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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 6)

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plzzzzzzzzzz cont

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hey your fic was cool Clap Clap Clap
plz continue fast
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continue fast na....i liked yr fic!
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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 7:16am | IP Logged
here is the next part...

Part 4

Yuvi calls ashi on Sunday…

Y : hello??
A : hey yuvi…
Y: hey…ssup?
A: nothing much…just back from practice…
Y: acha…so kya plan hai….u wanna have band practice?
A: ya that's what I was thinking…Sunday hai toh thakur n u are free aur tia….
Y: tia maybe busy but we can request her to spare sometime…..it will be relaxing for her too as she is soo stressed nowdays…..
A: ya that timblet!!!
Y: but man its so cool to be back….jamming again…..
A: ya purane yaadein taaza….a…a….i mean ya its great
Yuvi hesistates n changes the topic quickly…
Y: so what time?
A: 6 o'clock….
Y: okay I'll call ranveer n tia…
A: nahi nahi…don't….thakur call timbo…..ya ….then.. they'll….interact…ya then….
Y: hey wait fast-train…stop talkin to urself n explain….whtz ur plan huh????
A: u know yuvi I think they both still like each other….i mean maybe…im not sure ….par as usual they will not tell each other….u know them nah…
Y: so u mean we have to get them to interact….kinda patch them up????!!!
A: ya…lets see…anywayz u call thakur n tell him to call tia…
Y: ok….cool then…6 it is…
A: ya bye…
Y: byee…tc

Yuvi tells ranveer about the meeting n tells him to pass it on to tia

Ranveer calls tia

R: hello???
T: hello, ranveer???
R: yes tia hum ranveer hai…
T: hi ranveer, how r u?
R: good…aur aap?
T: tia toh bas bahut tired hai….
R: tia aap kaam mein kitna busy hojati hai ki aap aaram nahi karti hai….
T: I know ranveer…par there is so much to do…par aaj Sunday hai so kuch jaada kaam nahi hog payega…
R: ya…waise aaj band ki practice hai…we thought lets have it today at yuvi's place, if ur free???
T: hmnnn…well ya tia free hai ….. anyway tia needs to get her mind off work n this fashion week…n music is the best option
R: ya it will divert ur mind to something other than work….
T: ya…wht time then?
R: 6 o'clock
T: ohh..great…tia can finish some work till then
R: tia plzz thoda relax ho jayeye
T: (softly) ohh ranveer….ur sooo sweet…
R: kya??!!
T: kuch nahi….nothin…byee then meet u at yuvi's place..
R: ya tia byee…tc
T: u too byee..

At the yuvi's residence

Y: ufff!!! Ashi aur tia kab aayegi??
R: chill baana…tia bahut busy hai wid the fashion week …
Y: ya ya…hum toh sab faltu hai rite??!!…
R: baana I didn't mean that…its just that she is very busy
Y: hmnn….kitna concern tia ke liye??….whatz up huh dude??
R: kuch nahi banaa…aap bhi nah…
Y: ya ya!!!!…blush karna baand karo!!!
R: BAAANNAA!!!!
Y: chill dude
The door bell rings n yuvi goes to open it

A: hi yuvi
Y: hey ashi….ssup?
A; tumhara brain transplantation operation….
Y: shut up wacko!!
R: hey ashi
A: hello thakur…tia kaha hai??
R: bas aati he hoge….bahut kaam hai nah unhe fashion house mein
A: well mein aur yuvi toh jobless hai!!!!….tia tia tia….kya jaadu kar rakha hai vo timbo ne tum par thakur?
R: (stammering) ashi….aap kya…kuch nahi…vo toh bas hum…kuch bhi….sochti hai aap…tia…toh…hum toh bas….aaaa…vo..a ..aa…
A: stammer karna baad karo…
R: hum sach bol rahe hai
Y: yes baanaa…we believe u!!!! totally…;)

The door bell rings again n this time its tia
Y: hey tia….finally
T: hi yuvi…sorry vo tia got late….kitna kaam hai nah…
A: okay okay…busy tia ahuja!!!!….ab practice shuru kare…

They practice for sometime …trying different tunes….n composing a tune for the song tia wrote…
R: its very good tia….superhit!!!
A: ya tia…too good…
Y: ya perfect!!!!
T: thankz guys….now tia has to go..
A: ya I have to go too….practice… day after tomorrow tournament hai…
R: ohhh ya…we all will be there ashi to support u….
Y: we will surely come.
T: tia will try her best to make it ashi.
A: tia chill…u see ur convenience….
Y: ya thts there…but it's a important game rite?
A: ya very important…specially for me….it's a international level thing yaar…
R: ya anywayz good luck

They all depart…..



Edited by srkm - 26 March 2006 at 7:17am

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there is another intresting part of ashi-yuvi romance which i just wrote n i cant help but post it...for all ashi-yuvi fans!!

Part 5

Deuce…
Anvesha score a point…
Ohh missed!!!
Elizabeth serves
Deuce!!
Last set

It was Tuesday n ashi's tournament….yuvi, tia n ranveer went to support her….
Y: yooo!!!!ashi….u can do it!! …go ashi go!!!!!….ashi rockzzzzzzzz!!!!!!
Yuvi was cheering madly for ashi…he wanted her to win…..desperatly….becoz he knew it meant a lot to her….

Good serve by anvesha…
Elizabeth scores….
Scores level….
The next point is the deciding factor…whoever gets it wins!!!

Yuvi could hear the commentator saying….
Y: ohh come on ashi u can do it….come on…go for it…
R: ha banaa chill!!! Tension mat lo….
T: tia can feel the pressure herself….tia hopes ashi get the point fast….

And…and….elizabeth scores!!!! N elizabeth thomas wins the game!!!!!!

Yuvi's heart sank…..it was as if he had lost….he felt terrible…but he knew ashi obviously felt worse….

Ashi congratulated her opponent n left without saying a word to the anxious press….n went straight to changing room…

Yuv entered the room n saw ashi seated at the corner on a bench….her hands buried inside her face….
Yuvi sat next to her without saying a word….ashi looked up n then down at the ground again…
"yuvi just….just leave me alone for sometime plz….im fine…I wanna be alone", ashi managed to say…
"ashi….." without saying another word yuvi turned to leave, when ashi caught his hand…
"I …I …really..really wanted to win….win the game"….ashi said choked….
"its okay ashi….i know it means the world to u….but its okay sweety….u win some , u lose some rite??!!!"
"ya…but..but I was playing so well till the end…..i could have easily won only for if the last set…"
"ya…u were brilliant throughout the game….seriously"
"but…i…I dint win nah"….
tears rolled down ashi's eyes as she said this….

Yuvi knew it meant the world to her…her game….her passion….that's why probably it was so difficult to face failure….

Yuvi put his arms around her, " its okay….plzz ashi…don't…life moves on….it was just not ur day sweetheart…."

Ashi's head just fell on his shoulder…n she experienced a sense a comfort….a relief that she had not since 5 yrs now….a magically feeling…alien to all….but so known to her….a feeling she always got from yuvi n only yuvi….

"its okay….don't cry….plz don't…part of life ashi….don't cry…u cry so even I cry…my heart cries ashi….i can feel ur pain sweetheart…"

These words struck ashi….the word 'feel' n 'pain' ringing in her ears….she forgot all about losing the game….she couldn't contain herself n just hugged yuvi tightly….yuvi hugged her too….unaware of the outside world….they were in their own world….a world in which only ashi n yuvi belonged….a world so beautiful…so nice…so wonderful..

"thanks yuvi…its very nice of….
Before she could complete the sentence….yuvi stopped her "shhhhh…"
Ashi looked at him n shut her eyes…she had not experienced such a moment….she dreamed of it all the time n now finally it was here…..yuvi moved forward to kiss her but….something made him not do it…he did not want to take advantage of ashi's mental state….he didn't want her to regret it later….
He slowly kissed her forehead n whispered…
" You are still the best ashi….."

ashi just blushed….n they were interrupted by ranveer n tia…yuvi hastily got up

R: ashi aap theek toh hai nah???….
A: ya thakur….im fine…
R: losing is a part n parcel of the game rite?!!
A: ya….it was just not my day today n….n anywayz im still the best…."
Ashi looked at yuvi while saying this….n yuvi just nodded n gave his adorable smile…
Ashi got up n started packing her stuff
Y: ashi…
A: yuvi chill!!!…im fine…
Y: ur sure
A: yes physco….chale…
R: ya lets go…
A: u guys go….i'll just pack n come….
Yuvi was walking when ashi came n caught his hand
A: thanks so much yuvi…it was really nice of u…
She hugged him….n yuvi hugged her back….he didn't want this moment to ever end….lost in each others arms….it was…bliss!!!!
R: yuvi ..hum…agar aap ruk…toh….aa….chale??!
Yuvi has embarrassed n walked out quickly ….ranveer smirked at ashi n ashi gave a wht-now-thakur shrug expression….







Edited by srkm - 26 March 2006 at 7:22am

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its lovely Clap
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Embarrassed wow!!!!!!!!!

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