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FanFic!page 9 *NEW*part 4 updated! ENJOY! (Page 2)

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thank you! everyone! LOL

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LOL tumhari aur prem ki love story vah vah kya bhaat hai
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EXCELLENT YAAR KEEP IT UP Smile
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tht was nice ..lol
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Omg Yaar!
Brilliant! Continue!
Really Good!
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You Should really name your fanfic 'Prem Ki Premika' or 'PremAaki'
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Edited by Raindrop - 19 March 2006 at 9:29am
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Recap: Aaki and Prem are staring at each other. And Aaki apologizes.

 

(There is background music while they are staring "pehala nasha pehela khumar……naya pyar hain naya intazarrr….."

 

Just then Poo (poonam) and Julu (juleka) enters the door and glaze at them [prem and aaki]

 

Poo: *ahem* *ahem* yeh kya ho raha hain?(smiles)

Julu: haan haan yeh kya hain?(both laughing)

Aaki: kuch nahin! Sahib jade humse flirt kar rahe hain  (all giggles) (all of them Hug but not prem)

(Aaki looks in the mirror and fixes her hair and makeups!)

Aaki: poonam yeh prem…yeh juleka! Mere bachpan ke dost.

Aaki: poo aur julu bahut pretty lag rahi ho!

Prem: haan!

Aaki: tumse kisne poocha? (Laughing)

Poo: thx yaar…

Julu: prapty aur meine kal mall pe kharida!

Aaki: waise prapty nahin aaye?

Poo: woh bahar gadi mein hain….chal chalte hain...

Prem: waise tum log kaha jar ra ho? (flirtin way)

Julu: hum log picture dekhne jarahe hain!

Poo: tum bhi chaloge?

Prem: umm...(There is a silence)

 

Aaki says to herself in mind! O godddd!! I hope he says yes!

 

Prem: No…I have lots of work…sorry guys next time!

I promise.

 

(Just then mukti comes and then everyone is mad and stare at her! L)

 

Poo: (whispering to Julu) aaj ye kuch na kuch to karegi!

Julu: (giggles)

 

Mukti: hey prem, tum picture dekhne nahin jarehain?

Prem: nahin! Mujhe bahut kam karna hain!

Aaki: o come on! Plz… bahut maja aayega!

Prem: umm… ok! (smiles)

Poo: mukti, tum bhi aareheho?

Mukti: (evilly) duh…

 

Poo: wah! Hum ne kaha to ek hi pal mein NO

Julu: (continues) aur aaki ne kaha ho ek hi pal mein YES!

Poo: kuch na kuch to gadbad hain!

 

Aaki: (feels shy) ok ok stop now! Chalte hain prepty bahar intazaar kar rahi hain!

Poo: ok lets go!

 

(They all leave the room and then they go and talk to their parents)

 

Aaki: Dad, Mom mein picture dekhne ja rahi hoon! Prem bhi hamare saath aaraha hain!

Mom: ok! Magar jaldi aana!

Poo: Don't worry aunty… hum yu gaye aur yuin aaye!

Aaki: ok buh bye!

Prem: bye uncle and aunty!

 

(They both go outside and then meet prapty)

 

Prapty: heyy….

Aaki: hey prapty…(they hug)

Prapty: aur yeh sahib jade kaun hain?

Aaki: oh yeh! Yeh Prem hain…

Prapty: oh! Woh wala prem? Hmm…….

Prem: woh wala matlab?

Aaki: kuch nahin! (pinches prapty) yeh to kuch bhi bakti hain!

Prapty: owww! O really! Sab kuch bata du?

Prem: o god someone explain it! I m soo confuseddd!!

Prapty: there is nothing to explain! Its all about love!

 

Ends in Prem's face!

 

To be continueddd…

 

As usual do reply!!

 

 

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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
wow aaki.....superb....brilliant job...you actually do write well....keep it up and hurry...i am waiting for the next part and to see the chulbuli me, poonam, juleka, you and prem of course!!!!!
hehe.... LOL

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