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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) (Page 14)

purishivani Senior Member
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Thank you guys so much for the comments. They are very encouraging!!
If you guys forgot whats going on you can go to pg 12 to read it again.
Part 9
Kripa: WOhi to galti kar de mene Mahak. Tumhe bata deti to mere zindagi mujhe kitne pehli mil jaate.

The rest of the day Angad and Kripa spend together in college.
After college kripa takes Angad to her house so she can give her biggest happiness to her bhai and bhabi. But unfortunately Angad had to go to his friend's dad's house for some importent work.


Kripa: BHAI BHABHI KAHAN HO AAP DONO> MUJHE AAPKO BAHUT HE ZAROORI BAAT BATNI HAIN!!
Kiran: Acha hua Kripa tum aagaye!! Mujhe tum se bahut he zarrori baat karne hain.
Kripa: Mujhe bhi bhabhi ek khushkhabree dene hain jise sunke aap ke honsh udd jayenge aur dharti phat jayege!!(LOL_ I DID  NOT KNOW WHETHER THAT MADE SENSE OR NOT)Lekin pehle aap batao aapko kya baatana hain phir meil bolunge.
Kiran: Ancha wo Mr. Sharma aye the ghar
Kripa: Acha kaisen hain uncle? Aur Rahul kaisa hain kab se nahin mile usse mein!!
Kiran: Kripa tumhare liye mere paas ek khushkhabre hain. Mr. Sharma apne bete Rahul ke liye tumhara haath mang rahe hain. Mujhe to yeah rishta manzoor hain. Bas tumhari haan baki hain.
KRIPA SHOCKED
Kripa: bhabhi yeh kya keh rahin hon aap? Mein Rahul se shaadi kaise kar sakte hun?? Aap to sab kuch janti hain phir bhi.. Aur Rahul wo bhi sab kuch janta hain.
Kiran: Kripa tumhe apni zindagi mein aage badna ho> Angad ko bhulna hoga. WO aab iss duniya mein nahin hain!! Aur phir tumhe Rashmi ke bare mein bhi to soch na hain. Usse ek naya naam dena hain. Usee ek baap ke zarrurat hain. Tum yeh kaise bhool sakti ho ke abb tumhare zindagi mein Rashmi bhi hain. Aur tumhe uska khayal rakhna hain.



WHO IS RASHMI?????????????
Sorry guys this is a small part. I will continue later
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Edited by purishivani - 13 April 2006 at 3:52pm

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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
hey
great part shivani
yayyy im the first one to post
anyways i want a longgggg part next tome
lol Big smile



~~~Mahak~~~



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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
awesome part.. Clap
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
omg!!! that was tooo good but who's rashmi? continue sooon Wink
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its great
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omg!!! my predicting instincts tell me that rashmi is kripa's daughter!!!! i think adopted daughter!!!! cont. soon, as i wanna know more!!n keep up the good work!!! Clap Clap
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continue soon..... your fan-fic was gr8..... as always.....

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