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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated (Page 19)

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heres teh next part...srry for not earlier as promised was caught up wid soem work n reading all other fics forot to post teh next part

Part 10

Yuvi informs ranveer when he meets him at work n requests him to call tia n tell her about the plan to meet for dinner at sheesha's..

Ranveer is the first to arrive at sheesha's…..waiting for around 5 mins…he sees this beautiful petite girl dressed in a turquoise colored dress…the girl is walking towards him…n ranveer realizes that its tia….

T: hi ranveer…
R: ohh hi tia…u look..er…a…u look stunning!!!
T: (blushes) : thankz ranveer…
R: how was work
T: tiring as usual…where is ashi n yuvi…tum toh mujhe bol rahe the time par aane ko or vo doo?
R: hmnn…I don't know abt them…but I was on time okay?!
T: ya…I guess we should go inside as the table is booked…
R: ya lets go…

They go inside….n after about 10 mins yuvi n ashi enter together…

Y: hey guys…sorry we got stuck in traffic so late…
T: u guys came together??
A: ya, yuvi picked me up as its on the way…
T: ohh k…
R: hmn…so ashi whtz up??….tennis tournament kab hai?
A: long time for the next one…
T: lets order something….tia is really hungry n waiting for u guys, we only ordered drinks…so shall eat puhlezz
Y: sure tia….

They ordered their appetizers…

Y: toh dude, wht will u drink?
R: hmnn..maybe just a barcadi breezer…
Y: ohh ya, u don't still really drink I forgot…
A: old habits don't die easy!!
T: ya old 'good' habits!!
Ranveer just looks at tia n smiles…
A: kahiin pe neegahaye, kahiin pe nishana!!
T: ohh puhleez ashi…grow up!!
A: wht…I was just singing mast mast he saama…did I do something wrong timbo?
Tia just makes a face n yuvi smirks at ashi…n the chatter continues…
R: its so strange nah…. so much has changed since maurya….remix dint exist for the last 5 yrs… 5 yrs back….we all used to spend each day of our life's together…n today we all are so busy wid ur work n lifestyles tht we hardly ever meet…
A: ya…but I think as persons we r still the same…its not that there is any drastic change in me or the way I used to be to wht im now…n the same wid tia , yuvi n u…
Y: ya dude!…the feeling we have for each other…the bond is still there…
T: I know it is…but life has changed…its not the same..
A: oh c'mmon timbo u don't expect life to be just the same rite…life moves on…u meet different people n different situations…thts life!!!
R: ya but ashi, we don't forget the old times , old frdships n relationships…
T: ya…tia agrees…they still remain an important part of our life's…past however, good or bad can never be forgotten or discarded….
Y: ya true…it's the life u lived man…u cant possible forget it…
R: ya…past…always remains…unforgotten actually unforgettable…
Ranveer just gives a blank look at tia…tia just gives a disappointed look…

The rest of the dinner continues smoothly wid just generally chatter n ashi's added humor…

T: ashi can u drop tia home plzz becoz tia didn't get the car?
A: hmn..actually I don't have mine too as yuvi is dropping me back…thakur why do u drop tia…its on the way rite?!!
Ashi smirks at ranveer becoz their plan would work out best this way….
R: ya I surely can…fine tia?
T: ya thanks ranveer.

So ashi n yuvi leave n tia n ranveer just walk to ranveer's car, when tia suddenly craves for an ice-cream

T: hmnn…ranveer lets eat ice-cream…I really feel like eating…I mean if u don't mind…n ur not getting late tht is…
R: nahi nahi tia…sure lets go…

They go to an ice cream parlor near the area…
T: may I have an melted chocolate fudge ice cream , cup…
R: ohh still the same huh??!!
T: well like I said 'old habits don't die easy!!'
They both laugh
T: what will u have?
R: tia im ver full…so…ill just…
T: nahi ranveer, u got to pick one okay?
R: tia seriously im full…
T: okie as u wish...
Tia ice cream looked sinful!!!!!… n tia's expression while eating the ice cream surely showed that she was enjoying it throughly…
T: want a bite?
R: hmnn no thankz…though it looks sinful!!!!!
T: u bet it is…have a bite atleast….
Ranveer takes a bite n loves it…n they end up sharing the ice- cream…
R: ye ice cream toh I only eat up…ill get another one for u…
T: nahi ranveer…tia moti hogayegi
R: ohh tia…another ice cream wont hurt….ill share it wid u..
T: hmnn…well fine…its yummmmmmyyyy!!!!
Ranveer just looked at tia's cute innocent face….they keeping glancing at each other…their eyes meet n embarrassed, tia looks away…. They share another scoop of the ice – cream n finally enter the car...ranveer drops tia home...n goes to bed satisfied wid teh days events!




Edited by srkm - 13 April 2006 at 8:29am

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plzzzz comment!!!! ur comments r the only thing tht keep me goin!! n hurry up allrite guys!
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sweta2005 IF-Sizzlerz
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon asap.
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:31am | IP Logged
awesome .....
great fanfic....well written
please write next part soon.
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:33am | IP Logged
thkz...n specially sweta becoz u always make it a point to comment..thkz so much...

well wake up all those sleeping!!! n commenting on this horrible n long stupid part but do comment
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awesum
totally cool
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