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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 26)

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thkz so much komal...ill post teh next part by tonite or tomo paka...thkz again all u guys!!

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sry for the delay...i was busy n also im losing it for this fic..shall soon end it...dont knw wht 2 write...this part is lame...anywyz, here goes

Part 13

R: tia I think u shuld celebrate….ashi was instrumental in making me realize my love for u…I think we shuld invite ashi n yuvi to dinner 2nite…
T: ya there r true frds…lets take them out for dinner…
R: okay….ill tell yuvi n ashi
T: yup…nw if u don't mind dropping me to work…the fashion week is juzz a month away…
R: yes

Night
All 4 of them gather n yuvi raises a toast
Y: this to the most beautiful couple…n their revived love!!!

T: ohh thts my fav song
Y: ya mine too…lets go dance tia…chalo ranveer ashi
R: baana aap aur tia jaeeye…
A: ya I don't feel like dancing…
Y: okay…
Tia n yuvi leave to dance…ranveer realizes tht ashi is looking at yuvi…walking towards the dance floor…snapping his fingers…pushing his curls behind…suddenly ranveer says….

R: ashi aap ab tak yuvi se bahut pyaar karti hai, rite?
Ashi was stunned…she culd remember the time ranveer had asked her the same question 5 yrs back at maurya…she had then said 'never ever'…but tht time yuvi was a big loser according to her…but 2day he was a self – made man, independent, respectable…a thorough gentleman…
Ashi looked at ranveer n then at yuvi in silence…
R: ashi, yuvi is no more a loser…
He said these words becoz he himself remembered wht were ashi's words 5 yrs bk….
Ashi simply nodded n ranveer understood, tht she understood wht he meant…ashi was looking at the floor constantly….. after a long silence, she spoke
A: thakur…I don't know…I knw I adore him…but I dont knw if I can live my entire life wid him…I don't knw how things will work out…I don't even knw if he stills feels the way he did 5 yrs bk…im so confused
R: ashi…I knw aap confused hai…but I knw deep down u still love yuvi…tht physco, tht fake he-man, papa's boy, still holds an important place in ur heart...sometimes u don't realize tht…ur not aware of ur feelings…ashi hum aap se ye nahi kahage ki u love yuvi n thts tht…..dont go on wht I say….its ur process of realization…which is beautiful in its self….u will, trust me, for once in ur life be clear of ur feelings…there will be tht one day…when u will for sure knw if u can spend the rest of ur life wid yuvi or not…n im just waiting for tht day…
Ashi just looked ranveer all the time…
A: u live on hope don't u?
R: yes I do…n I never lose it…never…
A: well thakur tum pagal ho…aur ab forget all of this n lets go n join them…
R: ashi…
A: I will reflect on wht u said thakur…u shuld knw tht much abt me by nw…
R: chale ashiji…seriously wacko!!
A: RANVEER!!!!
N she punches him hard on the stomach….n then they join tia n yuvi.



Edited by srkm - 26 April 2006 at 4:08am

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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 4:11am | IP Logged
sry for the delay...i was busy n also im losing it for this fic..shall soon end it...dont knw wht 2 write...plz tell me shuld i even end it or juzz leave it here...plz comment...
waitin!
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 4:25am | IP Logged
so sweet

the dialouges were real

plz dont dare discontinue it

n continue soon

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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 7:07am | IP Logged
how sweet.........
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 7:11am | IP Logged
it was too good,mind blowing.cont soon.
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 7:18am | IP Logged
my hugs for u yaar
Hug
take them seriously okkk?????
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
thkz guys...special thkz to divya, nice tht u thgt tht the dialogues were real...n sonam luv ya...

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