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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 6)

Anandhini Senior Member

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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
hey nice fanfiction
i think mahak is waking up angad and they both are best friends
continue soooooooooooooooooooooon

Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
continue soon...plz!!
muqualp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
cont soon! i like the story!
purishivani Senior Member

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Hey Guys I am soo sooo sorry I couldnt continue as I was really busy!!
But here is the next part
Part 5

We see Angad getting up. He goes takes a shower and comes down.

Angad: Mahak tum aise yahan pe roj aate ho, I mean to say ki tumhe kitna tang karta hun na. Tum kal se seedha college chale jaya karo. Mein apne aap college kisi bhi tarah se pahunch jaonga.

M: Yeh kaise baat kar rahe ho Angad. Khud to tum mujhe apne behen mante ho aur phir itne formality. Mera bas chale to mein tumhe yahan akele rehne he na du lekin yeh sab tumhare zid se. Lekin aaj mujhe samaj mein aa raha hain ke tum ne yahan rehne ki zid kyun ki. Tum mujhe apna samaj te hi nahi. mein tumhare kuch nahin lagti.

A: Nahin Mahak aisa mat kaho. Is duniya mein ab sirf tumhara he to sahara hain. Acha chalo ab yeh sab chodo aur COLLEGE NAHIN JANA HAIN KYA!!

Mahak's cell phone rings.
M: Hello
Kripa: Hello Mahak. mein Kripa bol rahin hun
M: STUPID mujhe maloom hain
K: Oh sorry. Acha tu kab aa rahe hain mene saare forms fill kardeye. Ab bas tera wait kar rahe hun. Aur han mere ko lagta hain tere ko koi Mr. Chawla dhund rahen hain
M: Tumhe kaise pata
K: are wo koi ladka guzar raha that aur kisi ko keh raha that ki Mr. Chawala tumhe dhund rahen hain
M: acha theek hain mein abhi aate hun
K: Ok bye
M: Bye

M: Chalo bhai Angad warna meri dost mujhe mar dalege
A: kOi nai (new) dost bani hain kya
M: Nahin mere best friend aai hain bade dino ke baad. Aur apna college bhi yahin khatam karegi. Chalo tumhe milaon.

They reach college and mahak spots Kripa.

Angad had forgotten his cell phone in the car so he turned back and went to get it

M: Hey Kripa
K: Hi

Rahul- Mahak and Angad;s friend

Rahul comes up
R: Are yaar mahak mein tumhe kabse dhoon raha hun. Kahan thi tum
M: Are mein usse pick karne gaye thee. Acha isse milo yeh hain Kripa mere best friend aaj hi isne college join kiya hain
R: Hi Kripa
K: Hi
M: acha Kripa tum yahin ruko mein aate hun Mr. Chawla se milke.
K: Ok

Mahak and Rahul leaves Kripa and goes. As Kripa watches them go Angad comes up from behind and thought that Kripa was Mahak. (Kripa has her back towards Angad)
A: sorry Mahak woh cell phone gadi mein hi chuut gaya tha
Kripa turns around and is dead shocked.

So how was this part? I have the next part written down but will post it tom.
muqualp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
gr8 part! why was she shocked? cont soon!
marina k Senior Member
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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
nice update, continue soon. Smile
radha_8 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
continue soon.............luv it
annapurna Senior Member

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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 6:55am | IP Logged
cont soon luv it...................

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