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The bet( kyph)~ last part~pg~85~quick!!! (Page 104)

apra IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 6:09am | IP Logged

part :-)

angad lay life less on the floor and kripa was in a big state of shock

k-(screaming)-- angad !!!!!! angad

then kripa quickly freed herself from the goons and ran towards angad's lifeless body

k- angad utho please

p- kripa yeh tum kya kar rahi ho

k-(getting up and cathing prithvi's collar)- u why the hell did u do this

p- chill kripa don't get soo hyper look we all wanted this right

k-why we never wanted to kill anyone why the hell did u do this prithvi

p- u want to know why ?????? because i hate him did u get that i hate him and now he is dead soo the scores are all setteled..............but wait not yet kripa

then prithvi stared and gave kripa an evil look

k- what

p- angad is still alive isn't he

k- what do u mean

p- well he is alive within u

k- ---------

p- aren't u pregnant kripa

k- no u are not gonna harm my child

p- well anything to destroy mr angad khanna

k- prithvi please not my child

p- sorry kripa

and then prithvi pointed the gun at kripa's tummy............when someone flipped off his gun from his hand

and when prithvi turned to see who it was to his horror he saw angad standing in front of him

p- tum zinda ho

then kripa went and hugged angad

a- what the hell do u think prithvi i am not aware of ur stupid plan

p- matlab

a- well mr i was very well aware of what u have planned

p- toh kripa u also betrayed me

k- prithvi i din't really want to but it was my true love for angad that i had to

p- true love

k- well prithvi the day i met angad i felt that he was special to me and i never realised as when i fell in love with him

k- his love was unconditional and not like urs that u wanted to use me for ur own selfish needs


when angad had told kripa about the bet in the cottage she became upset and on being asked she broke the truth that she had come to india just to take and fulfill prithvi's revenge from angad and his family

k- iam sorry angad but i really love u and now if u leave me i will die

a- (upset)-- kripa its good that u were true to me

k- tumne mujhe maaf kar diya naa

a- haan and u

k- yes of course u idiot

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a- soo prithvi (taking off the bulet proof jacket which he was wearing)

p- but still i have suceeded in taking ur property

a- u think sooooo

p- yes these papers

a- are not valid

p- what

a- yes the property has still not been transfered in my name

p- sooo u cheated me

a- cheating a cheat is no sin

then prithvi fell on the ground laughing histericallyand within no time he picked up the gun and shot kripa on her chest

p- my revenge is finished angad

angad saw kripa's blood oozing out her quickly picked her up and took her to the hospital

kripa was quickly rushed to th OT for an emmergency and meanwhile the police and come and arrested prithvi

after and hour or soo the doctor came out of the ot

a- doctor how is she now

d- well mr khanna she is fine but due to blood loss we could not save her baby

a- what

d- well we are sorry to say mr khanna that u lost ur child

angad was too shocked to hear this but he thanked god that his love was safe now .......... but how was he going to tell a mother that her child is no will kripa react to this news .......

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well the child was a new bond for their relationship but now it din't exist soo does this mean their relationship will exist to know keep reading the bet which will have some more twist comming up soon

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please post ur comments



blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 6:13am | IP Logged

ohhh i hope a-k stay together!!!

hate prithvi!!1

yay...good to knw that kripa was honest to angad Embarrassed
Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 6:58am | IP Logged
great part
apra IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:02am | IP Logged

Originally posted by blah_blah


ohhh i hope a-k stay together!!!

hate prithvi!!1

yay...good to knw that kripa was honest to angad Embarrassed

well soo are u happy with the new twist but i don't think they will stay together now

apra IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:03am | IP Logged

Originally posted by unum ali

great part

thanks yaar

*dels* IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:06am | IP Logged
oh my god!! i am so happy. i thought u killed angad Tongue nice part. continue soon
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Rocking part. Poor AK, their baby died. cont. soon!
pal89711 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 July 2006 at 9:00am | IP Logged
awesome part Smile Smile Smile
plz make AK stay with each other Smile Smile Smile
continue soon Smile

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