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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 4)

marina k Senior Member
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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
nice story and nice part. Clap
continue soon. Smile

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 6:31pm | IP Logged
thank god!!!! boy, that part relieved my tension, i love the story!!! n i being the local astrologer predict that she phoned mahak in india!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by nabz8888 - 22 March 2006 at 1:55pm
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 7:37am | IP Logged
continue soon its great Big smile
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
i just read ur fanfic!! it's amazing!! continue sooooooon:!!!

take care
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
awesome ff
cont soon
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Hey guys I am sorry I will not be able to continue today as I have other work as well. I will try to continue later but not sure. If I dont continue today I will definetly continue tomorrow.
Sorry
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Its okay continue when you can Smile
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Part 4
Kripa calls up Mahak. Mahak is Kripas best friend since childhood.
Mahak: Hello
Kripa: MAHUUUUU
Mahak: Kripuuu!! what a pleasent surprice. aaj kasie yaad aagayee merii? Kahan se bol rahe hain? Aur sabse pehle to tu kaise hain?
Kripa: bas bas itne sare sawal. Mein bil kul theek bol rahen hun aur America se bol rahe hun aur ek bahut hi importent baat batane ke liye phone kiya

Kripa tell everything to Mahak. Mahak is really excited and decides that she will com pick them up and that they all will stay in her house.

one week goes by and it is time for Kripa and her family to leave U.S.
She says bye to her friends and boards the flight.

They reach India. They all come out and kripa spots Mahak. She scremas MAHAK!!!
Mahak: KRIPAAAA
They all hug.
(I wont get in details about how they met and all?
Mahak takes Kripa, bhai, and bhabhi to her house. They all go to sleep since Kripa will be starting her college from tomorrow.
Next morning
kripa wakes up at 7:15 gets ready and goes down to eat breakfast
Kr: good morning bhabhi
Ki: good morning Kripa. Acha tum nashta kar lo phir mahak college ke liye nikal he rahe hain to tum bhi usse ke saath chale jana.
K: JI
Mahak comes down. They both eat breakfast and leave
IN THE CAR
M: Hey Kripa mujhe na kisi ko pick up karne jaana hain to mein aisa karten hun ki tumhe drop kar deete hun. Tum apne saare formalities puri kar lo tab tak mein aajonge.
K: theek hain lekin jaaldi ana

Mahak drops Kripa off and leaves

Mahak then goes to a house. Opens the door with keys and straight goes to one of the bedroom.
There is somebody sleeping on the bed
M: UTHOOOOOOO!! COLLEGE NAHIN JANA KYA> HUM BAHUT LATE HO RAHEN HAIN!!UTHOOOOOO


SO guys i know this part was boring but in next part ANgad and Kripa will finally meet!! Smile

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