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Pyar - the different shades of love (Page 8)

Tomiko IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 8:37am | IP Logged
thanks for waiting guys!! Tongue

Part 8

The person smiled

it was none other than DK!!!

DK: Hi aunty! How are you?

S: I'm ok beta,…but you were meant to come in the evening…

DK: well…I thought I might as well give you a surprise…I hope there's no problem..

S: no, of course not beta…come

DK came inside

S: you go and freshen up…your room is the first one on the right

DK: Thanks

DK went

he opened the door

and looked inside

it was a big room with a king sized bed,

all clean and set neatly

DK took his bag of his shoulder

and looked around

he walked over to a desk

and smiled

he picked up a picture of Disha!

DK: (softly) Disha…

his eyes fell on a small book

which was near the photo

curios, he put the photo down

and picked up the book

he opened it one the first page

"My Diary" was written in fancy handwriting

the doorbell rang

Suhas opened it and got another surprise


Disha Sanya and Pori came in

and hugged Suhas all at once

S: arre…you three!!! You were going to come in a few hours

they unhugged

Sa: so does that mean your not happy to see us

Suhas hit Sanya lightly on her cheek

S: Chup! Don't you dare say that again! Without you my life is nothing

all four smiled and hugged again

P: ok mamma, come and look at all the stuff I brought!

she grabbed Suhas's hand

and started taking her towards the table

Sanya followed her

Disha started walking towards her room to freshen up

she opened the door and her eyes fell on DK

she was shocked!

D: Tum?!!!

DK looked up surprised and quickly closed her diary

D: what are you doing in my room?

She saw what he was holding


DK: Uh…uh…I was…nice room!

He gave a nervous laugh

Disha looked at him angrily

and picked up a cushion

she chucked it at him and DK dodged it

DK: hey…wait a minute

she picked up another cushion and did the same

DK: hey!

This time she took of her shoe

DK: What…But…

she threw that as well but DK caught it

DK: Nice shoe…where did you get it from?

she gave him an annoyed look

and started running after him

with her other shoe in her hand

*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
LOL that was funny!!!!!!

Awesome jaanu!
bina4u Senior Member

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
very nice nibbles    LOL LOL
cont soon
nsa4657 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
LOL LOL awsome part! Clap Clap
Tomiko IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 22104

Posted: 01 May 2006 at 3:56am | IP Logged
i'm am sooooo sorry guys!!! i came on I-F with everythign updated...and then i just completely forgot!!! sorry!!!

Part 9

DK ran outside and behind Suhas

who wanted to know what all the noise was about

S: arre…

Disha came out and tried to get round Suhas

S: Disha…what are you doing?!! Disha…

Suhas grabbed her arms

and made her stand still

D: mamma…what was he doing in my room?!

S: Disha didn't you recognise him?
This is Dushyant…you were both such good friends and then he moved to America

Disha was still looking at him angrily

D: but what was he doing in my room?

S: Disha! You have the biggest room, that's why I…

D: but mamma…

S: no buts Disha! Dk is sleeping in your room and you are going in the big guest room…do you understand?!

DK gave her a silly grin behind Suhas's back

and waved at her

Disha slammed her foot down in frustration

and stormed off

Suhas sighed and turned round to look at DK

who quickly put his hand down

S: I'm sorry about Disha beta…

DK: No aunty, it's okay

Suhas smiled

An hour later

Disha came out of the guest room

and went downstairs

she nearly bumped into Sanya and Pori

S: hey…watch it

Sanya noticed her mood

S: what happened?

D: do you know that idiot I was talking about…the one who I met in America

S: yeah… D: well he's the same guy who mamma was talking about…and on top of that…he's in MY room!!

S: What?! But wasn't he Duyshant?

D: Yeah…

she crossed her arms

D: I can't believe such an idiot was my friend

DK Came out

DK: Did anyone say my name?

He smiled at Disha

who gave him an angry look

Sanya looked at him from top to bottom

and Pori stared at him

with her head slightly tilted to one side

and her mouth open in a small smile

P: wow! He's so cute!!

Disha gave her a disgusted look
blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 7:03am | IP Logged

great part! LOL Clap Clap
*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 8:13am | IP Logged
LOL LOL LOL Poor Disha!!!

pLease cont soon!
Tomiko IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Part 10!

DK and Pori were talking in the living room


DK was talking

And Pori was just watching him with a dazed expression

Disha just stood at the other end of the room

Glaring angrily at them

Meanwhile Sanya was going over a bridal magazine

And was trying to decide what to wear for her upcoming wedding

The front door opened

And everyone turned to see Rano come in

Struggling with a load of files

And various types of pencils sticking out from her hair

At all angles

Rano looked up and was surprised

R: Di!!!!!!!

In her excitement she dropped all her files

R: oh crap!

Everyone rushed over to help her

Disha bent down to pick up a file

At the same time another hand grabbed the file

Along with her hand

Disha looked up and gave DK a mean look

Who was gazing at her

With a goofy smile

She snatched the file out of his hand and stood up

Rano had just finished hugging Sanya and Pori

She then gave Disha a BIG hug

R: I missed you sooo much!!!

Disha laughed

D: Hey…we missed you too kiddo…

They unhugged

And Rano saw DK

DK smiled at her

DK: Rano…right?!

Rano nodded with a confused expression

She stared at him for a while

Then it clicked

R: DK?!!

DK: yup!

They both hugged

Disha just rolled her eyes

R: it's great to see you after such a long time…and how's Vedant?

DK: No idea…you'll have to ask him yourself…

R: Like he's ever rang…

Disha was getting bored of their convo

She took Rano's arm

D: Come…I'll show you what I got for you…

R: Great!

Rano and Pori followed Disha

DK went to look for something to eat

Sanya was about to go to Disha's room as well

But then her mobile rang

She looked at the screen

And making sure that no-one was looking

She sneaked out the house

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