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hey guys today is 'D' day...n its the youngster party!read on...

June 2nd (youngster party)
Yes this was it…the day ranveer n tia had dreamed of all their lives…
Ranveer's house
Tia calls up vasu
T: vasu whts the scene like?? The both of u r ready or no
V: bas im almost ready n yuvi n aman r in ranveer's room….god knows whts taking them so long…
T: ohh vasu…tia cant imagine being late for tia's own party...plz u guys hurry n come here….
V: tia di don't worry…ill check wht these guys r doing …btw how r u looking?...i hope not tht beautiful tht my brother faints…
T: VASU!!!!! Aaj ki din toh tia ko chodo…n hurry
V: ya ya k 'bhabhi'...be there in 20 mins flat
T: ya 20 mins it is…bye

Vasu knocks on ranveer's room door
V: hello u guys…open da door…tia is already ready…open da door atleast..
Aman comes out….as if modeling on a ramp…
Aman: how do I look?
Vasu: hmnn…6
A: 6??...
V: ya ur rating out of 10
A : not bad…im honoured getting tht from u…
Yuvi walks in…
Yuvi: I give u an 9.9…
V: ohh thanks yuvi…ill give u 7 or 7.5
Y: chal chal bahut hogaya...
A: arey bhi toh show stealer has 2 make his entry…
N then ranveer walk out of his room…
V: wow n my bro gets a 11 out of 10
R: thank u vasu…but I thought u wouldn't even give me a 5….
V: well all ill say,…how I wish u weren't my bro…
R: okay im flattered…ab chale nahi toh meri biwi mujhe negative marking bhi nahi degi…
Y: I feel im writing a math paper
V: haa…I can imagine ur state…u had mathphobia rite?
Y: u bet
A: bas ab chalo guys…
R: ya plz…yuvi aap aur aman aapki gaadi mein tia ki ghar tak aayee…n me n vasu will go in dis car…
Y: k dude…meet u at tia's

Tia's house

T: angel tia's hair is okay nah?
Pri: ya tia…perfect tia…
Meher: tia…whtz wrong wid ranveer n all…its already 7.45 now…
T: tia is so bugged at ranveer…gosh!!!!...how can u be late for ur own wedding function?
P: chill tia…they have come…I can see the car from the window…
T: good..finally!

Tia goes to her dad's room
T: how does ur princess look papa?
Sumit: just that…like a princess…
T: thanks papa
N she huges him
S: okay now go tia…its late..
T: yes papa..u take care n plz take ur medicine after dinner…
Sumit just looks at his daughter
T: what papa?
S: tia I don't believe it tht ur getting married…it seems tht it was just few years ago I held u in my hands…n then maurya seems like just yesterday…but now u r all 24…a bird flying high….n now she is getting married.…n now she is leaving her papa behind…for her new life wid her own family…
T: oh papa…tia isn't going anywhere…im still here…n im not flying anywhere….this bird will never forget the nest her papa has built…
They both had tears in their eyes...
S: tia this is part of life…n I wish u all the best my dear princess…
T: thank papa…tia loves u
S: me too…n enjoy d party..its ur da 2day…
T: ya..bye…tc
S: byee princess…

Ranveer gets out of the car when he looks at tia step out of the house door…aur ranveer ke toh hosh ud gaye…
R: tia u look…I don't kwn wht 2 say…mesmerizing is ur aura my love
T: thank u…but ur late…how can u be late on ur own wedding function yaar ranveer…
Y: tia babes chill…its not late…lets go now…
V: ya tia di…u look awesome…anywayz ranveer n u go in dis car n we all will come in yuvi's car..
R: ya k
T: chale..
N he opens the car door for this beautiful princess…
T: thank u…chalo ab jaldi… 
                                                                                                             




Edited by srkm - 02 June 2006 at 5:07am

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Posted: 02 June 2006 at 5:09am | IP Logged
oay guys dis was the first part of the day...ill post the next part in da eveing...so wait up for tht

n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment guys...i hv put in a lot for dis part n d next...plz comment!!!!!!!!

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fantastic, fantablous,really awesome

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hats off 2 u

cont soon Mitali,

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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the next part soon asap.
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itzzzzzzzzz amazing Tongue
cont as soon as possible
or possibly even sooner Tongue Smile
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Mitali it was really nice! Big smile
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At the party


The music was fast n upbeat wid trans playing….n everyone dancing away…
Tia was looking stunning in her black outfit n it was a great contrast wid ranveers white outfit it looked like salt n pepper…lol…


The music n drinks were flowing wid the bodies of one n all....all hip English n hindi music was playing….it was a perfect eveing becoz of its amazing ambience, music, and people
Y: hey sid dude…we need some romantic music on which tia n ranveer can waltz…
S: ya tht will be so kool…request the dj

The dj announces…
' hey everyone…I hope u all r enjoying the music….'
Yes screamed the crowd…
' now we would like all the couples to dance on this slow number…go on tia n ranveer n the rest…'

after everybody danced on ' u sang to me'…ranveer went to up to the dj…took the mike n said,
' this song I dedicated to you my love…'
n the dj started the song n ranveer took tia's hand….n everybody else surrounded around them…n ranveer started singing along to tia…

Oh - thinkin' about all our younger years
There was only you and me
We were young and wild and free

Now nothin' can take you away from me
We've been down that road before
But that's over now
You keep me comin' back for more
Baby you're all that I want
When you're lyin' here in my arms
I'm findin' it hard to believe
We're in heaven

And love is all that I need
And I found it there in your heart
It isn't too hard to see
We're in heaven

Oh - once in your life you find someone
Who will turn your world around
Bring you up when you're feelin' down

Ya - nothin' could change what you mean to me
Oh there's lots that I could say
But just hold me now
Cause our love will light the way

N baby you're all that I want
When you're lying here in my arms
I'm finding it hard to believe
We're in heaven


I've bin waitin' for so long
For somethin' to arrive
For love to come along

Now our dreams are comin' true
Through the good times and the bad
Ya - I'll be standin' there by you
N baby you're all that I want
When you're lying here in my arms
I'm finding it hard to believe
We're in heaven
Heaven heaven...



yuvi n ashi kept glancing at each other…yuvi so wanted to ask ashi to dance wid him…sway away in love n music just the way tia n ranveer were…the dj played another song n everybody started dancing wid their patners…vrinda n aman, sid n meher....
yuvi came up to where ashi was standing…they looked at each other for long…n then slowly yuvi put forward his hand…n ashi took it…n they started dancing…hand in hand…


The first time our eyes met it's the same feelin' I get
Only feels much stronger and I wanna love ya longer
You still turn the fire on

So If you're feelin' lonely.. don't
You're the only one I'd ever want
I only wanna make it good
So if I love ya a little more than I should

Please forgive me I know not what I do
Please forgive me I can't stop lovin' you

Don't deny me
This pain I'm going through
Please forgive me
If I need ya like I do

Please believe me
Every word I say is true
Please forgive me I can't stop loving you

Still feels like our best times are together
Feels like the first touch
We're still gettin' closer baby
Can't get close enough
I'm still holdin' on
You're still number one
I remember the smell of your skin
I remember everything
I remember all your moves
I remember you..yeah
I remember the nights ya know I still do

Please forgive me I know not what I do
Please forgive me I can't stop lovin' you

All the couple's were dancing…even then ashi n yuvi stood out in the crowd…together lost in their world …n there were mumurs everywhere..the song ended.…n then ashin yuvi realized that the rest were staring at them…the slowly moved away for each other n walked away from the dance floor…

vrinda was very happy for she realized that something had touched ashi…something had reminded her of the times she spent wid yuvi…something had reminded her of her deep down love which was still there for yuvi…
Vrinda could see it in ashi's eyes as she came to her…
V: ashi
A: vrinda…wait…don't say anything…ill talk to u later…
V: ashi…wait…listen!…
But ashi walked away…outside the hall…her heart still pounding....something had struck back at her…n she wanted to think over what had happened…so she sat on the lounge outside…all by herself…thinking…

What happened to me??.....why did I get so lost in dancing wid yuvi….why did that feeling come back…the feeling I had when yuvi hugged me for the first time…back then in maurya…it all came back…gushing down in my memory…all the lovely times I had spent wid yuvi…why do I still feel so scared but satisfied by his touch…when I was dancing…why did I feel there was nothing more wonderful in this world than this…it felt like heaven…I didn't want it to end…couldn't the song go on forever…for this emptiness that I feel now is killing me…

Yuvi was seaching for ashi…everywhere…
Y: vrinda..where is ashi?
V: I understand u completely…but u need to make ashi understand ur feeling…go she is outside…
He a smiled dryly at vrinda n went outside…

Y: ashi…we need to talk
A: yes we do…
Y: ashi…did u feel anything will dancing wid me?
A: yes…a feeling that I cant describe in words…for Im not sure what it means
Y: hmnn…for I felt as if I was in heaven…as if there was nothing else that I wanted out of life but to dance away wid u…n take u in my arms…it was magic ashi
A: I don't know yuvi…what should I say?
Y: ask ur heart ashi…listen to what it has to say…I know u felt it just like I did…why did that happen huh?...ask urself…listen to what ur heart has to say…n remember ill be always waiting…

N he walked away…going back to the party…n ashi just looked at him…for she knew what he meant…though he didn't say it…it was hidden in those philosophic words…a tear rolled down her cheek…

Yuvi entered the party again…ranveer came up to him…knowing very well what was happening…..

R: yuvi…I knew it all along that u still love ashi…
Y: I don't know dude…
R: u do…it was magic…everyone culd see it…the way u two were dancing…I can see ur love for ashi even know in ur eyes…
Y: but I don't think she can
R: patience baanaa…she will…n very soon
N yuvi hugged ranveer…
R: ab chalo…the party is still on…lets rock!
Y: yeah…
R: lets jam it…
Y: jam it?...u mean remix should play?
R:: yeah…remix has to play rite…
Y: ya its ur wedding after all
R: ya exactly…ill tell tia n ashi…remix has to rock tonight
Y: got u bro…

Ranveer goes up to tia…
T: ranveer…u felt it too didn't u?...they r made for each other rite
R: ya tia…n now we want remix to play…please find ashi nah…
T: ohhh remix will play…great…I know ashi will be outside…ill get her…u announce
R: ya okay…hurry..

Tia goes outside to where ashi is sitting…
T: ashi…hmnn..
Ashi quickly wipes her tears, seeing tia..
T: ashi its okay…its just me…
A: I know its you timbo…kya hua?
T: ashi…tum batao kya hua?
A: huh…what do u mean?
T: tia knows ashi… know what happening ashi…tia can see it in ur eyes…
Ashi breaks down n hugges tia…
T: ashi…don't cry…please…think over it n talk to yuvi then…
A: ya
T: this is life ashi…n accept what u feel…don't try to suppress ur feeling for yuvi…listen to ur heart…
A: ya I guess ur rite…I cant suppress my feelings..
T: ya that's my ashi…come now…get up, remix is performing
A: what??!!
T: ya…please ashi its tia's special day…n we all want to play remix…
A: but we haven't prepared anything…I mean just start playing
T: ya…just sing…straight from the heart…
A: okay…lets rock it then…
N they both go inside…where sid is announcing…

' Hello everyone…n now we shall have, the most famous band remix playing for us….yes guys its remix...right here, right now for u all…rock it'
n the crowd cheered them…

they played ' dil ki yeh dharkan'….


Edited by srkm - 02 June 2006 at 10:54am

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