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Pyar - the different shades of love (Page 9)

Jaslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
LOL LOL LOL all three parts were funny jaanu Big smile Clap Clap

it must be gautam calling Wink sanya Big smile

bina4u Senior Member

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
awesome dear
*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
rano and Dk have better convo then Disha and dk! Lolz!
nsa4657 IF-Dazzler

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LOL LOL awsome parts!
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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
hey funny ff plz cont soon Big smile
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Part 11

DK walked up to Disha's room

And leaned against the door frame

Disha looked at him

D: don't come in my room!!

DK: Relax…I'm not stupid to cross the LOC

Disha glared at him

DK just gave a sweet smile

DK: BTW…where's Sanya?

All the girls looked at each other

D/R/P: Sanya?!!!

10 minutes later

DK was walking round the garden

Followed by the girls

They were all looking for Sanya

Suddenly DK stopped and Disha bumped into him

D: Ouch!

She pushed him

D: Why did you stop?

DK pointed towards the other end

Where Sanya and Gautham had their arms round each other

And were smiling and talking

All four of them crept up behind them

Rano tried to control her laughter

As she heard all the lovey dovey things

They were saying to each other

Disha gave her a look to shut her up

She then cleared her throat

Really loud!!

Shocked…Sanya and Gautham sprang apart

They turned round

And were embarrassed to see

Disha, Pori, Rano and DK looking at them

R: what were you two doing?

S: Uhh…

G: uhh..the thing was…something went in Sanya's eye…and I was just taking it out…

S: yeah!

P: must have been something pretty big!

The other three tried to hold their laughter in

While Sanya was getting more and more embarrassed

Gautham just smiled

G: uhh… I think I should go…see you tonight…

He gave her a small kiss on her cheek and left

By now Sanya was as red as a tomato!!

And the girls were teasing her like hell

A few hours later

Everyone had made a plan to go to the club

DK and Sanya were waiting for Disha, Pori and Rano

At the front door

They were getting kinda annoyed

Cause the girls were taking so long

Sanya was in Jeans and a T-Shirt

(She's kinda tomboyish)

DK was also in Jeans and a black shirt open at the top

(So you can see his chest!!)

DK checked his watch again

DK: At this rate…by the time we get there…the club will be closed!!


Finally Disha, Rano, and Pori came out

S: Oh thank God!!

DK was too busy staring at them

Well…at one girl in particular

All three were wearing knee length dresses

Of different shades

They had light jewellery and make-up on

And were looking stunning

They came down

DK: Beautiful!!

Disha was pleased with the effect she had on DK

But then DK took Pori's hand

DK: You really look beautiful!!

Pori was ecstatic

P: Thanks DK!!

Disha pretended like she didn't care

They all got into one car

With DK and Pori at the front

And the other three at the back

Disha in the middle of Sanya and Rano

DK was driving and kept looking in the rear-view mirror

(Is that what it's called?)

And smiling at Disha's reflection
*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 May 2006 at 4:22pm | IP Logged

Cont soon!
Jaslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 May 2006 at 4:28pm | IP Logged

aww how cute. Embarrassed

dk's formula is working flirt with the best friend make disha jealous Wink nice LOL

oh yeah forgot the LOC that was funnyLOL

Edited by Jaslove - 02 May 2006 at 4:31pm

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