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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 61)

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plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon.eagerly wating 4 ur next part.

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guys im sorry sorry but here is the next part...

 

Vrinda was getting ready for a long nice Sunday noon cleaning session….her phone rang….n looking at the name on the phone, her face brightened….

 

V: hiii ashi!!!!!...goodmorning

A: hello mate… by thw way what is so good abt the morning?...itna sad sa din hai

V: ashi…kya hua?...aaj Sunday ko how come tum itne dull sound kar rahe ho?

A: hmmmm…well just so pakoaed yaar…what were u doing?

V: me…bas about to start my house cleaning…

A: wah!!! mein yaha confusion mein mar rahe ho aur vrindeshwariji apni cleaning kar rahe hai.....

V: whats wrong ashi…tum kitne confused kyun ho?

A: I don't know mate…bas im confused...

V: but about wht atleast tell me that?

A: er…vrinda…voh mein…er..i was thinking…er..abt what..er..

Vrinda completed the sentence for her…v: yuvi said rite?!!

A: ya

V: ashi look I know for sure that he really loves you…n also that u guys are perfect for each other….ashi he is someone who u can share ur problems with…he is someone who u love fighting...hitting…arguing wid…face it u really missed him when he went to germany…ashi yeh pyaar nahi toh aur kya hai….

A: par mate…im not sure he is more than a friend or just a friend…u can share n fight n miss ur friend also..

V: ashi if he was just a friend u wont be so bothered about what he says or what he thinks….if he was just a frd ashi, u wont be in this state on a Sunday afternoon…ur thinking, ur confused n ur looking for answers….that shows ashi that u care…dis concern cant  arise for just-a-frd…yuvi n u have more to each other than just being great friends….remember the times in maurya, when u guys were dating…weren't they the most special n enjoyable moments of ur life…tell me weren't they?

Ashi: ya they were…the most happinest n special days…

V: exactly ashi…have u ever wondered why u never got urself to date anyone else after ur break-up wid yuvi…why so ha ashi…that because u have always loved him…from the time he entered maurya n even after ur break-up…u have continued to loved him all these years…n u still love him…ur just not ready to accept it…ashi, forgo ur stubbornness, forgive him for his mistakes…listen to ur inner voice…look at urself…reflect…n ashi ur words back to u today. ' do what ur heart tells u to do'

A (choked): vrinda…i…I never thought of all this…I was so stuck up wid my ego…I just didn't realize that I still love him…yes, mate I love him…he is the one my heart wants to be with…all this while when he was in front of me…ohh I never realized did I?...what an idiot…I haven't seen it in his eyes but vrinda…

V: I have… well trust me I have seen immense love for u in yuvis eyes…I have seen it ashi…n u will too, go with a loving heart to him…u will see it in his eyes…u should hear at him sing..his voice…those eyes…uff..u will see it ashi…u will

A: k thanks so much mate…now bye…I have wasted a lot of time…but no more.. bye

V: arey ashiii..er..ash…

But before vrinda couldn't say anything more, ashi banged the phone…n vrinda knew this was it….this was an awakening…

 



Edited by srkm - 30 July 2006 at 5:08am

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thank you mitali jaldii de Tongue
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next part

" ashi…ashi…hold on ashi..why are u pulling me…u know this guitar is heavy…hello!!...stop running....wacko!!!!!!" yuvi was screaming at the excited ashi who was pulling him towards the wet sand on the beach…

ashi had barged into his house…pulled him n his guitar out n drove to the beach…she want him to sing n play the guitar there….

 A: here….now play here will u yuvi?...sing for me?

Y: hmmm…ashi

But he stopped n looked at her eyes…he saw something in them, which made him very happy…he now perfectly understood what was happening….awakening!!...

Y: okay ashi…sit there…

N he sang in his meodious voice….

 

Zaara naazar uthake dekho
Baithe hai hum yahi
Bekhabar mujhse kyon ho?
Itne boore bhi hum nahin

Zamane ki baaton mein uljho na
Hai yeh aasaan janana
Khud se jo agar tum poocho
Hai hum tumhare ke nahi
Teri aankhon ka jaadu
Poori duniya pe hai
Duniya ki iss bheed main
Sabse peeche hum khade

Mehfile aayi aur gayi
Log aaye aur gaye
Tum jo aaj aaye ho
Dil mein ho bas gaye

Muskurake baat taalo na
Phir miloge jo kahin
Dekhana yahi kahoge
Itne boore the hum nahi

Teri aankhon ka jaadu
poori duniya pe hai
Duniya ki is bheed mein
sabse peeche hum khade

  

He looked at her…she stared at those dark , expressive but calm eyes…she got up n walked towards him…as she neared him…she opened her mouth to speak…but he broke into another song…the guitar doing its magic again in his strong hands….

 

Look into my eyes - you will see
What you mean to me
Search your heart - search your soul
And when you find me there you'll search no more

Don't tell me it's not worth tryin' for
You can't tell me it's not worth dyin' for
You know it's true
Everything I do - I do it for you

He went high pitch on the this line….his eyes were shut…n he opened them to see her's filled…a tear rolled down…but she smiled n sang

 

All the while you were in front of me i never realized
i jus' can't believe i didn't see it in your eyes
i didn't see it, i can't believe it
oh but i feel it
when you sing to me

 

i live off how you make me feel
so i question all this bein' real
cuz i'm not afraid to love
for the first time i'm not afraid of love

oh, this day seems made for you and me
and you showed me what life needs to be
yea you sang to me, oh you sang to me

 

he, yuvi understood what she meant by this song…it expessed her feeling completely…he saw those wet eyes again…n hugged her tight…

 

Y: I know sweety, its okay...

A: yuvi I don't believe u man…u actually waited all this while for me…n I..I was such an idiot…I never saw it, did i?...thank u for ur patience yuvi…

Y: hey ashi…don't…I would wait for u till the rest of my life, if I had to…for this moment which can last me forever...

A (confidently): well physco…finally ur wait is over…duh…I love you!!!!!!

Y: I love u too sweetheart!!

Yuvi sang

how i long to hear you sing beneath the clear blue skies
ashi sang:

and i promise you this time i'll see it in your eyes

i didn't see it, i can't believe it

yuvi:

oh but i feel it

ashi:

when u sing to me

 

(they both sing one..one line of the song….n hug each other…lost in their own world of love…they danced, blushed, sang, cried…everything in this one day…which seemed to have been made for them)

 

 

 



Edited by srkm - 30 July 2006 at 5:16am

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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 5:18am | IP Logged
mitali ab main teri fic ke baare maina ur kya boloon everybody and even u urself know tht wat an awesom writer u r so no need telling you again n again .............. but haan i ould say i love ur fic and u too .....gosh wat an amazing writer you are here is ur prize Clap
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 5:20am | IP Logged
i hope this consensates for not writing for so many days...2 parts in a row...all i need now is ur comments...critism...everything...

the first hindi song is 'sabse peeche hum khade' from the movie lets enjoy (not sure of d movie name)
second- 'everything i do - bryan adams...(its just half d song)...
third- u sang to me- mark anthony...(its continued in the end also)

njoy...n plzzzzzzzz post ur valuable comments
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