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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 28)

Gohar15 Newbie
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
u finally continued and u didn't send me the link to the new one that u sed u started so send it to me.

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Posted: 06 June 2006 at 1:21am | IP Logged
thats cool shivani
i red it now yaar
u cont after long
but...........somply fabolous
loved it by heart
kripa and andag are so chweet.........and mehek Tongue Tongue Tongue
cont soon

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Posted: 06 June 2006 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
u finally cont! thank u somuch for cont!
~mira~
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Posted: 06 June 2006 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by purishivani

Originally posted by Pooja922

awww its probably part of their plan...continue soon

Thanks I will and maybe just maybe u are right!!LOLTongue



hahah yup just maybe i am...u  never no though...haha
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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 10:40am | IP Logged
its good. but can you write more in english than hindi. pleaseeeeee!!!! i only know a little bit of hindi so... but other than that the characters seems really good. Smile
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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
heyy the part was gr8!!!....plzz continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
i jst read the whole thing. Its soo good, uve done really good. aww continue soon Clap Clap
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Posted: 18 June 2006 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Part 18
A: Are yaar what happend to the lights now???
K: koi baat nahin Angad tum tehro mein dekhte hun
A: Are tum kya dekho ge???

Just then someone bumps into Angad. And with just one touch he knew who that person was. ANd he yelled

A: DADIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

And the lights come on

D: my child!!! Tumne hum ko pehchan kaise liya?
A: Dadi aapko pehchan ne ke liye mujhe aankhon ki zarorrat nahin hain
D: Angad I am sooo happy to see you happy today!!
A: yes dadi I am very happy today!! And thats because I am finally getting married to the person whom I love. Acha chaloye na dadi sagai ki rasam puri karte hain
D: Hai ram look at you! tere ko itni jaldi kyun hain kripa kahin bhagi nahin jaa rahin!!
Angad all blushing now: Nahin dadi mein to wo iss liye keh raha tha kahin Kripa apna irada na badal de
Dadi and Kripa: Angad tum kabhi nahin sudhroo ge
D: But Angad I am sorry you will haev to wait for another 20 minutes.
A: 20 MINUTES!! DADI THATS LIKE 20 YEARS
D: Very funny Anagad!! Actaully mein jaab airport se yahaan aa rahi thi to meri car kharab ho gayee. Aur usse raste se achanak mere friend ka beta guzar raha tha to usi ne mujhe lift de hain
A: Acha dadi to apne usse aaj invite kyun nahin kiya?
D: Are angad mene usse invite kiya lekin wo abhi abhi America se aya tha to wo pehle hotel jana chata tha and so I told him to come in 20 minutes and that we will wait for him.
A:Ok dadi lekin only 20 MINUTES!!! Uss se jyada aur mein nahin ruk paonga.
And then Anagd leaves to meet one of his friend
D: Hay yeh ladka

And then dadi's cell phone rings
D: hello han beta kahan ho tum mein tumhara kab se intezaar kar rahin hun!!
G: I am sooo sorry aunti mein nahin aa paonga actually koi emergency aagye hain.
D: kya hua bet atum theek to ho?
G: Jee aunty mein bilkul theek hun lekin office mein emergency hain.
D: chalo theek hain phir aisa karte hain kal tum lunch hamare saath karo ge. Ok
G: Deal aunty
D: ok then beta take care bye
G: you too aunty bye

Dadi then goes and informs Angad and they continue with the engagement ceremony.


Wait till tomorrow for the lunch!! Big smile

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