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The bet( kyph)~ last part~pg~85~quick!!! (Page 89)

Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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omg!!!! apra!! no more new bad ppl yaar....continue soon!!

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Awesome part! Clap It was so cute! They're married now! Big smile ....but the preview worries me Ouch
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that was 2 cute, cont soon!
hawoo Goldie

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that wuz all of a sudden!!!wow!!!!!i cant belive they r married!!!!!kool!!!!im still in shock!!!!it wuz velly surprising!!!lol LOL cont soon!!!!!now whos gonna seperate ak Angry !!!!!! oh god i have got to stop exclaiming!!!!! LOL
apra IF-Dazzler

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well iam sorry for the delay
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iam continuing my ff rite now
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thanks for the comments i loved them
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part 21:-)

we see angad and kripa hugging and sleeping together under a single blanket......

slowly the sunlight falls on angad's face and he wakes up to see kripa sleeping near him hugging him tightly

angad kisses her forehead

a-(thinking)-- god i love her soo much .... but what if she come to know about the bet... will she really hate me after that ....... i will die if such a thing happens...... but before she comes to know about it from some one else i will tell it to her myself

just then kripa slowly opens her eyes

k- morning jaan tum soye nahi the kya

a- nahi

k- kyoun

a- well u were soo close to me all this seemed to be like a dream

k- ohh and mujhe toh aaj se phele itni acchi neend kabhi nahi aayi

a- accha aur thodi deer sona hai kya

k- kal raat kahan soyi thi main tumne sone kahaan diya tha angad

a- accha aur tum toh aaram se sone deti ho naa

k- woh

a- should i show u what u have done kripa

k- stop it angad tum bhi naaa

then they both hug

a- kripa tum mujhe kabhi chod kar toh nahi jaaoogi na

k- kabhi nahi

a- even when u come to know that i had made a bet on u

k- what!!

a- haan kripa woh baat yeh hai ki*** and tells her about the bet***

a- iam soo sorry kripa but ab i can't live without u

k- (inetially kripa gets upset hearing about the bet ) its ok angad mere liye itna kaafi hai ki u have accepted the truth and been loyal to me

a- well isn't this supposed to be our marriage promise about being loyal and never to hide anything from each other

k- hmmm

then kripa suddenly becomes sad

a- kya hua

k- angad jo kal hua woh humare liye bahut hi pavitr(pure) tha per what about our family will thay accept this

a- well i know this but we can maintain this as a secret between us that we are married... and if our family does not accept this we will disclose the truth to them

k- i think ur rite

a- well iam always rite...ain't i

k- hmmm

a- and now mr rite wants his marriage gift

k- gift what gift

a- i will tell u

then angad gives a naughty look at kripa

k- no angad nahi

a- yes kripa

and then angad pulls the blanket over them... and we hear both of them laugh

1 week later--

angad and kripa now meet daily and angad tries and manages to get his marriage gift every time he and kripa meet....

tanya has left for us and all of then have come back to mumbai

angad is now days busy with his up comming carrier but still kripa and angad are deeply in love

one day at kripa home---

kripa door bell rings

k- zaroor angad hi hoga... abhi usse batati hoon

she then goes and opens the doorand sees a man standing with his back facing kripa front

k- kaun hai

then the man turns his face and kripa expression becomes full of hope and happiness


then kripa goes and hugs him really tightly

k- god i missed u soo much..

p- i missed u too sweet heart

k- prithvi i love u i love u i love u i love u soo much

p- i love u too jaan

k- prithvi tum phele andar aao agar kisi ne dekh liya toh

p- haan agar angad aas paas hua toh

then he comes in and winks at kripa

p- soo how is our mission going on

k- well( gives a nasty look at prithvi) what do u think

p- kripa ur the best

k- i know that

p- i love u kripa

k-i love u too prithvi and i can't live without u

then kripa and prithvi hug each other tough totally in love

they both part after a few seconds and start to laugh

part ends

comming up- soo what is the actual bet???????

hope u all like the part

please don't kill me and kripa is really negative people i know its a bad twist but SORRY

please post ur lovely comments


apraBig smile


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