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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 46)

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GR8 GOIN MITALI (HOPE GOT UR NAME RITE)

BTW WHT ABT TIA'S DAD N SONIYA RAY?

N DOSENT RANVIR WORK FOR TIA'S DAD ANYMORE.?

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SANGEET

After the mehendi…everybody went to their own house to get some rest so that they could make the most of the sangeet….
The sangeet was very enjoyable event….their were two groups…the girls side…n the boys side…all the girls were on tia's side including vasu…n the boys on one side supported ranveer…there was chatter….music…teasing…dance…n odles of fun… the place was authentically decorated n there was only family n close friends so it was a small gathering…n thus more enjoyable…it was like a maurya reunion…wid just another few non maurians here n there…


SKIT

Y: hello ladies n gentlemen…please may I have ur attention…now we r going to have a small presentation, based on the sangham of the cutest couple I know…so sit back n enjoy…
( tia n ranveer are shocked hearing this announcement…becoz they hadn't expected any such skit….meher n sid do the talking)
M: yes…I am meher n ill take u back memory lane…it all started in maurya…the college they spend the best years of their life…but hey it wasn't love at first sight…but ya I would deny the attraction on seeing each other…
sid: yes this jodi which seems so wonderfully in love now…once hated each other…for one thought one was a dihathi- a camel…n they other thought that she was a brat wid no feelings for anyone besides for her hair…

m: yes but then there was more to it…ya u all guessed it rite..then love happened…
ashi n yuvi come centre stage n…n sung n danced on…

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

pehla nasha...pehla khumaar

meher: ohh par…wid the pyaar…there was a few misunderstandings…
sid: yes aur tab tia aur ranveer ka hal kuch is jasa tha…
(vrinda n aman come on the stage…they sit sadly while the song plays)

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba

Jaate jaate koyi meri khushiyon ko le gaya
Suni suni akhiyon ko gham, koyi de gaya
Aas jo lagaayi hai, aankh bhar aayi hai
Aas jo lagaayi hai, aankh bhar aayi hai
Itna bhi koyi, sataaye na rabba

Dil lene waale pe zor nahin chalta
Pyaar ka ye sikka, kahin aur nahin chalta
Yaad teri aayi hai, tu harjaai hai
Itna bhi koyi tadpaaye na rabba

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba

Meher: well this song desribes their condition perfectly…ranveer came into tia's life n brought happiness but when he left her wid tears…
Sid: but ya ranveer culdnt forget tia either… Pyaar ka ye sikka, kahin aur nahin chalta rite…
Meher: but well destiny had to get them together again after 10 yrs…

( varun n vasu come n perform on this one…well by perform I mean u cant dance on dis song but they act it out)

tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
kehna kabhi to mera maan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak jaayen

meher: n now finally they r getting married...
sid: n the only song I can think…which ranveer will tell tia is…n tia n ranveer u have to join us all in this song…dj…

(all of them…ashi , yuvi, vrinda, varun , pri , meher, sid , vasu, aman n all of them pull tia n ranveer n sonia n sumit ahuja )

Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Diyaan Pudiyaan
Ye Munde Gali Ke Gunde
Ye Kudiyan Nashe Diyan Pudiyan
Ye Munde Gali Ke Gunde
Nashe Diyan Pudiyan
Gali Ke Gunde

Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori, Aayenge Tere Sajna
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna, O Ho, O Ho
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Ye Dil Ki Baat Apne, Dil Mein Dabake Rakhna
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna


N they all dance to the whole song…



Edited by srkm - 04 June 2006 at 1:39pm

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Posted: 04 June 2006 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
well lizzie (thtz ur name rite?)...ranveer doesnt work wid sumit...he works wid yuvi in a firm as finicial advisors...soniya n sumit r good frds but not 2gether...as of now...

anywayz thkz so much for the pm remixgalgenz n bubli1234
...im really touched n appreiciate it all...bubli i hope ur awake n can check dis part out...

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The party raps up in sometime after that…only close friends are all sitting together n having dinner…
Tia n ranveer thanked them all for preparing such a wonderful skit…
T: tia is so touched all u guys…it was very sweet of u all…
R: ya it is guys…I wasn't expecting u guys 2 do anything like this…
A: well thakur we r always filled wid suprises…
T: ya n wht a wonderful surprise…
S: ya but the whole credit should go to vrinda for writing the script n all…totally her brain to all this…
T: ya really sid…how sweet vrinda…
V: well anything for friends tia…
R: thanks a lot vrinda…u made this eveing more memorable…
Pri: so jiju…carry lods of cash wid u tomorrow allrite!
R (innocently): why pri?
Meher: arey wat why ranveer…stop acting innocent…ur our jiju…n u hv to give us money if u want ur shoes…
R: ohh shoes…don't worry…all my salli's will get money…
Yuvi: hey dude…roko…inke jhal mein kitna jaldi faas gaye…wht nonsense…u'll wont get any money….
Varun: ya…n first try choroing the shoes from us then ask for money…
Sid: ya…we wont let u girls take away the shoes…
Ashi: ohh ya…u guys r underestimating us…joote toh hum chora kar rahege…no one can stop us…
Varun: ashi, but don't be over confident…joote toh aap logo ko nahi milage…
Meher: ya..ya we'll see
Y: ya we'll see....be prepared to lose girls…
A: haaaa…dream on…
Vrinda: jiju…wat do u say…ull give us money or no?
R: hmnn…if u can take away the shoes from them …then I will give u all how much money ull ask for...
Vasu: hey kuch bhi bhai…aap ko paise toh denehe honge…
R: vasu..ur suppose 2 be helping me…ur my sister…ur got 2 be on my side n protect my shoes…not on tia's side…
V: nahi bhai…I take tia di as my sister… so im on her side…ill get money being on her side…wht will I get being on ur side?
R: arey vasu…how can u do this??...ur suppose 2 help me not tia…
Tia: arey ranveer…why help u…she will help tia…n all the girls…she wont be alone on da boys side n miss on the money too…
V: exactly…im on tia di's side…
S: wah…look at u vasu…dhokebas…
Y: ranveer ur sis toh changed sides only…
R: wht to do yuvi…ye ladikeya hoti he aase hai…
He smirked at tia, saying this…
Y: u bet bro…
A: well atleast ladko si better hote hai…
N she punched uv in the stomach n walked away wid the girls…
Y: uff!...gosh…she is strong
R: well she is from the outside but inside her is a very emotional girl residing who loves u a lot
Y: u think so ranveer…
R: im sure of tht baanaa
Y: par phir why doesn't she except it…
R: well she is scared… n u uv will have to help her get over her hesitation n face the fact…
Y: ya but it wont be easy to make her overcome this…
R: love doesn't come easily…u have to make ur way through it all
Y: ya I guess ur rite…ill see what I can do from my side…n leave the rest 2 her…



Edited by srkm - 04 June 2006 at 1:53pm

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its very nice plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the next part soon asap.
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It was 1.30 n everyone had finished eating their dinner……
Sa: okay all of u thank u soo much for everything….all ur help,the wonderful skit…..i hv jus one last request plzzz be on time for the wedding tomorrow…..gnite all of u…..
T: pappaa ur leaving….
Sa: yes princess u youngsters sit n enjoy……we are going…..
R: ull must be tired nah……
Sa: yaaa……okay byeee bt dnt make it too late haan ranveer….
R: yes uncle….dnt worry…..will drop her in an hour or soo….
Sa: okay byee gnite….im taking the driver…..
R: yaa okay we dnt need him….ill drive….
T: byeee papaa….
Now it was more like all the guys were sitting on one side n the girls on the other….
Y: so dude ur finally getting married tomorw…..
Sid: ur last night as a bachelor…..n thn kal se ur a baali ka bakra……
Varun: yaa man ull hv to handle it all….mood swings,
Y : bad hair days , shopping spree…. Blah blah
R: thank u soo much…..thts all tht I need to hear from u guys……kya support system hai mera….
Y: aab tumhe aur kya kahein…..bake sab to tumhe patta he hai…..
S: yaa man ur the guru of romance….
V: the jack of all traits….
R: jus becoz im getting married first u guys r saying all this….
Aman: I always knew u would be the one to get married first…..
R: arree aisee kaise….
On the other side the girls were teasing tia…..
A: soo timbo…now ur gonna be someones wife…..bechara ranveer!!
T: ashiiii stop calling me a timboo…..u punk…..
A: let me irritate u one last day as tia ahuja……aftr tht u will be mrs.ranveer sissodia…..then u will say… tia sissodia honaa koi aise waise baat nahi hai
Vrinda: ashi!
T: stop it u guys……meher pri help yaa…..
M: hnnmm…now we will have to take ranveers permission to meet u….
P: yaaa……after all hes ur husband….paati parmeshwar……
They all burst out laughing……        &a mp;n bsp;         &a mp;n bsp;         &a mp;n bsp;      
The guys walked towards were all the girls were sitting….
Y: okay wht was tht laugh all abt…..girls……
Vasu: not meant for ur ears…..yuvi…..
T: lets go ranveer I cant handle this anymore……
R: yaaa its getting late…..
They all are in the lobby waiting for their respective cars to come…..
R: ashii how u going home….aunty must have taken the car nah….
A: ya no probs vrinda n aman can drop me…..
Y: I can drop u…..it will be the other way round for them…..
R: yaaa ashii im sure yuvi can drop u……
Ashi jus nodded her head…..
Y: thanx bro….
R: anytime……bt jus talk…..plzzzz
Y: yaa k gnite….tc….see u tomorrow…..
R: yaaa 12sharp cum home…..
Y: right dude…they hug each other….
Y:ashii the car has come…….
A: ohh kk…..byee thakur….tc….all the best…..tia gnite n plzz sleep okay….they both hug each other….
T: yaaaa….gnite tc…..n plzz cum early to my plc……
A: yaaa okay……
Yuvi opens the door for her…….
Ranveer shows him his thumb…..yuvi just nods back…..
N now tia ranveer n vasu get inside their car……
R: I was so surprised when u guys did the skit….
T: yaaa me too…I couldn't believe it tht u guys had actually planned something….
V: well we arnt all tht useless……
They reached tias house…….
Ranveer got down to open the door for tia……
T: thank u………
R: soo…….
T: soo…..gnite…..
R: ahan wait a min……so how do u fell……abt the fact tht ur gonna gt married tomorw……he took her in his arms……
T:its finally sinking inn…..im nervous
R: hnnmm……hota hai hota hai pehlee shaadi mein aaisa hee hota hai….
T: acchaa ur experienced nahh….
R: aur nahi toh kyaa…..they hug each other warmly…….
T: okay nw let me go…….
R: I luv u……..tia ahuja……
T: luv I too….camel……
Vasu: okay when is my turn gonna cum……im waiting….tia n vasu hug each other……
V: okay so finally u gonna be my bhabhi…….
T: yaaa….
V: im so happy for u guys……tc see u tomorrow…..bhabiiii
T: yaaa byeee…..
R: go in now byeee gnit….he kissed her on her forehead…..

Yuvi n ashi r in da car
Y: toh..today's function went off well nah
A: ya it did
Y: waise u look good in Indian clothes
A: hmnn…ye kya tha?
Y: well…compliment..a genuine opinion
A: hmmn…thank u...n surprisingly im not feeling uncomfortable in the outfit
Y: well but I hate this sharvani n all…the weather is pleasant otherwise I would have died in this…
A: hehee
Y: aur ashi…
A: yeha se left…
Y: I know the way to ur house
A: ohh u do…Im impressed pyhsco
Ashi was feeling akward alone wid yuvi….she was avoiding his eyes…yuvi realized this akwardness…it started raining…
Y: beegna hai?
A: kya?? Pagal ho kya
Y: arey the ashi I know loves dancing in the rain…playing in the puddle…
A: I do par isse waqt…
Y: well at 2 in the morning there are chances of people not seeing u do ur madness
A: well ya but
Y: ashi no but
N he got out..went to the other side n opened the car door for ashi…n pulled her out…
A: eee…yuvi im going inside…n covered her hair wid her dupatta
Yuvi caught her by the hand…
Y: ashi…this is life…experience the beauty of these big droplets
N he swung her around….ashi couldn't sustain herself anymore....she turned around in her place….arms wide open to the rain.....her eyes were shut…it was blissful for her….n yuvi just could get his eyes off her…a car in full speed comes…in the direction of ashi…yuvi pulles her wid a force….to save her…n they look into each other's eyes….first time after the dance….n he is still holding her that it thunders n she hugges him instinctively….n he doesn't hug her back…slowly ashi gets conscious again n moves away…
Y: chale…
A: er..ya
The rest of the drive they hardly talk….soon they reach ashi's house…
A: thank you yuvi…goodnight…tc
Y: gnite…go inside im waiting…
A: ya…bye..see u tomo
Y: ya bye..
Ashi walks away slowly n closes the door….yuvi then opens his arms wide….n shuts his eyes…
Ashi looks at him from his balcony….n starts pouring more heavily so yuvi then gets inside his car…n back home



Edited by srkm - 04 June 2006 at 3:33pm
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Posted: 04 June 2006 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
wow three parts in a day kool yaaar Clap Clap
seriously the kumbhkaan's need 2 wake up
2 gud mitali
luved everything abt all the parts.

btw edit ur topic and mention that there r three parts.ppl cant miss these parts.

cant w8 nemore.cont soon na plzzzzzzz

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