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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 27)

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Posted: 14 May 2006 at 1:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by muqualp

great part shivani! cont soon and sbt the grade thing i guessed cuz you seemed my age, so i thought we would be in the same grade and we are! i didnt mean to freak u out! are ur exams done! you have to cont soon!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks! Its ok !! No, my exams are not finished. My finals are next week!! So i will continue later. I am sorry.Cry

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Posted: 14 May 2006 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
cont soon it's great, i think the otehr person with dadi is rahul kripa's husband i'm pretty sure but let's see
cont soon plz!
~Mira~ Big smile
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 10:49am | IP Logged

Recap: An old women enters and it is none other than Angad's DADI.

Part 17
The first one to spot dadi are Mahak and Kripa and thats because their eyes were stick on the door.
They ran to Dadi.
K, M: Namaste dadi and they both touch her feet.
D: Aree bas bas jete raho. Aur kya haal hain tum dono ke? Kahin Angad ko tum dono ne bata to nahin diya na?
K: Are nahin daadi lekin wo bada bechen hain!!
M: Han dadi wo bechara to Kripa ko yun excited dekh ke ek minute ke liye to darr hi gaya tha ki kahin Kripa apna erada na badal de.
D: Acha aisa kyun?
M: bhai Kripa aapke intezaar mein bar bar darwaje pe dekh rahen thi

All laugh

They all go to a room to plan how to surprise Angad.

In the room
D: aur Kripa tumhare kya haal hain? Mujhe to jaise hi Mahak ne bataya mein to khushi se paagal hogaye. Tumhare jaane ke baad Angad ka kya haal ho gaya tha yeh to tumhe mein he bata saktin hun. Bechara ek zinda laash ki tarah tha. Agar Mahak na hoti to shayad Anagd aaj waisa na hota jaisa aaj hain.
M:Han Kripa jab mein Angad se pehle baar mile thi to Anagd bilkul aisa nahin tha. Mein hamesha sochta thi ki Angad ki zindagi mein aisa kya hoa ki wo aisa hain. lekin mujhe aab aose lagata hain ki acha hua ki Angad mera dost hain kamse kam mein uske kuch kaam to ayee.

SOmeone knocks on the door
S: Are Kripa tum yahan ho. Angad tumhe aur Mahak ko paglon ki tarah dhoond raha hain. Jaldi se aao.
K: Acha abhi aaten hain

M: Chaliye dadi aab us plan ke baren mein

They talk about the plan and then Mahak and Kripa leave while dadi stays in the room because she had to change.

Angad spots Kripa and runs towards her.
A: Kripa tum theek to ho na
Kripa looks confused
A: Are mene socha tum itne khubsurat to koi bhi tumhe kidnap karke legaya hoga.
K: ANgad tumhare tabyat to theek hain ne?
A: Han kyun
K: Kuch nahin acha chalo tum mujhe kyun dhoond rahen the
A: Wo sagaii nahin karne hain kya??
K: HAn chalo

Suddnely the lights go off

Who turned off the lights?

Well I AM SOOOOOOO SORRY GUYS I COULDNT CONTINUEEEE!!!!
I was soo busy!!!!! Well I will try to contniue soon!!! Smile
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 11:15am | IP Logged
hey
shivnai
u continued
yayyyyyyyyyyy
well great part
please continue soon!!!

~~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
good
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
awww its probably part of their plan...continue soon
purishivani Senior Member
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 8:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Mini786

hey
shivnai
u continued
yayyyyyyyyyyy
well great part
please continue soon!!!

~~Mahak~~~

Hey thanks!! AND YES I FINALLY CONTINUEEDDDD!!! Arnt  u proud of me???Smile

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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 8:41pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Pooja922

awww its probably part of their plan...continue soon

Thanks I will and maybe just maybe u are right!!LOLTongue

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