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The bet( kyph)~ last part~pg~85~quick!!! (Page 79)

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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 2:29am | IP Logged

Originally posted by girlie18

it ws gud bt short mke it lng nxt tym plzzz

yaa i will and thanks

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Originally posted by Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. Clap

thank u

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well thanks to one and all for the coments
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since everyone complained that the last part was too short i have attempted to post a longer part

part 18:-)

after having a big fight with kripa left the beach and directly went to the bar there he just drank and drank to get rid of his frustration the conversation that he had with kripa was still ringing in his ears and then he drank even more to get rid and to forget everything............

just then--------

tanya walked into the place and saw angad drinking then she went up to him---

t- angad tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?????

a- sab kuch bhoolne ki koshish

t- kya

a- wohi jo humare beech hua tha

t- angad ussme tumhari koi galti nahi thi it was....

a- no tanya its my fault all that happened because of me

t- no angad tumhari...

a- tanya main hi zimedaar hoon ki logon ne humari dosti ka galat matlab nikaala.......agar hum thoda distance maintain karte toh woh sab jo hua nahi hota

t- angad maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ki main bhi uss ke liye utni hi zimedaar hoon jitna ki baaki sab

a- nahi tani woh meri hi galti thi

t- angad ab tum chalo tum ne bahut pee li hai

a- nahi main aur peeooga

t- apne aap kop dekho angad tum apne paaron pe theek tarah khede bhi nahi ho paa rahe chalo

then tanya supported angad and took him to his room ......kripa who was returning from the beach saw angad and tanya together.......and got even more frustrated and rushed to her room

in kripa room-

k- angad tumne mere saath aisa kyoun kiya kyoun!!!!!!!!!!!Cry

then we see kripa crying with angad's photo on one hand and angad muttering kripa's name in his sleep...Cry

the next day:------

angad and kripa totally angry with each other were trying to ignore each other even when they were in group.........tanya sensed that there is some thing wrong with angad and kripa and she decided to talk to kripa

t- kripa main tumse baat kar sakti hoon

k- haan Angry

t- yeh tumhare aur angad ke beech koi problem hai kya

k- tumse matalab Angry

t- kripa dekho main sirf yeh khena chahti hoon ki woh tumse bahut pyaar karta hai and please tum usse....

k- dekho tanya tum angad ki acchi dost hogi per please tum mere problem main interfere mat karo please yahaan se jaaoAngry

t- kripa tum mujhe galat samaj rahi ho

k- galat nahi tanya main ab tumhe bilkul theek samaj rahi hoon Angry

just then -----

a- kripa tumhari itni himmat ki tum tanya se aise baat karoAngry

t- angad please jaane do

a- no tanya yeh paagal ho gayi haiAngry

k- haan angad ab toh main tumhe paagal hi lagoogiAngry

a- oh kripa please tum ab mujhse baat na hi karo toh theek hoga

k- fine angad mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tum se baat karne kaAngry

a- come on tanya lets goAngry

t- angad but.....

before tanya could say anything angad pulled her away ..........and we see kripa in tearsCry

we see angad pulling tanya and taking her--

t- angad ruko

then they stop---

t- yeh sab kya ho raha hai

a- woh woh

t- kya hua

 then angad broke down crying and told her every thing about their conversation

a- woh kyoun nahi samajhti hai ki i love her and can not loose herCry

t- toh usse sach bata do

a- woh mera yakeen nahi karegi tani nahi karegi .....i lost her tani i lost herCry

then he started crying and tanya got the whole picture of what was going on and decided to talk to kripa .........

part ends

hope u all like the part

comming up- what does tanya tell to kripa??????? and what will be its effectWink

please post ur comments for the same

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Posted: 12 May 2006 at 6:34am | IP Logged
sad part, Im glad it was longer, thanks. Great job and cont. soon!
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Posted: 12 May 2006 at 6:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

sad part, Im glad it was longer, thanks. Great job and cont. soon!

well tried to post a longer part and thanksEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 May 2006 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Amazing part!
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great part! Clap

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