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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 2)

Mini786 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Hey
shivani u started ur fanfic
its really good
and u made me a character YAYYYYYYYY!!!! Big smile Embarrassed
awsome starting
continue soon!!!


~~~Mahak~~~


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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
very nice starting
cont soooon Clap
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very nice starting
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Thank you for wonderful comments. They are really encouraging.

Part 2
Now the camera goes to the other part of the world where a very pretty yet a simple girl lives with her brother and bhabhi.
We see a pretty girl with sindoor in her maang and a manglasutra around her neck, standing in a hall and talking with a guy.
Girl: Tum aisa nahin kar sakte mere saath. mene to tumhe kabhi shikayat ka mauka nahin diya. Tumhe sirf mein he mile thi yeh sab karne ke liye? Bolo! Jawab do Prithvi!
P: Bas Kripa bahut sun li tumhare bakwas. Jao aur apna saman bando. Ab mujhe tumhare sath ek pal bhi nahin rehna. Aur han divorce paper sign jaroor kardena. Tumhe divorce paper bahut jaldi milenge.
K: Nahin Prithvi mein tumhe apni zindagi barbad nahin karne dunge. Tum mere saath aisa nahin kar sakte.
P: Kar kya nahin sakta, mein kar chuka hun
K: To theek hain prithvi agar yehi tumhara akhree faisla hain then I am sorry
   She gets her gun out and shoots Prithvi. Prithvi dies and then Kripa shoots herself.

   So how was this part??
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
amazing story plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Confused did Kripa just die?
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yeh_ada_143

Confused did Kripa just die?


same here, i am wondering the same thing!!!...tht part was shocking thouhg!!..how can kripa die??...ConfusedConfused
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angadlover<3

Originally posted by yeh_ada_143

Confused did Kripa just die?


same here, i am wondering the same thing!!!...tht part was shocking thouhg!!..how can kripa die??...ConfusedConfused


yea...im am also thinking the exact same thing....did she just die? im confused!!

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