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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 3)

Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 4:18pm | IP Logged

continue soon its great but if kripa dies how can the story go on I think its probably a dream Smile

Edited by unum ali - 20 March 2006 at 4:19pm

purishivani Senior Member

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Dont worry guys
Kripa wont die
Trust Me LOL
Mini786 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
Hey shivani
wats up
great part
plz continue soon
even though i've read it
Big smile


sgokli IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
nabz8888 Goldie

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
wow!!! wat a part!! u have to cont. soon, the suspense is killing!!!!!!!
purishivani Senior Member

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Hey Guys
Thanks for the comments

Recap: Kripa shoots Prithvi and herself
Part 3

The lights come on and everybody starts clapping
Aaliya: Wow what a mind blowing performence guys
Keshav: Excellent guys!! I am 200% sure is saal bhi hamara college hi jeete ga drama contest mein.
Prithvi and Kripa: Thanks guys hum bhi yahi chahatein hain. And now LETS PRECELEBRATE!!

The gang then celebrates and haves fun. When Kripa returned home she saw her brother and bhabhi sitting in the living room.

Kr: I bhai, bhabhi kya chal raha hain? Aur aap log itne serious kyun hain? Koi problem
Ka: Han kripa tumhe kuch batana tha.
Kr: Kya hua bhai
Ki: baat yeh hain Kripa ke inka business aab India shift ho raha hain. To problem yeh hain ke hume bhi India jana padega
Kr: to isme kaunse badi baat hain bhabhi. Chale jana
Ki: hamesha ke liye
Ka: Han kripa. hamne tumhare baare mein bhi socha aur hum is faisle pe pahunche hain ki agar tum yahan rehna chaho to reh sakti ho.
Kr: kaise baatein kar rahen hain bhai. kya aap nahin jante ke mein apke bina ek pal nahin reh sakti!! koi baat nahin mein bhi aapke saath chalunge.
They all share a hug and Kripa leaves to her room
In her room Kripa calls someone. someone who is very close to her and tells her that she is coming to India

Who did Kripa call??
read the next part to find out

Smile Tongue
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
I hope kripa doesnt have a bf in india. lol. Great part! Cont. soon!
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
thank god! i got so scared that kripa died lol....great part yaar and amazing story so far...well thought

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