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life through FRIENDSHIP-new part updated

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 5:58am | IP Logged

hey guys this is my firts try at writing a fic....plzz read n tell me ur comments.....

the name is cliche but anywayz here goes...

LOVE IS FRIENDSHIP......

 

THIS IS WHEN ASHI,YUVI,TIA, RANVEER HAVE LEFT COLLEGE N ITS BEEN 5 YRS….REMIX DOESN'T EXIST ANYMORE AS THEY ALL R BUSY WID THEY RESPECTED PROFFESIONS….

ASHI IS A NATIONAL LEVEL TENNIS PLAYER

YUVI N RANVEER ARE FINICIAL ADVISIORS OF THE SAME COMPANY

TIA RUNS A FASHION HOUSE OF HER KNOW.

 

ASHI: BHAISAAB,YE LIFT NAHI CHAL RAHI HAI KYA??

MAN: NAHI,SORRY MADAM AAPKO STAIRS SE JAANA HOGA…

A: OKAY..THKZ

YUVI:HEY ASHI!!!!!!!

A:YUVI TUM!!!!! PHYSCO!!!

They both hug each other

Y: HOW ARE U???…

A: GOOD ..…HOW COME HERE?

Y: ASHI MALL HAI , SHOPPING KARNE KE LIYE…TOH THTS WHY IM HERE WACKO!!

A: RITE…KITNA BRAINS TOH EINSTEIN KO BHI NAHI…( before should could complete her sentence they started laughing).

Y: HOWZ TENNIS GOING?

A: WELL PREETY GOOD…..2 WEEKS TIME MEIN A IMPORTANT TOURANMENT HAI….

Y: HMNNN….TOH THE WACKO IS PRACTISING TO BEAT OTHERS RAW!!

A: SHUT UP PHYSCO!!

Y: YAAR,WE GUYS MEET SO MANY MONTHS BACK …..

A: HAA…..SO LONG….HOWZ THAKUR?

Y: RANVEER BAANA IS GOOD…

They both laugh….

A: YAAR WE SHOULD HAVE A RE-UNION LIKE LAST TIME…..IT WAS SOO COOL….

Y: YA..TOTALLY SUFI!!!….HOW ABT THIS SATURDAY….PUBLIC HOLIDAY HAI….SO EVERYBODY WILL BE FREE…

A: YA GREAT!!!!…..U INFORM THAKUR , SID N ALL AND I'LL INFORM VRINDA N TELL HER TO INFORM TIA N HER ANGEL!!!!

Y: YA K…COOL….TOH SATURDAY MY PLACE AS USUAL

A: YA…..YUVI ILL CALL U LATER…..GO TO RUSH NOW….BYEE….TC(turning her back at yuvi..she rushed…but just turned to catch his last word…)

Y: YES RAWALPIDI EXPRESS… U TC, WACKO…

 

 

 

They both went in opposite directions…..

Yuvi( thinking)…..ashi….wacko!!!!she is just the same…pagal se…wohi irritating jokes , wohi crazy ideas, wohi sound advice …wohi rebel hai ab tak….the magic still remains…..kyun mein ab bhi uske taraf drawn ho??….kyun….nahi….no we just friends…buddies….yes….hmnnn…yuvi u cant lie to urself…..man!! why is she so sufi!!!…..arrrgggghhhh!!!!!!

Well re-union…cool….Saturday…hmnn….2 days to go dude!!

Ashi (thinking)…..physco yuvi!!!!still the same….but no more papa's boy….independent like how my man should be….arghh yeh mein kya soch rahi ho???….kitna time ho gaya ….college ke din…par kyun?…why?? im so glad to meet him??…its be been sooooo long n he is my buddy thts why…..no…kuch aur hai…..those expressive eyes….kyun acha bhi I can read them…..why can I still see myself in them…why???…its all over from his side or….is it???…yes it is….thts a fact…..well now I don't even know wht we feel for each other….mein timbo jaise confused hua ab!!…ashi!!!!

 



Edited by srkm - 01 August 2006 at 9:17am

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well this just part i have posted if u guys like it plzz tell me so ill post the other part....
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thkz uvcraziest fan n nigam_radhika...well im free now n i hv already written the next part so...

PART 2           ; ; ;

Its Saturday evening , everybody is getting ready for the awaited re-union…

Finally everybody arrives at yuvi's place n after all the hugging n the greeting, they all sit with a barbecue lined up in yuvi's garden….

Y: so guys whts happening….sid my man!!..kya chal raha hai???
S: bas dad ki saath bussiness aur kya….boredom..boredom..mein he mein mar jaooga!!!
A: hmnn….aur karo dad ke saath bussines….bol tha nah!!!…boredom thts the word….
S: ahsi u make me feel wonderful u knw….(sarcastically)
A: so timbo…howz T- fashion house going??
T: good!…preparing for the Lakme fashion week!!…I hope to win the contract
Pri: ya…I hope we do…
Vrinda: don't worry…hard work always pays!!!….aur tia ka style…no match
Sid: ya…totally sufi!!!
Yuvi: yeah!!!chill babes!!
Ranveer: tia aap tesion mat legeye….all will be fine
   Tia started blushing a little…

Y: so tennis prac?
A: yeah…full swing….2 weeks left yaar
Y: hmnn good!
V: kha hai?
A: mumbai mein he hai….
V: oh cool… ill come to cheer u!!!
A: thkz vrinda

Everybody then started having their separate conversations in ones n twos…..


Yuvi stared at ashi…thinking.. ashi your so beautiful…u look so cool in such a simple outfit aso…same ho tum…wackoout but sufi….ashi do u remember me sometimes….do u have any feelings for me anymore???

Ashi was also thinking about him….wht must he been thinking of me….does he still like me???….importantly do I still like him???….voh expressive eyes , tht mischievous smile….uff..this physco…noways….ashi get a grip….u guys r just buddies…pals..thts it….n nothing more….

R: tia aap bahut tired lag rahi hai
T: kya ranveer??…dark circles???…is tia's face not looking fresh???….or is it my hair???
R: bas bas!!!….tia relax….u look just fine…actually beautiful…I could just see the tiredness in your eyes….
T: (blushing).oh ranveer….u can still read my eyes….hmnn…tia….ho tia means kitna kaam hai….tia's fashion house has to be the best nah!!
R: yes tia ….but u should take care….ab ke liye sab kuch bul jaoo….kam to hota rahega…
T: ranveer ye tum bol raha ho….im shocked….jiske liye kam is so important
R: tia, work is worship but there is life beyond work…family, frds, aur….aur…hum log.,,I mean ….aur humare dreams, ambitions…
T: hmnn…tia understood…ranveer ur just the same….always there for everyone…always there for tia….

Tia turns away shyly n starts talking with pri….n ranveer just keeps looking at her…..tia aap…itne achi hai…so beautiful , so simple n soooonice….hum aap se ab tak py…..nahi…par aap mein aase kashish hai jo hume aap ke taraf kheech lati hai….uff!!!!!!!…

Yuvi interrupts his thoughts…

Y: hello dude??…wht r u thinkin…
R: kuch nahi….sid chicken pass karna plz…

Tia thinking... ranveer…tia …tia still likes u….tia has learned so much from u…sincerity towards work, honesty, affection…but now tia does not even get a chance to meet u…ohh tia's God!! Why? Why? Why has everything changed??…cant life be as it used to be…why can't I go back in time???why???

A: TIMBLET!!!!!! Hello!!!….drama queen se dreaming queen!!!…wake up
T: shut up ashi….tia to bas rannn…kuch nahi
A: go on….run…race…ran..ranveer….yes ranveer!!!ke baare mein soch rahi this…got u..
T: ashi ur mad….mein vo camel ke baare mein kyun sochu??
A: hmnn….college ka pyaar yaad aagaya kya?
T: wacko!!! seriously yuvi is rite tum sach mein a wacko ho!! tumhe weird dreams….where …where do u get them from hah?!!
A: dreams!??…no reality…face-reading…ashi da great!!!!!!!
Tia makes a face….

S: so tia howz meher??….bangalore mein is she enjoyin??
T: well she has settled down now…but ya she misses us….
S: can I have her contact number?
Y: kyun???sid? meher ke bahut yaad aarahi hai….something fishy!!!1
S: nahi dude…just generally asked….paap hai kya??
Y: no no paap…go ahead…sid my man im wid u….
R: sid, kya aap ab bhi meher is???
S: no dude!…I don't even know how she is?….its been 5 yrs…
R: hmnn
Y : okay guys lets have some rocking music n dance
S: yes rock da party…maurya rockers!!!!!!!!

Eyerybody cheered n danced….

A( thinking): Ohh I love this song…truly madly deeply…its so romantic…I hope yuvi asks me to dance wid him…

Y (thinking): ill ask asi for a dance..its her fav song…she wont say no…yes..


Y: ashi..hmnn…dance
Moves forward his hand….n ashi agree
N they sway away wid the music….into a world for their own…deeply looking in each others eyes….a world in which only they n their music exists….

The song ends n ashi gets a bit emotional….for a few minutes she keeps to herself… n then suddenly...


A: guys….i miss playing in remix…

Yuvi, tia and ranveer just stare at ashi….the word 'remix' ringing in their rings….



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Edited by srkm - 21 March 2006 at 6:21am

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