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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 43)

srkm Senior Member
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Posted: 02 June 2006 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
here is the last part of the youngsters party...hp u guys luv it....its a real long one.....

The party ended at 1pm …only the 11 of them- tia , ranveer, ashi, yuvi, pri , meher, sid,vrinda, aman varun n vasu were there….

Y: ranveer dude…the night is still young man…lets do something
R: par we cant stay here longer….the deadline is 1am…
S: ya…but we can go somewhere else nah…
Varun: ya…lets all go for coffee?
Aman: par at this time which coffee shop wil be open?
Y: arey we can go to a 5 star hotel or something…their caf will be open
R: ya we can do that…but ask tia n the rest nah
S: ya baba…we will ask permission from ur tia…chill
R: baanaa mein tu bas…
S: bas bas ranveer…joru ka gulam…
Y: good one sid ;)…lets go ask the girls

S: hey gals…we all want to have some more fun! So lets go to a marriot for coffee or deserts or something…tia ur would be husband has asked me to specially take permission from u…
M: ya thts a gud idea…
A: ya lets go…its just 1am..
T: k tia agrees…
S: yeah!!!!..kool then…lets go…
vasu: ya n there is a qualis outside…so we all can squeeze in there n have a ball 2gether in one car…
Vrinda: haa…sab saath saath…
R: kool then lets go…

They all go in just one big car…11 of them…well varun is driving…tia is sitting on ranveer's lap in front as there is no place behind….vrinda , pri, aman , vasu r sitting behind them…n ashi , meher , yuvi n sid in the decky

The music is on full n they all r cheering away….
T:okay okay guys listen u all hv to be on time tomorrow…..plzz im gonna get so tired n bored putting the mehndi alone for like 3 hrs…..i need u guys to entertain me…..as this person sitting next to me has decided to cum late for his own functions…..
R:arreee I was on time nah nobody had cum bfr we came….toh bas
A: hey bhaguu abhi see u guys r fighting….stop we dnt wanna see a premier of all this right nw….
R: ashiii….btter gt use to all this n this is nt fighting this is sweet arguing n taunting….
T: yaa yaaa sweet taunting

They reached marriot….there wernt too many ppl there juz a group n a few couples….
They all went to one corner of the caf as they were a big group of 11……most of the guys ordered for hot coffee to get over their heavy heads……(hangover)
Tia n ranveer were sitting next to each other trying to have a cozy conversation yuvi next to tia n ashi next to ranveer n then vasu n the rest of couples together…..
T: I think the start was very gud….
R: yes it was n the credit goes to u….it was a fab party….i hvnt been to something like this since a vry long time….
T: ya n the fact tht all of us were together made it evn bttr
R: ya all of them made it…..im so glad….
Y: hnnmm sorry to disturb ur convo……but I was wondering if we guys could stay at someones house together……like a bachelor night out….bt at home offcourse…
T: yuvi but promise me u guys wont go out……
S: yaa dude I think it's a rockin idea anyway all girls r stayin at ur house nah tia…
T: yaa but r u guys gonna be able to get up 2mrw…
Y: tia I promise all of us will be on time….nw plzzz gv ur concent…
Tia luks at ranveer….
R: I promise we wont go out…we will go straight to my place…..n we all will reach on time 2mrw….
A: come on tia let him enjoy his last day poor guy….
T: arey when did I say no….he can do wht he wants…..he doesn't need my permesion….
R: chill chill guys im jus getting married nt going to an exile….
They all started grinning…..
R: hellooo jus stopp it nw…..
T: how mean plzz I dnt tell him anything….ranveer jus acts okay….like he really listens to me…..
R: soo I dnt listen to u tia…..atleast I ask u….
T: ohhh so ranveer u jus go home nw n sleep no boys night out for u……
R: okay…whtever as u say…..his face had become small he was jus pretending….
Y: okay lets go
R: ya okay so vasu whr do u wanna stay wid tia or u wanna cum home….
V: bt bhai I thought tia di said no night out for u nahh….
T: ahan thts right ranveer whr u going…
R: thanx sis thts all tht I needed from u
R: tia stop ya nw so vasu u stay at tias plc…..
V: okay bhai as u say…..n bhai the party was amazing……
T: okaayy tumhe ek din diya….
R: thank u madam mujhe meri he life se ek din denne ke liye hw kind of u…..
They all got up n tia ranveer hugged each other…..they walked together n ranveer put his arms round tia n they were walking towards the lobby for their car to cum n the rest of them were already there….

They dropped the all the girls to tias plc…..it was 3pm then….ashi,meher,pri,vrinda were thanking ranveer for the wonderful time they hd today……everyone said gudnite to each other n went inside tias house n all the guys went back inside the car….except ranveer……tia was about to leave n he caught her hand….
R: tiaa…. so our 1st function went off well…..n all thanx to u…..
T: noo ranveer its because of us……
R: shhhshhh I hd a time of my life today…..n I hope all r dys ahead wl be lk this…..luv u jaan…
T: luv u too…..take care n plzzz dnt be awake till late…
The guys in the car started saying ohhh ohhh n were honking….
R: wait up…..got to go….i hope u enjoyed as much as I did….
T: offcourse I did ranveer r u okay….
R: hnnmm im fine gnite….
T: ranveer she looked into his eyes n she gv him a warm hug……..gnite…..enjoy ur one last day(winking at him)…..
R:hnmm u too, chaloo nw go …..he waited till she went inside…..

The guys went to ranveers house n had a ball wid all their teasing each other n talking abt all the old days of maurya…..they slept at 5 in the morning….

N at tias plc the girls to had a very senti night as they too were discussing their times wid each other n nw one amongst them ws getting married….they slept at 4am…..
Everyone was so tired by tht time tht they jus went to sleep…..

And the guys too were really tired n went 2 sleep atlast….


so this was their 1st function wl write abt the mehndi n sangeet tomorw.....hp u enjoy.....




Edited by srkm - 02 June 2006 at 1:57pm

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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the next part soon fast asap.
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its really good Mitali,Clap

luks like a real wedding

luving each n every bit of it

continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 03 June 2006 at 4:00am | IP Logged

This is the next day mehendi n sangeet....the nehendi is in the morning at 11 at tias house n the sangeet is in the evening at 8pm at taj lands end (bandra).... hp u guys like it there is a lot more to come in the mehendi......


Mehendi Ceremony


Next morning……it was 10am n ranveer had got up first amongst all the guys….he was making his coffee n he thought of calling up tia
R: gudmorning......
T: gudmorning....u jus got up.....
R: ya im having coffee…..slept at 5am yaar wht do u expect…..wht abt u…
T: we slept at 4 n I got up by 9am n I hv already taken a bath as I hv to start applying mehendi by 11.00…….u can cum by 12.00 or something as my mehendi will take a lot of time…
R: okay…..has vasu got up….as in she will have to come home n get ready nah or she will dress up there only….
T: she jus got up n she said shes cuming home…..
R: ohh k n wht abt the rest of them….
T: pri meher n vrinda went home they said they will be bk by 11.30 n ashi is still sleeping….wht abt the guys…
R: yuvi jus got up….n the rest r still sleeping…..ill go wake them up
T: okay ill send vasu in sometime…..the driver can drop her…..
R: yaa…ill be there by 12.00 okay…..enjoy sitting like a statue….for god knows how many hours…
T: im allready feeling so tired yaa…..anyway ill hang up I hv to get ready byeee
R: byee see you soon….

Tia was getting ready she was wearing a mauve colour churi dar kurta with little embroidery on it…it was simple nt too heavy but still elegant….she was wearing long earings n her skin was luking glowing…..she had barely applied any make up….
it was 11.15 n they had started applying mehendi for her…..vrinda was the first one to cum n thn pri n meher n ashi came….
A: hey tia u luk gorgeous…..
T: thank u ashi….bt my hands r allready hurting…
M: ohh god I cant even imagine hw r u gonna sit through this….
Sa: princess…..dnt worry u will manage…..
T: pappa I hope soo…..ashi where is sonia aunty…..
A: mamaa has gone to ranveers house n will be getting them…..
Sa: yaaa I spoke to her she said shes reaching his house….
T: ohh kk…..

At ranveers palce….yuvi opened the door to aunty…..
S: helloo yuvi….u luking very cute in this shervani…
Y:thank u aunty…u luking very stunning urself…
V: aunty plz help me wid my jewellery…
S: imm cuming vasu…..
They all were finally ready…..s:ranveer we all r ready aab toh bahar aa jao…
Ranveer was wearing a cream coulour shervani kurta n he was luking very handsome in it…..he was wearing Indian for the first time…n everybody complimented him….
They finally reached tias house at 12.30pm…..n there was music playing there n all the girls along wid tia were applying mehendi too….as ranveer entered everybody went upto him but his eyes were only looking at tia…..she was looking like a true princess….tia too was amazed as to how gud ranveer was looking in india clothes…..they both were staring at eachother….n said a lot without even saying a word
Sa: ahan finally ur here…..so how was ur last nite as a bachelor haan…
R: well very gud…..n im sure it will remain this way…
A: hellooo jijuu…..
R: ashiii….
M: bt now u r our jiju…jijuuu…
Vasu had straight away gone to tia….
V: u looking so elegant…..n the mehendi is coming out well…..
T: thank u….see this colour is suiting u soo much vasu….ur looking soo pretty….
V: thank u…..i dnt think they r gonna let bhai cum here u wl hv to go there….
T: no im nt goin he has to come here….
S: okay guys nw atleast let him go see tia…..
R: thanx bro…
S: no worries I can understand ur emotions….completely….
He finally made his way through…..tia was sitting on a swing which they had put in the living room for them to sit…..
R: hiiii……he sat on the swing…looking around….it looks gud…
T: hnnmm……ur looking really smart in this…..
R: thank u….he was busy seeing her mehendii….as she was putting it…
T: here see it carefully n find ur name on it…..
R: hnnmm its looking really good…..n u looking very sweet in this too….he moved the hair from her face which was bothering her….
T: thank u …..she smilled lovingly at him…..
R: this must be soo tiring nah….i told u, u dint hv to do it…..
T: bt I wanted too…..
R: trust me u hv a long way to go…ur gonna get really exhausted….jus do only ur hands….
T: she rest her head on his shoulders…..im sure ill manage n I wanna do it the way it is done…..i jus hope the colour comes…..
R: tht u dnt hv to worry abt as u knw I really luv u a lot…so the colour has to come….
T: yaaaaa me too….
Sa: ranveer why don't u eat something……
R: uncle dnt worry u dnt hv to be formal wid me atleast ill eat whn I gt hungry….
Sa: okay ill jus cum….
R: hv u eaten something….u wanna me to get u something….
T: noo im nt all tht hungry….
R: u wana drink something….
T: I wouldn't mind water……wait I guess I wanna get up n walk a bit n meet everyone…
R: okay….. he helped her get up n slowly held her hand widout spoiling her mehendi…..
Aman: helloo u guys r looking soo good…..
T: thank u……bt this is tiring man….
Vrinda: u wanna eat something…..
T: noo im nt hungry…aren't u putting mehendi…..
Vrinda: yaaa let meher finish thn im putting…..
Ashi n vasu walked upto whr tia n ranveer were standing….af
R:ashii aap mehendi kab laga rahi hain…
A:chill thakur ill put tooo….
T: vasu u wanna put nw or later…
V: ill put it in sometime….u both r looking so good together.....
A: yaa juz like Barbie doll n her prince charming…
T:Barbie doll ashiii……
R: ashi aap compliment de rahi hain ya mazak udda rahi hai….
Y: chill dude thts ashi for u…….
A:yaaa see….yuvi ur the onky one who understands me whr were u soo long….
Y: hnnm jus here…bt u dint notice me only wht to do…..
A: stop fishing for compliments ur looking good too….
Y: thank u ill accept tht…..
Sonia: tiaa beta I think u should go apply mehendi….so tht u can be done wid it faster….
T: yaaa ill jus come…..
R: all the best…..for this accomplishment of urs….
T: thnx I really need it……
Y: kya hua…
R: nothing yaar she kus tiring herself….i mean she will hv no energy left till evening…tht much of mehendi is okay…
A: ranveer….chill ya she knws wht shes doing…..n every girl wants to put mehendi for her wedding its part of the ceremony….
V: bhaii chill……
R: hnnmm arnt u putting….
V:yaaa im jus trying to avoid it till I can….
A: same here….
Everyone was dancing to these very typical mehendi songs……yuvi went n got tia to the dance floor…..they were dancing on mehedi laga ke rakhna…
Ranveer n tia were dancing wid each other…..
T: this is such a relief….aftr sitting for so long….
R: y don't u eat something…..
T: yaa ill eat in a while…..actually u wl have to feed me….
R: sure I will……afterall if u can go through all this for thts the least I can do…
T: stop feling guilty I jus wanted to do it okay….every girl has to….
R: hnnmm chal go sit ill get u something to eat….







Edited by srkm - 03 June 2006 at 4:02am

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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzz continue fast asap.,waiting for the next part.
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its cho sweet

mehendi.. Ranny helping Tia.. Ashi n Yuvi convo

everything is jus tooo perfect

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really love ur fanfic
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continue soon

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 really kool part mitali
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ur fanfic is just 2gud  yaaar .plz cont soon.w8ing eagerly.

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