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Posted: 18 years ago
its really a good fanfic akki keep it upppp buddy good jobbbbb
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Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by: aakriti262


u need to read everyy part to find tht out!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†





ok dear! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Keep up the good work Aaki!
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Posted: 18 years ago
aaki kewl fanfic, very gud job,
keep it up, waiting 4 the next part πŸ˜ƒ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago

Recap: prapty says prem that mukti likes him!!

 

Prapty: (laughing) omg! Look at premz face!! I was just kidding yaar…..

Prem: (feels relieved) Omg! U!!!! tumko to mein baad mein dekh lungi! (gets mad)

Prapty: waise how would I know! She never shares any of her secrets with me! She talks them with hamzy! (she make this uncaring look)

Prem: whoz hamzy! (curiously cuz he thinks that hez the guy aaki is going to marry)

Prapty: hez muktiz friend…omg don't talk about him! Hez kinda weird but mukti and hamzy bhaiya are really close! He loves muktiz best friend prerna! They make fun of us a lott!

Prem: oh…..!! (signs)

Poo: par hum bhi kuch kam nahin hain! Remember the icecream part!

Neeti: yeah! Omg that waz really funny!

Prem: guys ok forget all these ice-cream part and I want to know more about aaki!i mean what happened to her mom?

Julu: oh!(she tries to tease him) U don't know! She commited suicide because uncle had affair with muktiz mom and they had mukti already!

Everyone is sad and prem is really shocked!

Prem: so didn't she think about aaki?

Poo: I don't know! I mean she waz born the same day her mom waz dead! That's y she never celebrates her birthday!

Everyone is really sadd!!

Julu: hey guys lets talk about this later and now we should go and cheer aaki up!

Prem: leave that upto me!  I will do that! (smiles happily)

Prapty: you lyk aaki don't u? (she looks at him)

Prem : yea! I loved her since childhood! But then I don't think she loves me!(he feels really shy and sad…he kinda gets emotional)

Julu: u should go ask her! (but she knew wht the answer was)

Prem goes in and climbs the stairs! He looks back at everyone and says thanks to them! (smiles)

Julu, poo, prapty and neeti are all happy for aaki

Poo: guys lets go and c wht happens (smiling)

Prapty: u mean listen to their discussion in the room! Tht would be unromantic u know?

Julu: yaar we wont let them know that we are actually hearing their conversation! (laughing)

Neeti: omg this is gonna be funnn!!! Lets go

They all are gathered around the window! And they curiously listen to their conversation

Just then prem reached aakiz room! Which was all messed up because of aakiz temper!

She waz crying in the corner of her bed!

And then prem steps in and aaki runs to him and hugs him!!!

(to be continued)

 

Do reply!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ aaaakiiii kya bhaat hai hugs him 😳 😳 😳 u gotta carry on yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: MainEkHasina

πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ aaaakiiii kya bhaat hai hugs him 😳 😳 😳 u gotta carry on yaar

yaar! itz just a fanfic! it would be mind blastin if it waz real!😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by: MainEkHasina

πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ aaaakiiii kya bhaat hai hugs him 😳 😳 😳 u gotta carry on yaar



yup

that's what i thinkπŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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keep it up aaki 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by: aakriti262

yaar! itz just a fanfic! it would be mind blastin if it waz real!😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†



besaram

chupπŸ˜†