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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 8)

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just write ur fic n it really really really rocked .
its tooooooooooo goood yaar . frm where do u get such nice nice ideas? LOL
plz continue fast

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it was awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plz cont
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Originally posted by srkm

there is another intresting part of ashi-yuvi romance which i just wrote n i cant help but post it...for all ashi-yuvi fans!!

Part 5

Deuce…
Anvesha score a point…
Ohh missed!!!
Elizabeth serves
Deuce!!
Last set

It was Tuesday n ashi's tournament….yuvi, tia n ranveer went to support her….
Y: yooo!!!!ashi….u can do it!! …go ashi go!!!!!….ashi rockzzzzzzzz!!!!!!
Yuvi was cheering madly for ashi…he wanted her to win…..desperatly….becoz he knew it meant a lot to her….

Good serve by anvesha…
Elizabeth scores….
Scores level….
The next point is the deciding factor…whoever gets it wins!!!

Yuvi could hear the commentator saying….
Y: ohh come on ashi u can do it….come on…go for it…
R: ha banaa chill!!! Tension mat lo….
T: tia can feel the pressure herself….tia hopes ashi get the point fast….

And…and….elizabeth scores!!!! N elizabeth thomas wins the game!!!!!!

Yuvi's heart sank…..it was as if he had lost….he felt terrible…but he knew ashi obviously felt worse….

Ashi congratulated her opponent n left without saying a word to the anxious press….n went straight to changing room…

Yuv entered the room n saw ashi seated at the corner on a bench….her hands buried inside her face….
Yuvi sat next to her without saying a word….ashi looked up n then down at the ground again…
"yuvi just….just leave me alone for sometime plz….im fine…I wanna be alone", ashi managed to say…
"ashi….." without saying another word yuvi turned to leave, when ashi caught his hand…
"I …I …really..really wanted to win….win the game"….ashi said choked….
"its okay ashi….i know it means the world to u….but its okay sweety….u win some , u lose some rite??!!!"
"ya…but..but I was playing so well till the end…..i could have easily won only for if the last set…"
"ya…u were brilliant throughout the game….seriously"
"but…i…I dint win nah"….
tears rolled down ashi's eyes as she said this….

Yuvi knew it meant the world to her…her game….her passion….that's why probably it was so difficult to face failure….

Yuvi put his arms around her, " its okay….plzz ashi…don't…life moves on….it was just not ur day sweetheart…."

Ashi's head just fell on his shoulder…n she experienced a sense a comfort….a relief that she had not since 5 yrs now….a magically feeling…alien to all….but so known to her….a feeling she always got from yuvi n only yuvi….

"its okay….don't cry….plz don't…part of life ashi….don't cry…u cry so even I cry…my heart cries ashi….i can feel ur pain sweetheart…"

These words struck ashi….the word 'feel' n 'pain' ringing in her ears….she forgot all about losing the game….she couldn't contain herself n just hugged yuvi tightly….yuvi hugged her too….unaware of the outside world….they were in their own world….a world in which only ashi n yuvi belonged….a world so beautiful…so nice…so wonderful..

"thanks yuvi…its very nice of….
Before she could complete the sentence….yuvi stopped her "shhhhh…"
Ashi looked at him n shut her eyes…she had not experienced such a moment….she dreamed of it all the time n now finally it was here…..yuvi moved forward to kiss her but….something made him not do it…he did not want to take advantage of ashi's mental state….he didn't want her to regret it later….
He slowly kissed her forehead n whispered…
" You are still the best ashi….."

ashi just blushed….n they were interrupted by ranveer n tia…yuvi hastily got up

R: ashi aap theek toh hai nah???….
A: ya thakur….im fine…
R: losing is a part n parcel of the game rite?!!
A: ya….it was just not my day today n….n anywayz im still the best…."
Ashi looked at yuvi while saying this….n yuvi just nodded n gave his adorable smile…
Ashi got up n started packing her stuff
Y: ashi…
A: yuvi chill!!!…im fine…
Y: ur sure
A: yes physco….chale…
R: ya lets go…
A: u guys go….i'll just pack n come….
Yuvi was walking when ashi came n caught his hand
A: thanks so much yuvi…it was really nice of u…
She hugged him….n yuvi hugged her back….he didn't want this moment to ever end….lost in each others arms….it was…bliss!!!!
R: yuvi ..hum…agar aap ruk…toh….aa….chale??!
Yuvi has embarrassed n walked out quickly ….ranveer smirked at ashi n ashi gave a wht-now-thakur shrug expression….





I  can't  be  regular  all  the  time,but  plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz  count  me  in  EVERYTIME  u  post  a  part.

This  part  was:Embarrassed

And  this  is  fr  u:HugHugHug

I luvvvvvvvvvvv  you  fr  this  part!

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I  can't  be  regular  all  the  time,but  plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz  count  me  in  EVERYTIME  u  post  a  part.

This  part  was:Embarrassed

And  this  is  fr  u:HugHugHug

I luvvvvvvvvvvv  you  fr  this  part!

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thkz so much dia....n try reading the next part which i post by tonight....

this is for u....Hug

thkz again...

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 4:24am | IP Logged
it was awesome.....specially the last part....truely loved it........ Embarrassed

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