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aaahhh found it yaar LOL LOL aakis step sister
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Hey Hun

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Originally posted by MainEkHasina

aaahhh found it yaar LOL LOL aakis step sister

good!LOL

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Originally posted by aakriti262

 

Part 3

grate part threeeSmile

 

Recap: Aaki, Poo, Julu, prepty, mukti and prem are going to the movies.

me going to movie with preamWink

 

They just enter the car and neeti comes by: they all hug her.

HugHugHug

 

Neeti: yeh tum sab kaha jarahe ho?(jahabhi ja rahe ho waha leking pream hamare sath aaa raha haiLOL)

Aaki: hum movie dekhne jarahe hain!(yehh)

Neeti: kaun sa?(curiously)

Poo:  Hum dil de chuke sanam! (teasingly)LOLgood oneWink

Julu: nahin nahin pyar kiya to darna kya (laughs)(so trueWinkjab  pyar kiya tohh darna kyaWinkLOL)

Aaki: stop it guys! (Feels shy)(sharma kyu rahi ho??LOLLOLLOL)

Prem: huh?(looks confused)(yahh confuced guy kaha se aa gaya?WinkOuchLOL)

Julu: kuch nahin! (hehe)(don't lieLOL)

Prapty: kaha na prem ka mamla hain! (hehe)(prappy tum na buhat tane marti hoLOL)

Poo: Aaki mar dale gi!(i mean nahi maregiLOL)

( all giggles ) and then aaki gets shy!LOL

 

Neeti: aur yeh handsome man kaun!(OMG! YOU  DON'T KNOW??)

Prapty: Handsome nat kaho aaki………(prappy too goodLOLkeep it up)

(All laughs)

Aaki kicks her and gives a lil kick as a sign to shut up!(stop kicking my friendLOL)

Prem: I think I know wht u guys r talking about!(ohh yahhh?Wink)

Mukti gives a evil look!(uufffff get lostAngryLOLLOL)

Mukti: of course u do! Honey!(honey  bolana  ata hai lekin  khud kyu honey nahi hai???Ouch)heheheLOL

Poo: honey?? Ohhh baat yaha tak pugchuka hain(mai keh rahi thi ki yehh kya bak rahi hai??? saram  nahi ati ??? besharamLOL)

Aaki is jealous! And prem looks confused!(miss jealous and mr. confusedWinkLOL)

Aaki: let's go!(tries to change the topic and has a lil bit of tears in her eyes)(aaawwwwaaaaaaa poor youWink)

 We r gonna watch the final destination 3!(no no mujhe tohh  hum dil de chucke sanam and  pyar kiya tohh darna kya  bahut pasand haiWink)

Neeti: wow I wanna watch it too!

Aaki: let's go!

Neeti: whoz driving?(me  i have licenseLOL,i'm older than all of youLOLheheheLOLLOLLOL)

Mukti: me! I wanna!(no wayAngry, tumhara kya bharusaAngryhum sab ke leye tohh kal ho na hoLOL)

Aaki: nahin! I will drive! U just got ur license! So no!(heheheheheLOLthank god aaki tune tohh mot ke muh mai se bachayaLOLhehehLOL)

Mukti: tumse kisne poocha? Waise mere mummy mein mera naam kyon Mukti rakhdiya! Mujhe is aaki se mukti hi nahin milti!(tohh le lo na tumne kise rokaOuch)

Aaki: o well! If u want mukti then u can go….b(Shocked)  apni jaban ko sambaloLOLi'm  your best friend na tohh please bura mat mananaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

(everyone is shocked)(duhhh)

Just then her mom comes and stops!(aunty ji  moke par hi ati haiLOL)

Mom: Aaki(yells) yeh kya aapni behen se is tareke se baat karte hain! Chal idhar aaja! Tu nahin jayegi movie dekhn!(uufff !!!  not fairAngry)

Aaki: I don't care..(she cant hold her tears)(awwaa)

(There is a silence)Cry

Aaki cries and then she slowly comes closer!Unhappy

Prem is watching all this and he doesn't like it! He feels sorry for her!Smile

Mukti goes inside with her too! She smiles to herself and then thinks that she has done a great job.(Evil Smilejulu, prappy, neeti yahhh devil ka kuch karna padegaAngry)

 

Poo: ogod! I hate her! (Evilly)(duhhhAngry)

Julu: yeah she bugs aaki a lot! (Sad)(mukti need to get lostAngry)

Prapty: I feel so sorry for her! Her mom is dead and her dad doesn't even know what goes on in the house! (she has a lil tears in her eyes)(you can not make hamzy bhai evil. he  has  to be sweet and nice couse than he will take your side. don't make him your step bro. make him your real bro)

Neeti: really? I heard that Aaki is getting married soon!(Shocked)

Poo: really? With whom(yahh tell me)

Neeti: I don't know!(awwwaa)

(Prem feels uncomfortable)(why??you want to marry herWinkLOL)

 

Prem: so….r we going to movies?(yahh  kya puchne ki bat hai???Angrydidn't you see that mahabharat)

Julu: No! We r not going without Aaki!(true)

Prapty: did u know that mukti likes you?(pream  forget mukti just stick to...........LOL)

Poo, neeti, Julu all shocked!

Prem:  what?(yahh sorry yarCry)

 

(To be continued)

 

Do reply!

see i did reply

hehehehheLOL

 



so you guys can see my comment in blue.
very funny
keep it up

i hope you get pream soonLOL
any ways don't find some guys for me there.LOLager kiya tohh thappad padega
heheheheLOL

aaki i made a funny comments
read it pleaseLOL


Edited by Poonampatel16 - 20 March 2006 at 6:09pm
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Originally posted by Poonampatel16

Originally posted by aakriti262

 

Part 3

grate part threeeSmile

Recap: Aaki, Poo, Julu, prepty, mukti and prem are going to the movies.

me going to movie with preamWink

They just enter the car and neeti comes by: they all hug her.

HugHugHug

Neeti: yeh tum sab kaha jarahe ho?(jahabhi ja rahe ho waha leking pream hamare sath aaa raha haiLOL)

Aaki: hum movie dekhne jarahe hain!(yehh)

Neeti: kaun sa?(curiously)

Poo:  Hum dil de chuke sanam! (teasingly)LOLgood oneWink

Julu: nahin nahin pyar kiya to darna kya (laughs)(so trueWinkjab  pyar kiya tohh darna kyaWinkLOL)

Aaki: stop it guys! (Feels shy)(sharma kyu rahi ho??LOLLOLLOL)

Prem: huh?(looks confused)(yahh confuced guy kaha se aa gaya?WinkOuchLOL)

Julu: kuch nahin! (hehe)(don't lieLOL)

Prapty: kaha na prem ka mamla hain! (hehe)(prappy tum na buhat tane marti hoLOL)

Poo: Aaki mar dale gi!(i mean nahi maregiLOL)

( all giggles ) and then aaki gets shy!LOL

Neeti: aur yeh handsome man kaun!(OMG! YOU  DON'T KNOW??)

Prapty: Handsome nat kaho aaki………(prappy too goodLOLkeep it up)

(All laughs)

Aaki kicks her and gives a lil kick as a sign to shut up!(stop kicking my friendLOL)

Prem: I think I know wht u guys r talking about!(ohh yahhh?Wink)

Mukti gives a evil look!(uufffff get lostAngryLOLLOL)

Mukti: of course u do! Honey!(honey  bolana  ata hai lekin  khud kyu honey nahi hai???Ouch)heheheLOL

Poo: honey?? Ohhh baat yaha tak pugchuka hain(mai keh rahi thi ki yehh kya bak rahi hai??? saram  nahi ati ??? besharamLOL)

Aaki is jealous! And prem looks confused!(miss jealous and mr. confusedWinkLOL)

Aaki: let's go!(tries to change the topic and has a lil bit of tears in her eyes)(aaawwwwaaaaaaa poor youWink)

 We r gonna watch the final destination 3!(no no mujhe tohh  hum dil de chucke sanam and  pyar kiya tohh darna kya  bahut pasand haiWink)

Neeti: wow I wanna watch it too!

Aaki: let's go!

Neeti: whoz driving?(me  i have licenseLOL,i'm older than all of youLOLheheheLOLLOLLOL)

Mukti: me! I wanna!(no wayAngry, tumhara kya bharusaAngryhum sab ke leye tohh kal ho na hoLOL)

Aaki: nahin! I will drive! U just got ur license! So no!(heheheheheLOLthank god aaki tune tohh mot ke muh mai se bachayaLOLhehehLOL)

Mukti: tumse kisne poocha? Waise mere mummy mein mera naam kyon Mukti rakhdiya! Mujhe is aaki se mukti hi nahin milti!(tohh le lo na tumne kise rokaOuch)

Aaki: o well! If u want mukti then u can go….b(Shocked)  apni jaban ko sambaloLOLi'm  your best friend na tohh please bura mat mananaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

(everyone is shocked)(duhhh)

Just then her mom comes and stops!(aunty ji  moke par hi ati haiLOL)

Mom: Aaki(yells) yeh kya aapni behen se is tareke se baat karte hain! Chal idhar aaja! Tu nahin jayegi movie dekhn!(uufff !!!  not fairAngry)

Aaki: I don't care..(she cant hold her tears)(awwaa)

(There is a silence)Cry

Aaki cries and then she slowly comes closer!Unhappy

Prem is watching all this and he doesn't like it! He feels sorry for her!Smile

Mukti goes inside with her too! She smiles to herself and then thinks that she has done a great job.(Evil Smilejulu, prappy, neeti yahhh devil ka kuch karna padegaAngry)

Poo: ogod! I hate her! (Evilly)(duhhhAngry)

Julu: yeah she bugs aaki a lot! (Sad)(mukti need to get lostAngry)

Prapty: I feel so sorry for her! Her mom is dead and her dad doesn't even know what goes on in the house! (she has a lil tears in her eyes)(you can not make hamzy bhai evil. he  has  to be sweet and nice couse than he will take your side. don't make him your step bro. make him your real bro)

Neeti: really? I heard that Aaki is getting married soon!(Shocked)

Poo: really? With whom(yahh tell me)

Neeti: I don't know!(awwwaa)

(Prem feels uncomfortable)(why??you want to marry herWinkLOL)

Prem: so….r we going to movies?(yahh  kya puchne ki bat hai???Angrydidn't you see that mahabharat)

Julu: No! We r not going without Aaki!(true)

Prapty: did u know that mukti likes you?(pream  forget mukti just stick to...........LOL)

Poo, neeti, Julu all shocked!

Prem:  what?(yahh sorry yarCry)

(To be continued)

Do reply!

see i did reply

hehehehheLOL



so you guys can see my comment in blue.
very funny
keep it up

i hope you get pream soonLOL
any ways don't find some guys for me there.LOLager kiya tohh thappad padega
heheheheLOL

aaki i made a funny comments
read it pleaseLOL

thanks soo much! that waz funny!! LOL btw tumhare liye to readymade ladka hain! LOL poocho gi nahi kaun??

 

love ya!

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