
Disha- mai samjhi nahi, anyways don't worry about all this, I was just thinking unnecessarily. This is for me to find out
They both sit in silence for some time in the balcony when……….
Disha- DK aaj mujhe bohot akela mehsoos ho rahaa hai. Can you hold me
DK spreads his arms and Disha comes really close to him. DK hugs her very tightly and disha cuddles very comfortably in his strong arms. they sit there for a while when…….
DK- Disha do you love me
Disha- [looks up at him and smiles] why do you ask
DK- because I feel that you do but you are hesitating in telling me. You know that I am not too good with words and maybe that is why u are not sure wether you should confess you love to me
Disha- I am sorry Dushyant if I am making you feel that its your fault that I am in dilemma. I didn't mean to do that
DK- don't worry about it Disha, its late you should get some rest
Disha and DK smile at each other and both of them go to the bed in the suite. Disha lies down on the bed and DK puts the blanket on her and dims the lights and is a little bent towards her when….Disha holds the collar of his t-shirt and pulls him closer to her….
Disha- DK tum jaante ho hum kahaa hai
DK-kya matlab Disha
Disha- hum kaun se room me hai
DK[looks confused]- Honeymoon suite
Disha- smiles..aur yahaa kaun aata hai
DK- I don't know disha, what do you want to say[ guess his back hurts with too much bending] say it clearly
Disha- smiles at him again and gets him a little bit more close……DK tum mujhe pooch rahe the naa ki mai tumhse pyar karti hoo ya nahi. Toh mera jawab hai ki……[by now she has pulled him on the bed really close to her]….[she remembers the night scene]……..[she whispers in his ear] I LOVE YOU DK AND I WANT YOU.
DK is surprised and shall I say really happy, he says ,………
DK- Disha I LOVE YOU TOO .[ he touches her face gently and kisses her on the lips and she opens her eyes and looks into his eyes. They both are lost in their world and………………
THE NEXT MORNING……
Disha gets up early and is sitting on the bed. She looks at DK and is adoring him. She thinks that he looks so peaceful when he is sleeping. She caresses his hair and is looking at him lovingly
She thinks that for the first time she feels as if she did not regret taking this step. She is happy that she confessed her love to DK. She fells that a huge burden has been taken off her heart. Her not telling him that she is in love with DK was stopping her from getting close to her. She touches DK's face and VOWS that she will put her best to keep this relationship
Joined: 05 December 2004
god i am crazy about reading these spectacular scene wowwww and just asking for more more there u go once again my point is plz post the next scene i am sorry KP but this is how i feel
Joined: 05 March 2005
Joined: 21 January 2005
Oh so nice....... do continue! Does she now cuddle up next to him, waking him by her touch? And he rolls over and smiles at her, caressing her face, thanking her for the most wonderful night of his life............ I better go now.......
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