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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 17)

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Posted: 15 April 2006 at 5:08pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by nabz8888

oh gosh, take care of ur emergency ( sounds real serious ) n i hope everything's fine. as far as the part goes....it was rly nice! now, i wanna know angad's reaction when he learns abt rashmi, so cont. when u can

Thank you for ur concern but my emergency wasnt that serious. I am glad that you are liking my fan-fic. Wee u will soon know about Angad's reaction.
Hope that its not a bad one!Wink

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Originally posted by Pooja922

omg!!!! continue sooon....please please make the next part longer..... Wink

I will try really hard to make the next part longer. but kya karien I am not good at making longer parts.

But I promise I will try hard.
ThanksTongue

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Originally posted by a-k-fan17

Clap Clap exellent part Clap Clap

Thank you so much!!Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2006 at 5:11pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

Greatpart!!! Im glad Angad is Rashmi's dad. Cont. soon!

Thank you!! Tongue
Keep reading!!

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Originally posted by seeragurl07

great conti. soon

Thank you!!Wink

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Posted: 15 April 2006 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
Thank you guys for lovely comments!!


Part 11
( Ok guys I forgot to add that Kripa has 1 more week of college!)

Kripa: Han bhabhi. Angad ZINDA hain!! Angad ZINDA hain! Aur wo mujhse aaj bhi utna hi pyaar karta hain jitna pehle karta tha.
Kiran: Par kya Kripa tum bhi usse utna hi pyaar karti ho jitna wo tumse aaj karta hain?
Kripa: Pata nahin bhabhi. Lekin usko dekhne ke baad jaise meri zindagi ko ek naya roop mila hain.
Kiran: Tum ne usse Rashmi ke bare mein bataya?
Kripa: Nahin bhabhi himat he nahin juta pai. Pata nahin wo kaise react karega.
Kiran: Lekin Kripa isme tumhare to koi bhi galti nahin hain.
Kripa: Jante hun bhabhi. Lekin us zindagi ke panne ko ab koi nahin mita sakta. Galti chahe meri ho na ho lekin sachai to yehi hain ki Rashmi ab meri bete. Aur iss sachiyee ko aab koi nahin badal sakta. Mein aaj Rashmi se bahut pyaar karte hun. Usse mein kabhi chod ke nahin jaonge.
Kiran: Lekin agar Anagd ne usko accept nahin kiya to?
Kripa: pata nahin bhabhi

And then Kripa goes to her room. She was very sad. Usee pata nahin tha ki Angad kya react karega. Wo Angad ko khona nahin chahte thi lekin Rashmi bhi to uski ki beti hain.. Wo usse kaise bhul jaye?

1 week goes by really fast and it is the last day of college. Everyone is enjoying and so is Kripa. Wo ek din ke liye apne sare mushkilo ko bhul gaye.Lekin uske pareshaniyan itne jaldi wapis aajayenge iska to usko andaza bhi nahin tha.

When the party got over Angad Kripa were in Angad's car. Angad was going to drop Kripa home.

A: to Kripa. kal ka kya plan hain?? waise mein sirf kal ka hi nahin tumse tumhare zindagi ka plan pooch raha hun.
K: Kya matlab tumhara?
A: Well dekho na ab mein tumhe mil gaya hun aur tum mujhe. to aab jo wade humne kiye the, tumhe nahin lagta ki aab hume wo pure kar dene chahiye?
K: Angad mujhe thoda time chahiye. en do salon mein tumhare bina bahut kuch ho gaya hain. Tum to jante bhi nahin mein kis kis mod se gujri hun.
A: Kripa, r u alright?
K: Angad mujhe tumse ek bahut hi zarrori baat kehne hain.
A: Han kaho

and suddenly Angad's cell phone rings. It is Mahaks call.
A: Hi Mahak!
M: Hi Angad! Tum busy ho kya?
A: Nahin to bolo kya baat hain?
M: Nahin wo actually kya tum abhi college aa sakte ho?
A: College? Han aa to sakta hun lekin kyu?
M: Wokya hain na ki Mr. Vasu (principal) bahut gusse mein hain. Log itnna gand macha ke chale gaye to tum madat karne aa sakte ho? Thats only if its ok with you, if you are not tired.
A: Nahin Mahak mein ata hun.
M: Ok thanku bye
A: Bye

A: SOrry Kripa mujhe jana hoga college Mahak ko meri madat chaiye.
K: mein bhi chalte hun tumhare saat
A: Kripa tumne apna chehera dekha hain kya? Ankhe sari laal hui pade hain. Tum ghar jao aur aram karo. Hum kal milte hain. Phir tum mujhe batana ki tumhe mujhse kya kehna tha. Ok
K: theek Angad bye
A: Bye

Angad goes to college and Kripa goes home.

While Kripa is trying to sleep, she is very nervous. Usko badi ajeeb se ghabrahat ho rahin hain. Pata nahin wo kal ANagd ko bata bhi paegi ya nahin. Uska ateet.Jisko janke shayad Angad ki zindagi bikhar jaye.

SO, guys how was that?
Is that long enough? I tried really hard to make it a little bit longer!!
Keep reading!! Tongue
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hey thanks so much for making it longer on my request....its was amazing and so r u lol!! continue soon that was awesome!! Wink

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