Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja922

continue soon!! this fanfic is too good!! haha

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Posted: 18 years ago

Thank you guys for the comments. They are very encouraging. I am glad that you guys like my fan-fic. Thank you so much! πŸ˜› Edited by purishivani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was amazing!!!! plz continue soon!!   πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago

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CONT SOON

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
I just read ur fan fic and i was graet plz cont. as soon as possible.
Cute Angle πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thank you for the wonderful comments.

Part 8:
Kripa: Angad tum zinda ho.TUM ZINDA HO ANGAD!! Tum jante nahin ki mene tumhe kitna miss kiya hain. Aaj tumne mujhko mere zindagi lauta dee. Angad I am soo happy. Mein tumse bahut pyaar karti hun Angad, phir dubara aise kabhi mat karna warna mein mar jaongi. Mein tumhare bina nahin jee sakti.

Angad: (tears in his eyes) Kripa chod ke to tum gaye thi mujhe. Pata hain mumma aur mene kitni koshish ki tumhe dhoon ne ki. Lekin tum nahin milee. Uske baad hum yahan shift ho gaye. Mein to ek dam toot chuka tha tumhare jaane ke baad. Phir bhagwan ne mere saath ek aur game khela. Ma aur papa ko apne pas bula liya. Uske baad to mein bilkul ek lash ki tarah tha. Lekin phir meri mulakat Mahak se hui. Usne mujhe itna sahara diya hain. Ek ajnabi se wo meri behen ban gaye. Lekin Kripa mujhe hamesha maluum tha ki tum wapis aaogi. Aur mera vishwas jeet gaya.

Kripa: Angad AUNTY KA ACCIDENT!! OH MY GOD> YEH KUB HUA? KAISE HUA? OH Angad i am so sorry!

Angad: dont be Kripa. Mene badi mushkil se unki yaadon ko bhulne ki koshish ki hain. Kripa mujhe dubara yaad mat dilao warna mein bilkul bikhar jaonga.

Kripa and Angad hug each other. In the meantime Mahak comes back out and is very surprised and confused to see Anagad and Kripa hugging.

M: ahmmmmm
A: Mahak tumne ajj phir meri zindagi lauta di
M: Acha woh kaise? Aur tum Kripa ko kaise jante ho?
A: yaad hain mene tumhe bataya tha ki mere zindagi mujhse alag ho gaye the jab mein coma mein tha. Woh zindagi aur koi nahin Kripa hain.
M: Kya
Mahak hugs both of them
M: I am so happy for you guys. Waise Kripa tune mujhe kuch nahin bataya warna tere ko bhi tere zindagi bahut pehle he milgaye hoti.


Sorry guys this part was short. I have homework to work on. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part!aawww 😳 that was so cute! cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i rly liked the part!!!it was very good!!!! the dialogues were simply amazing!! do cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was greatttttttttttttttttttttttttt................continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww...how cute! continue soon!!