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Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29)

purishivani Senior Member
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 6:00pm | IP Logged

Hey guys !Tongue
I am a silent reader but I am starting my fan fic called Hamara Dil Aapke pas hain. I hope you guys enjoy it

Characters

Angad: Very handsome, in college. Parents and sister died in a car crash. Has a dadi who live in US.

Kripa- Very cheerful girl. Lives with her brother and his wife. She is also in college.

Karan- Kripa's brother. Very handsome. Luvs Kripa alot. Business in clothes

Kiran- Karan's wife. Luvs Kripa alot and can do anything for her

Mahak(minni786)- Kripa's and ANGAD'S best friend. Luvs kripa like her sister. Is also in the same college as Angads.

Dadi- Angad's dadi. Luvs him alot. But currently lives in US. Will be with Angad very soon.



Edited by purishivani - 18 June 2006 at 11:52pm

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Clap looks good i am gesiing how they will meet
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
Part 1 

   The scene is in the hospital where we see aguy crying and hugging a girl.

Guy: Aisa mere saath hi kyon hota hain hamesha. Kyun har baar upar wala mere se saab kuch cheenleta hain?
Girl: Bas Angad! Aisa nahin kehte. Har kisi ko ek na ek din jana hota hain. Aur accident to sirf ek bahna hain.
Angad: Nahin Mahak mein nahin manta. Mene aaj tak kisi ka bura nahin chaha to phir mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hain.
Doctor: Excuse me Mr. Khanna. Aap please yeh form sign kar dijeye. Phir aap ghar jaa sakte hain.
Angad was really sad. He was crying really hard.

-- Angad's parents and his sister were coming back from mandir in their car. But unfortunately their car had a major accident and all of them died.--

Angad signs the form and goes home. And he starts living his life with a huge emptiness in his heart. His only wish was to see his dadi and cry his heart out in her lap.



     Sorry guys this was a short part. I will try to continue tomorrow. Do tell me how did you like it so far and any suggestions are welcome. Smile

Edited by purishivani - 19 April 2006 at 8:25pm
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Clap Clap Clap nice starting
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
good
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
Nice intro please cont.
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i love it!!! i know u have just started n this might sound absurd... but the characters n the part were rly good!!! cont. soon
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sounds great! Plz cont. soon!

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